TWE NO.96 请众高手挑挑毛病！

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96. People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Huge work pressure, rapid life pace, tough schedule, and various fast foods catering to the need of work-class, all of which make people generate a desire of escaping from the stress of modern life. I always advise my friends who are too busy to rest that listening to music could relieve their tense nerve.

To alleviate one’s pressure, actually, is to shift the attention from the work to other places, which is the right function music performs. Some music styles like New Age music could draw people out of their works provisionally. Kitaro, a great Japanese musician, bring people to mysterious orient by his famous “Silk Road”, and people may also engender a kind of illusion to Ireland from Enya’s mercury-like voice. Additionally, most people in their heart have several songs sealed up just for themselves. Not only could people recall the past from those reminiscent songs, but always regain impetus to go on working, no matter what the memory is, success or failure.

Comparing to read and exercise which are another two methods used to escaping from the difficulties of the life, listening to music has several unmatchable predominance. First, people can listen to music with others who share the same flavor, which is hard to achieve by reading. Second, often a specialized place is required to do exercise like swimming and skating, and sometimes weather should be taken into account when playing football or tennis outdoors, while one can listen to music whenever and wherever. The most attractive and obvious preponderance of music is it can be downloaded from the Internet without any charge! Although some people may argue that e-books can also be obtained in the same way, you have to read them in front of the computer, while listening to music do not.

In a word, music is to a person under big stress as a free lunch is to a beggar. Therefore, I believe that listening to music is the best way to solace people’s anxiety and pressure.

qindingsyUID: 140753

快过年了，给大家拜年，当然红包我就不要了，就一个小小的请求，请大侠们稍带角给看两眼！

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刚刚改一篇aw改了一个小时，实在改不下去了~~ :(

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没关系，歇会再说！

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Huge work pressure, rapid life pace, tough schedule, and various fast foods catering to the need of work-class, all of which make people generate a desire of escaping from the stress of modern life. I always advise my friends who are too busy to rest that listening to music could relieve their tense nerve.
开头的风格很不错。简约、直接还不重复

To alleviate one’s pressure, actually, is to shift the attention from the work to other places, which is the right function music performs. Some music styles like New Age music could draw people out of their works provisionally. Kitaro, a great Japanese musician, bring people to mysterious orient by his famous “Silk Road”, and people may also engender a kind of illusion to Ireland from Enya’s mercury-like voice. Additionally, most people in their heart have several songs sealed up just for themselves. Not only could people recall the past from those reminiscent songs, but always regain impetus to go on working, no matter what the memory is, success or failure.
句式用的比较多，但注意多穿插短的句子

Comparing to read and exercise which are another two methods used to escaping from the difficulties of the life, listening to music has several unmatchable predominance. First, people can listen to music with others who share the same flavor, which is hard to achieve by reading. Second, often a specialized place is required to do exercise like swimming and skating, and sometimes weather should be taken into account when playing football or tennis outdoors, while one can listen to music whenever and wherever. The most attractive and obvious preponderance of music is it can be downloaded from the Internet without any charge! Although some people may argue that e-books can also be obtained in the same way, you have to read them in front of the computer, while listening to music do not.

In a word, music is to a person under big stress as a free lunch is to a beggar. Therefore, I believe that listening to music is the best way to solace people’s anxiety and pressure.