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[习作点评] 今天第一次开始写作文,issue46 [复制链接]

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发表于 2013-9-3 20:54:33 |显示全部楼层
如题,可是不知道自己到底是写怎么样。。。求拍>< 如果有空我也会帮忙改一下各位的作文的,大家加油!!

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其实是issue46

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发表于 2013-9-4 23:44:34 |显示全部楼层
the revise version is under the attachment. Please download it and read it.

I may be a bit harsh on the comment. Hope you don't mind.

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发表于 2013-9-5 12:54:21 |显示全部楼层
HK_House 发表于 2013-9-4 23:44
the revise version is under the attachment. Please download it and read it.

I may be a bit harsh ...

Thxs, I appreciate it. It was great

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发表于 2013-9-5 14:23:20 |显示全部楼层
I hope i can help. don't hesitate to post anything here. I can help proofread your article once I have time. :victory:

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发表于 2013-9-5 21:01:13 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 bert2177 于 2013-9-5 21:03 编辑
HK_House 发表于 2013-9-5 14:23
I hope i can help. don't hesitate to post anything here. I can help proofread your article once I ha ...


I won't~ If possible can I ask for a score? I'd have a better understanding bout the rating standard. If it's not bothering. And thanks a million!

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发表于 2013-9-5 23:04:10 |显示全部楼层
bert2177 发表于 2013-9-5 21:01
I won't~ If possible can I ask for a score? I'd have a better understanding bout the rating stan ...

on a scale of 1-10, maybe I give you 6-5.5. I hope you won't give up and I am looking forward to your next article.

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发表于 2013-9-6 12:56:50 |显示全部楼层
HK_House 发表于 2013-9-5 23:04
on a scale of 1-10, maybe I give you 6-5.5. I hope you won't give up and I am looking forward to y ...

That's good enough for me. I'm working on the next one this afternoon

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