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8.21
TPO6 综合写作

8.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To increase economic growth, government can neglect environmental concerns.
DA
让步，经济增长是衡量国家实力的重要组成
但是1.环境同样是衡量的一个标准
   2.环境污染等等危害是不可逆的，或者是需要大量资金来整治的
   3.环境污染会造成社会混乱

今天思路有点混乱了摔==...

8.19
Do you agree or disagree: All high school students should take basic economics courses.
A
1.高中学生的学习能力最好
2.经济学原理通常是用小故事来讲述的，比较容易学
3.经济学的原理是教会人们更好生活

本来傲娇的想拽一下曼昆的经济学原理，百度一下发现曼昆竟然是ETS的考官！！==...摔...

8.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on improving Internet access than on public transportation.
DA
1.一味发展网络会有负面作用
2.发展公共交通才能解决城市的问题，塞车和环境污染等等
3.对于贫困地区，发展交通是发展的唯一途径

8.17
TPO7 综合写作

8.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work.
Disagree
1.对于很多人，他们的兴趣就是他们的工作
2.如果做和工作相关的事情，能得到更大的成就
3.让步，做完全不同的事情会收获不同的朋友

感觉今天写跑题了...写跑题了跑题了题了了==...╮(╯_╰)╭

8.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.
Agree
1.more skills, more opportunities
2.people with various skills are regarded as inteligent people
3.to some major and career, learning of different skills is prerequisite

8.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past.
Agree
1.回顾和参考过去是人们本能（个人角度）
2.回顾历史能够是社会更好发展（社会角度）
3.让步，现代很多问题确实历史上木有遇到过，但是可以从历史中得到解决问题的基本原则

8.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
Disagree
1.如果都是一样的思维和一样的性格，社会没有创造力，会倒退发展
2.很多人都是因为特立独行的性格所以成功了
3.difference可以让人们创新，发展（其实就是第一个论点正面又讲了一遍...凑字数啊==）

8.12
TPO8 综合写作

今天感觉状态好差==...╮(╯_╰)╭

8.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country, a government should spend more money on young children’s education rather than on universities.
Agree
1.大学生有多重途径选择接受教育，使得政府对大学的投资没那么必要
2.很多性格比如诚实和创造力都是从小培养起来的
3.良好的小学教育是优秀的大学教育的先决条件

今天感觉写偏题了==...求狠批！

8.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things made by their own country, even if they are more expensive than things made in other countries.
Disagree
1.寻求利益是人们本性，当同等质量的产品相对比时，显然购买较便宜的
2.只购买本国产品不会能够保护本国工业，相反会造成社混乱，而购买进口产品会迫使行业整改
3.购买进口产品能够开阔人民眼界

8.9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to celebrate major events, it’s better to organize a big party with lots of people than to have a small party where only close friends and relatives are invited.
Disagree
让步：大型活动能够让人记忆深刻
但是：1.人们的情绪很大程度只受自己关注的人的影响
      2.小聚会易于准备
      3.小聚会的时间比较灵活

8.8
TPO9 综合作业

8.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society.
Disagree
1.城市的高负荷工作压力给人们的健康造成损害
2.城市化导致耕地和农民减少，会导致粮食减少，引起社会动乱
3.城市化会毁坏古建筑，使文化流失

8.6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.
Disagree
让步：1.新建筑可以招商引资
      2.新建筑可以解决住房拥挤问题
但是：1.保护古建筑能够发展旅游业，这样可以为城市带来更多资金（新建筑没有保护古建筑带来的利益大）
      2.一味开发新城不保护古建筑会使城市失去底蕴，最终导致空城（居民都走了新建筑也没用了==）

今天换了种方式，就是先提出两个论点再驳倒这两个论点，不知道是不是偏题了&有没有条理==...求狠批啦！鞠躬！

8.5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict.
Disagree
1.和过去相比，现在一点也不strict
2.由于信息大爆炸，所以很多劣质文化充斥我们身边，影响年轻人甚至出现犯罪现象，所以现在rules are not strict enough
3.很多家长让孩子学课外活动或者不许玩什么的，这些只能算作common tendency，不算rule（好吧我知道又偏题了）

今天这篇作业的存在就是为了告诉我昨天那篇一点也不能被称为艰难的嘛！！用时1h又改了40min！！ORZ...

8.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who move out of their native village or town are happier and more successful than those who stay in native village or town for all their life.
Agree
1.城市有更多机会
2.在全新的地域获得成功更有成就感
3.离开故乡不意味着与老朋友和亲人疏远

今天的作文异常的艰难，泪目==...

8.3
TPO10 综合写作

今天这篇综合终于300+了！但是就...超时了==...20分钟时正好敲下第226个字==...

8.2
Should the government support artists or should artists support themselves?
Government should support artists
1.许多传统艺术急需保护，只有政府能够做到
2.政府可以建很多展览馆博物馆什么的，使艺术家、普通市民甚至整个城市都受益
3.一小段让步，政府可能会管制一些文化，但是大部分时间政府管制的都是那些不好的艺术像死亡金属或者是暴力什么的~

revised version：（mo大请戳这里~）

8.1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If a student is having difficulty studying a course, it is better for the student to turn to a friend who is good at this course than to turn to his/her teacher for help.
Disagree
让步：同学直接解决问题能够增进友谊互相激励
但是：1.老师才能更精准的解决问题
      2.老师能够教我们系统的学习方法
      3.只有当同学去问老师问题，老师才能知道学生的学习水平，这样可以造福整个班级

今天的作业太曲折了！45min好不容易写完了发现看错题目了这种事情我会随便说出来嘛！==...
于是下面这篇文章就是改了半个小时强拉回主题的作业...如果发现思路乱窜就请...直接改吧！！（半个小时把300多字改到500多字早知道我还不如重新写一篇呢==...）~~~~(>_<)~~~~

7.31
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is much easier for people to achieve success without their family members’ help now than in the past.
Agree
1.现代更多人接受教育
2.现代第三产业占据主导，产生更多机会
3.当今社会公平竞争，真正有工作能力的能最终成功（好吧最后一点有点跑题了==）

7.30
TPO11 综合写作

7.29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.
Agree
1.politeness is good manner，大家喜欢和有礼貌的人合作
2.impoliteness是把坏情绪发泄给不相关的人，有时会造成很恶劣的影响（电影搜索）
3.politeness不是无条件的容忍，对不好的事情我们的态度是否定的，但是可以用polite way表达我们的态度

这么多天的第一篇agree的文章啊==...以及今天改用记事本写并且没及时的后果就是废话好多！！~~~~(>_<)~~~~

7.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose.
Disagree
让步：稳定的工作等于稳定的生活
但是：1.稳定的生活不等于成功的生活，富有激情的人们倾向于选择后者，并且这些人更容易成功
      2.工作的稳定性是可以depends on努力工作以及和同事间的关系等因素的
      3.即使一不小心丢了工作，高强度工作带给我们的经验在找工作中有帮助

写完发现今天这篇各种跑题啊怎么破==...~~~~(>_<)~~~~

7.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most business people are only motivated by the desire of money.
Disagree
让步：没钱赚的企业就要倒闭了，赚钱是无可厚非的
但是：1.有很多人们是因为对社会有责任感所以do business（charity）
      2.很多人只是因为自己的爱好do business
      3.不应该视金钱欲望为洪水猛兽

7.26
TPO12 综合写作

7.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries.
Disagree
让步 1.科学家可能是唯一能解决问题的
   2.科学家作为名人应该有责任心起表率作用
但是 1.很多发明发现的弊端都不是发明发现本身也不是科学家造成的，是使用它的人造成的（爱因斯坦和核武器的例子）
   2.很多发明发现在当时是积极的，只不过随着时间的发展变得恶化了（抗生素的例子）
   3.发明发现还是积极因素大于消极因素的，所以科学家要积极探索发展...好吧我承认这段是凑数的==

新人报道！求评~
7.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try different jobs before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.
Disagree
虽然通过尝试各种工作能够找到自己的兴趣，做感兴趣的事情会不遗余力。
但是  1.兴趣可以通过大学里的课程和活动获得
   2.就当今中国形势，就业很严峻，换工作很困难
   3.换各种工作是浪费时间，因为每一份工作需要做至少一年才能有深刻了解（朋友的例子）
   4.公司更喜欢具有稳定性的人才，换各种工作会显得不稳定。

第一次写独立作文，赶脚用中文说的很清楚的东东用英文死活也说不明白==...结构方面用词方面语法方面还有怎样表达才能更清楚，估计都要慢慢锻炼了...求来评价的亲狠批！

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