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天薇凉UID: 3403940

5.14题目
Task 1. Which of the three occupations do you think is the most hard? (1) Government worker (2) Doctor (3) Police offer
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Task 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should do some part-time jobs before they attending college.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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糖甜甜UID: 3362181

1.语速方面，task1挺好的，task2稍快
2.发音吐字清晰，表意明确。个别词没有听清，task 1中secondly，doctors ？？great responsibility to their patients
3.内容方面，task 1第二点是说doctors owe great responsibility to the patients，理由是adore the doctors who treat illness carefully以及doctors who work on operation for hours，个人认为理由并没有很好地支持论点，建议例子最好是举doctors怎么样undertake their responsibility之类的
task2第二点，when students go to college they have to communicate with people all over the world和后面的so they can learn how to communicate with people through part time jobs的关联性貌似不是很强，建议把两者的关系说得更明确一些；还有建议顺序调过来——students learn how to communicate through part time jobs so that it will benefit their life in college，这样更能扣住题目的问题

天薇凉UID: 3403940

assignment for 5.15
谢谢斑竹的辛勤工作~
Task 1. What do you think about the fact that Robots finish a lot of tasks for human beings. What is your opinion. Use specific reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2. Someone likes to collect old things, someone throws things away after they used it. what's your preference?
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糖甜甜UID: 3362181

天薇凉 发表于 2013-5-15 17:32
assignment for 5.15
谢谢斑竹的辛勤工作~
Task 1. What do you think about the fact that Rob ...

1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰，语音语调好。有个别词不确定我挺对没，ocean exploration还是ocean explosion？,previously require
3.表意明确。挑一个小小的语法错误，task 1的requires people together work应该是requires people working together吧，虽说语法不是考察重点，但是明显的语法错误还是不要犯
4.内容方面没什么可挑剔的

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-5-16 00:39
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰，语音语调好。有个别词不确定我挺对没，ocean exploration还是ocean explosion？ ...

谢谢
Ocean explosion那个我自己也听得不太清楚，我专门录了两次这个地方，但。。。
语法这个我会多注意，多录下来听听赶紧改～

天薇凉UID: 3403940

Task 1. Which type of movie you do not like. Use specific reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should spend money on some projects to encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
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谢谢~~~

luoyu4304UID: 3412283

天薇凉 发表于 2013-5-16 17:59
Task 1. Which type of movie you do not like. Use specific reasons and details to support your respon ...

其实真是不知道怎么评了，比我说的好太多了，实在要挑点毛病真是鸡蛋里挑骨头
task1
encouraging没发对
你说的两个理由感觉有点无力，说服力不强，第一，其实现在科幻片离实际生活也差不了多远了，生物灭绝什么的，这些都是可以预见的是事情；第二，你说cold-blooded machines can't evoke my sympathy,我查了好几个网页词典都是说evoke sympathy是 唤起同情，所以这里应该算是语法错误吧。
task2
healthier发音第一个l发错了，say发的太夸张了，willingness，gradually，image，care都没发对。 内容很好

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luoyu4304 发表于 2013-5-16 21:12
其实真是不知道怎么评了，比我说的好太多了，实在要挑点毛病真是鸡蛋里挑骨头
task1
encouraging没发对 ...

咦，今天开始task1,2也互评了吗？没看到公告呢。。

谢谢你的意见先~

luoyu4304UID: 3412283

天薇凉 发表于 2013-5-16 21:19
咦，今天开始task1,2也互评了吗？没看到公告呢。。

谢谢你的意见先~

我还录了3-6呀

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luoyu4304 发表于 2013-5-16 21:43
我还录了3-6呀

我没有那套TPO，不好意思啊。。。因为才开始准备几天。。。

crazyrobinUID: 2368627

天薇凉 发表于 2013-5-16 17:59
Task 1. Which type of movie you do not like. Use specific reasons and details to support your respon ...

Task 1.
animal extinction 不用加s
其他的没问题。

Task 2.
题目重复太长了。
healthier
gym？发错了
这两点都没问题
注意下有些单词的发音。

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crazyrobin 发表于 2013-5-16 22:11
Task 1.
animal extinction 不用加s
其他的没问题。

题目重复那个我能不能直接说governments should support citizens to lead healthier lives?

crazyrobinUID: 2368627

天薇凉 发表于 2013-5-16 22:20
题目重复那个我能不能直接说governments should support citizens to lead healthier lives?

对就是直接说，别上来卖弄从句 which这类的。听了让人觉得很不爽
直接说 I agree with this statement. The reason I think government should xxx are as follows. 或者说 I think government should xxxx
或者直接说 well government should definitely xxx

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crazyrobin 发表于 2013-5-16 22:23
对就是直接说，别上来卖弄从句 which这类的。听了让人觉得很不爽
直接说 I agree with this statement.  ...

谢谢～～～～
我这两天录音还在想Task2第一句话怎么说简洁点的，thanks a lot!

genie05UID: 30358

你的the, that这些音我感觉都有问题。