issue91 理性和价值观 此题实在太太太抽象了，难写：（ 花了一小时多一点 霸王硬

~白鸽~UID: 148401

91"Most people think that their deeply held values are the result of rational choice, but reason often has little to do with the way people form values."

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This issue seems well-presented,but with closer examination we will find that it is not really the case. Reason has to do with the way which people form value to great extent,though it does not play the totally dominant role.

Admittedly, manyfold non-rational factors phenomenally exert influence on the way that people form values. Those may include personality, mentality,preference,some special experience and so forth. For example, the extrovert will be prone to hold open-minded,active and optimistic value, whereas the introvert will be more likely  to be insular ,passive and pessimistic. People will tend to  hold distinct values mainly because of such different factor.

However, it can not be ignored that forming values is also a course for people to acquire them. This means that people, as  members of a certain society, will be profoundly affected by the values that the society advocated. It should be noted here: such values are advocated usually deriving from collective reasonality. A society often accentuates the collective interests so that it will claim the value conforming to overall welfare through long-term practice and evolution.
It is actually a rational course that people continuously try error, discover, choose and make trade-off. Ethics are cases in point. For instance, human society always accents integrity, which in fact be conducive to human communication, coordination and cooperation. That is
more a rational choice than a well-meaning advocation. In conclusion, people's values still can not depart from the effect of social rational choice.

Furthermore,one choose  to hold a kind of values usually with the consideration of  his or her own corresponding comprehensive circumstances, as  also can be seen as a  "rational" choice. As we know, people can be absolutely rational limited by kinds of concrete restraints,such as imperfect information, limited energy, time.etc ,even personality and other non-rational factors. Therefore, one chooses to hold a kind of value which is most appropriate for himself or herself. And there is no denying that any people's thought and action necessarily contains rational elements due to practical considerations. Everyone has to  live in reality, which inevitably shape people's mind.

To sum up, There lies many complex factors to make people hold respective values,including rational ones and nonrational ones.From further perspectives,rational mind does impose great on human value's forming .

so猫UID: 148633

91"Most people think that their deeply held values are the result of rational choice, but reason often has little to do with the way people form values."

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This issue seems well-presented, but with closer examination we will find that it is not really the case. Reason has to do with the way （in）which people form value to great extent, though it does not play the totally dominant role.开头满简洁的 这种开头我喜欢~~

Admittedly, manyfold（manifold） non-rational factors phenomenally exert influence on the way that people form values. Those may include personality, mentality, preference, some special experience and so forth. For example, the extrovert will be prone to hold open-minded, active and optimistic value, whereas the introvert will be more likely to be insular, passive and pessimistic. （举例子说明性格的不同导致value不同，不过是不是例子太单薄了呀 看能不能想办法多举一点 或者把例子具体化 value是一个很抽象的东西 但是它和生活又的确是连接很紧密的 我想 能不能用比较生活化的例子 比如以前不是有个例子说半块饼干两个不同的人的价值观念就完全不同 反应就完全不同 呵呵 你看呢？！）People will tend to hold distinct values mainly because of such different factor.

However, it can not be ignored that forming values is also a course for people to acquire them. This means that people, as members of a certain society, will be profoundly affected by the values that the society advocated. It should be noted here: such values are advocated usually deriving from collective reasonality（这个词是什么？没有这个词的存在啊 你要表达的是分析的意思吗？）. A society often accentuates the collective interests so that it will claim the value conforming to overall welfare through long-term practice and evolution. It is actually a rational course that people continuously try（这里差逗号） error, discover, choose and make trade-off. Ethics are cases in point. For instance, human society always accents integrity, which in fact be（用原型？为什么啊？） conducive to human communication, coordination and cooperation. That is more a rational choice than a well-meaning advocation. In conclusion, people's values still can not depart from the effect of social rational choice.（例子是举了，但是没有那种很聚集的感觉，总觉得散了一些，楼主的很多思路好象都是呈现跳跃性的 都舍不得把例子分析透一点 这点不好哦 例子要举了以后除了凑字数还要对中心有贡献才可以呀 不分析那是浪费呀~~）
一个小小的段落，不过4 5句话，竟然有3句都是强调句~~~4个句子以it开头~~~
和我刚开始一样的错误 注意句子的多样性呀 呵呵

Furthermore, one choose（s） to hold a kind of values usually with the consideration of his or her own corresponding comprehensive circumstances, as also can be seen as a "rational" choice. As we know, people can be absolutely（这个词用在这里不好吧 哪有那么绝对的事情~） rational limited by kinds of concrete restraints, such as imperfect information, limited energy, time. （，）etc(.) ,even personality and other non-rational factors. Therefore, one chooses to hold a kind of value which is most appropriate for himself or herself. And there is no denying that any people's thought and action necessarily contains rational elements due to practical considerations. Everyone has to live in reality, which inevitably shape people's mind.（前后对应啊 前是everyone 后怎么成people啦？）
这一段还不错的说~~~~~

To sum up, There lies many complex factors to make people hold respective values, includingrational ones and nonrational ones. From further perspectives, rational mind does impose great on human value's forming .

白鸽呀 你的字数太少了哦 连400都不到哦~~~
另外 写完标点以后要记得空格 我的word里面全部都是红红绿绿的杠杠~~~~~~

至于逻辑 我个人以为在使用例子和加以分析总结又回到中心方面有点欠缺 感觉文章就不是很紧

这是限时写的吧 白鸽好象太紧张了 我记得以前看的几篇不是这样子的呀
楼主什么时候考呀 呵呵 有空交流一下吧~~~~
楼主加油~~~~~

PS：今天不知道为什么 我从下午开始就上不了这里 怪了的说~~~~现在才上来~~~~

~白鸽~UID: 148401

开头满简洁的 这种开头我喜欢~~   字数少一点问题不大吧，又不是很少：）  我喜欢简洁一点 我就是想的太多了，思维跳跃性确实比较强。有时候比较苦恼
我现在尽量是想掐时间写，不能老是随意的放松写啊，这样习惯就不好了。毕竟到头来得实战的。
这个题目比较恶心，写起来要想半天。确实写的不够cogent，句子多样性你说的也挺中肯的。哥哥我现在年纪大了，记忆力不好啦，请妹妹原谅一下。我4月考。
有机会交流啊 我的msn: yourchenyu@hotmail.com 我经常会用的

~白鸽~UID: 148401

还有有些地方我是写着写着就忘了，语法错误不少。我思维比较倾向于抽象，大而空的那种, 所以比较痛苦。
还有的地方 漏了词的，看去来语法就不对了
至于不是很紧，那也好啊， 留给读者一点空间嘛：））
anyway, thank u for all the advice