【口语小组】havrl作业贴(11.17)

havrlUID: 2814564

ATMT-T 发表于 2014-3-3 22:31
又开始互改口语了啊，骚年，发音问题挺多就不一一细说了，自己说的时候要注意
Task1
sleeping room用bedr ...

等会给你评价。在看作文。

SYNCIAUID: 3130718

NO.1

1.At 27s, Are you saying "become what I want to be"? If so, the pronunciation is flawed.
2. Express your points with clear indicators.  
3. Focus on the topic. Here we are talking about who makes the biggest contribution, not which job do you prefer.  

NO.2
1.At 29-32s, your expression is flawed and blunt.
2.In the last sentence, you make two points, one is about your thin body, another is about cost, but neither developed by explanations.  

NO.3
Though few pauses, but you've present two main reasons.

I mistakenly took TPO 25 as 3.3 task. So, I haven't finished TPO 24 yet. I will give you some advice about the later three tomorrow. Sorry about it.

havrlUID: 2814564

ATMT-T 发表于 2014-3-3 22:31
又开始互改口语了啊，骚年，发音问题挺多就不一一细说了，自己说的时候要注意
Task1
sleeping room用bedr ...

谢谢啊，非常感谢。
T2;
lifestyle, 估计我又跑题了。
T3:
1.反对的理由，我应该改成professors, adminstors, students all of them give a speech
2.反对理由：我的没问题。
T4.
1.我实是没有办法在这么短的时间全部说出来，ATM-T有没有什么建议。
T5
1.楼主帮我指出了很大的错误，if i were the man.
2.我觉的词的转变很重要的。
3.有空看看，有本书叫 托托福口语看这本就够了

PS：有什么可以继续交流。

havrlUID: 2814564

SYNCIA 发表于 2014-3-4 22:40
NO.1

1.At 27s, Are you saying "become what I want to be"? If so, the pronunciation is flawed.

T1:跑题了
T2:
1.谢谢
2.其实我想展开，但是small, old,near, 三个点，如果再加三句话。就不知道怎么办了。版主给点建议哇。
T3
等你录完再评吧。

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

3_1
task1
1.is that planting some trees. there is a grammatic problem in the sentence. The sentence should be replaced like "is planting some trees".
2."serious" pronunciation is not accurate.
3."beijing and small ?? beijing" I did not understand the words between "small" and "beijing"
4."group" ponounciation is not accurate.
5.I think your accent is very good. Since this answer is the first version of the task I think, the end of the answer is not intact. I think you may still have something to say, but the time is due.
6.And the content is a little bit simple. I think you probably finished the answer with five sentences. In order to use the time effeciently, I advise you can add some information in your answer.

task2
1.I think this answer is much better than the first one. the answer is fluent and there is a good example which I really appreciate.
2.rather than 后面的can就不要了
3.worked，你换了几次，其实直接work就行了嘛
4.and ？which，？这里是有个in吗？我有点没听到

我觉得楼主应该都是一遍过的，我觉得如果都有第二道题的水准，应该是很好了。时间最好在注意下，不要总给人一种未说完的感觉。
麻烦帮我评价下吧，谢谢。貌似我第二道题理解错了题目意思

ATMT-TUID: 3478676

havrl 发表于 2014-3-5 07:39
谢谢啊，非常感谢。
T2;
lifestyle, 估计我又跑题了。

我也不清楚，感觉只有努力地练了！

bobzhang1991UID: 3467362

3.4
T1 I was a major about ..(好像没这种表达)
T2 provide comfort(not comfortable) and convenience(not convenient) 最后一句有错误
T3 a fascinating(不能有a)；
T4 a student(not students);内容上不是很准确
T5 前面问题没有说清楚，可以说得更具体
T6 是traps；

bus-UID: 3400909

0305：
task1：有几个位置没听清楚，a xx place;26~29s;有一个位置表达错误，one of my friend,应该是friends

task2:develop 发音 creativity 发音，found 发音，combine  的用法似乎有点问题，建议楼主最后点一下题，例子总感觉有点不搭，你只是说发现他们很有创造性，没有提画画培养的

task3：current xxx sdudents木有听明白，staff发音，后面没有er，第二点的理由没有说好，应该直接是staff因为经历原因没办法回答他们的问题

task4：irrational 发音，al没有发出来，概念理解和我理解的有点不一样，我觉得应该是他们明知道是错的还是坚持。experience 不是experiment,deserved发音，problem发音，roof是repaired 吧，这篇原文听了好久也感觉好多听不懂的，但是似乎楼主最开始概念理解有错误，在后来的lecturer强调的是他不想让他妻子觉得他错了所以坚持着

task5：bother?发音有点问题，are xxx about being late，再就是42s位置没听明白那个单词

task6：physical adaptions in moving吧，我觉得加个这个好点，楼主的点都答出来了，在细节方面 ，我现在也很是纠结，不好评价，楼主是一遍过的么，好厉害的说

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

楼主帮我评下咯？3.1

byumiUID: 3005024

3.6
T1 开始的时候eggs is the food，需要改一下，eggs has a lot of，后面eggs can combined with 我觉得改成be cooked with好一些
T2 额，忽然感觉n l不分。。。不是很连贯，还需要多练习。前面complicated with each other，不知道是不是我听错了，楼主是想说communicate？trip for european应该改成to。

havrlUID: 2814564

byumi 发表于 2014-3-7 20:38
3.6
T1 开始的时候eggs is the food，需要改一下，eggs has a lot of，后面eggs can combined with 我觉得 ...

T1.
谢谢，your suggestions.
T2.
communicate. 哈哈，汉语n,l 都分不清。不知怎么办。

havrlUID: 2814564

caicaifish2013 发表于 2014-3-5 17:50
3_1
task1
1.is that planting some trees. there is a grammatic problem in the sentence. The sentenc ...

T1.
1.severe problems
2.smog hangs.
3. 谢谢你的建议。
T2>
1.其实还是有很多毛病的。现在立马给你评。

byumiUID: 3005024

3.7
T1 就是有点不太连贯，内容都没问题，例子真是不错。
T2 26s家具的s去掉，was not enough to support the furniture，我觉得改成were not strong enough更好，其他的都没问题
楼主的例子真心不错！！！

adrian小豆UID: 3395053

3.8作业