copyzero2 作文破题训练~~

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噗，无力吐槽，我想思路太慢了，然后一急就想不清楚，思路不清就默默写不清楚作文啊，泪目啊。。。0817就考了，555~~有兴趣交流的也可以哈，欢迎大家一起交流~~以后抽空，间隙过来po思路~~

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(1)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should manage their own money at the young age.
DA：
(1) children couldn't control themselves, and they may waste money. for example, my classmate in middle school spend 3000 yuan going shopping; couldn't form a good habit;
be lured by ad. to buy sth.
(2) it does no good for children at the young age to value on money a lot. money is important but not the whole world. eg children who manage money in early time may value too much on money. compare unrealistically：buy sth others have
(3) it may occupy children a lot of time to find ways to manage money; actually, people need to spend more on other quality~~

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2.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It's better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs.
DA：
(1)Admittedly, it is quite convenient for children to choose the similar career as parents'; get more chances to get access to this field as early as possible; have opportunities to be interns in parent' company
(2)However, some factors need to be considered, such as interest.Interest is a quite good to encourage youths to learn sth. A person with his/ her favirote job could get success. eg, sb soak himself into programing, find a good job in QQ
(3) Youths should also take ability into consideration. Though one would like to follow what his parents do, he still need to have ability to do it well. eg sb who hate figure,not captable to find job as accountant;sb of few words, not suitable to be salesman;

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It's better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time.
DA:
（1）people could not concentrate on only one thing for a long time, so several tasks done at the same time can be converted when one get tired of one task.
        eg: review for my final exam（对比论述）used to concentrate on only one course,    but less efficient; review two courses in return, better;
Quite the opposite(正好相反)； Frank as it seems(坦白地看)

（2）people could have a whole time control on all the things systemically;
decide the sequence by pertinence（find whether one thing is needed to do after one another thing）(judge on what is most important, what is emergency)
        eg: time-efficient; performance management；
（3）Actually, in the daily life, people usually have a lot of thing to do together, so they needgain abilities on how to deal with different tasks together

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我最怕考试时作文没思路了，想不粗写啥子:shutup:

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wstfw 发表于 2013-8-2 13:25
我最怕考试时作文没思路了，想不粗写啥子

我也是。。。可是又快考试了，接下去可能写思路多，写文章少吧，嘿嘿~~

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copyzero2 发表于 2013-8-2 16:41
我也是。。。可是又快考试了，接下去可能写思路多，写文章少吧，嘿嘿~~

说滴是，copy00加油哟！

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你还没给我评作文呢

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sundeyichina 发表于 2013-8-2 20:46
你还没给我评作文呢

我给你留言了呀。。。TAT，你就是要看那一篇咩？还是下一次的综合写的时候帮你看那一篇？

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加油~！

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加油啊小阿狸~

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Enolate 发表于 2013-8-2 22:31
加油啊小阿狸~

谢谢妹纸~~

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copyzero2 发表于 2013-7-30 22:57
(1)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to become financially responsib ...

分论点一和三我感觉都很好，第二点有点小疑问：manage their own money怎么就是value money a lot了呢，这里逻辑我接不上0_0

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wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-6 22:57
分论点一和三我感觉都很好，第二点有点小疑问：manage their own money怎么就是value money a lot了呢，这 ...

本来觉得，从小就和钱打交道，很容易就造成已钱至上，满脑子想的如何管钱投资获得更多的钱，这样子，ms扭曲了一下~~

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who go outside are more successful and happier than people who stay in villages.
DA：
（1）Fiercer competitions in big cities give people more pressure, leaving things more complicated and bringing people less happy.
短时间大量涌入： spring up/ sprout up  
Facing a lot of challenges, working from Monday to Friday from eight am to nine pm, even working overtime on weekends, people in big cities has little time to do things they like. Less happiness could be gained.
Specifically, suppose that a worker spending most of his/her leisure time in work/task, some problems might company with work as well: psychologically, depression in study and physiologically, myopia, bent of spine and so on.
If they stay in villages, none of things above may happen.
（2）Compared with well-educated people, villagers have fewer skills to adapt to jobs.
Eg. Computer skills/ English/no topics to communicate with other colleagues
   Hardly could they be squeezed in(勉强塞入) these kinds of jobs with high quality. (engineering, doctors, lawyers and so on)
   Quite the opposite, they could do some simple jobs as clean workers/ services, which could not be described as successful.
   Gaps between ideal and reality are so large that depress them a lot.
Imagine that they stay in villages, they would……
（3）away from hometown brings villagers sense of loneliness, even losing their own (迷失自我：identity crisis, hard to find the place~~)
Hardly could they make friends with people, they may even do not know who they are.