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发表于 2013-5-21 11:50:59 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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5.31版本2

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5.31版本3

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T^T。。。为啥子写作那么难~~~

5.25独立写作来啦~

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5.26的也来啦~~

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里面有个被画上绿色波浪线的句子我怎么也找不到错误~希望帮我改的同学能够帮我指出来~~谢谢~~

5.27的~~~

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结尾有点语塞~~希望大家能够给我点建议~~谢谢！！！

5.29的...我用了中立..不知道这样写能行不

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5.30
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5.31
第一次破400字

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发表于 2013-5-21 11:53:07 |只看该作者

5.21的作文...我想了好久的..就是扯不出什么论点..求各位赐教了..
   As a student, it’s obviously that I prefer the latter one, which is university professors’ spending more time educating students. In my view, university professors are ones of educators, so they should understand the meaning of education.
   It’s very obviously that the quality of students in universities has been eliminated recently. University professors’ not focusing on education may contribute to it. In the university, it’s our first time to take participation in one area, so most of students have no idea about what it is. Thus, the best way to connect with our major is taking lessons by professors or joining in some projects with professors. Just at that time, if ignoring by professors, who have so rich experience in this area, students usually don’t know what to do, then they’ll lose any desire about this area
   As for professors, they must want to do research with some good partners. These partners might come from their students if they are willing to educate them. Supporting one professor have no link with his/her students, he/she take every time in his/her research, how could he/she get some new good partners from his/her students? We know that the relationship between professors and students can transfer into friendship, so, how could people become friends even don’t know each other.
   According to the passage above, I’d better agree with the latter.