【口语小组】摘星作业帖

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10.21题目
Task 1 Describe a change in your life that might occur in five years . Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
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Task 2 Some people prefer to have classes during the day and do part-time jobs in the evening while others prefer to have classes in the evening and do part-time jobs during the day. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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10.22题目
Task 1 Describe a special event or occasion that you have participate with your family or friends. Include reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
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T1：有两处没听清：go star  ?
                           so ? to see all the things
       很流利，语音语调也都不错
T2：较流利，就中间有一点有些小停顿。 内容也很好
T3: skills
      woman
      是she 不是he
      中间停顿有些多，有很多um...，而且是在一句中。
      内容上挺好的
T4：illustrate
       rainy
       我觉得你应该说一下这个概念和你的例子的关系，剩下的内容挺好的。
T5：still
       还有你在说的你的想法选择的时候，要是有自己的例子是不是会更有说服力
T6：我觉得你有的单词会在后面加er，像example，或者animal
       chemical
       内容挺好的。

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10.23题目
Task 1 Describe your first day of school when you were young. Did you like it or not?
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Task 2 Some people think that modern technology has impacted our life negatively, while others think that it has improved our life. Which one do you agree and why?
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.MaggieUID: 3456903

摘星 发表于 2013-10-21 21:19
10.21题目
Task 1 Describe a change in your life that might occur in five years . Please include spe ...

10.21
T1.前面大部分时间说的内容都不符，强调的是两个地方的差异。楼主要注意题目强调的是change in your life, 只有后面的一句话才说到。所以这题内容重心楼主需要重新定位。
T2.这题很好。

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.Maggie 发表于 2013-10-24 00:12
10.21
T1.前面大部分时间说的内容都不符，强调的是两个地方的差异。楼主要注意题目强调的是change in yo ...

说的是，我最大的问题一直是不扣题

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10.25题目
Task 1 Describe your favorite room in your house or somewhere else and explain why.
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Task 2 Some people like to go straight to the destination to see the view while traveling. Other people prefer to enjoy the scenery along the way. Which do you prefer and why?
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baby_grapeUID: 3301992

楼主好，我是来改1024的作业的。。
结果只有25的。。TAT
楼主搞定的时候来回复我哦~

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baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-25 13:24
楼主好，我是来改1024的作业的。。
结果只有25的。。TAT
楼主搞定的时候来回复我哦~

尽快搞定，27号考试，折磨的有点精神不正常了。

ノ淘气の小叶UID: 3335741

10.23迟了这么久才来点评不好意思。说得比我好有时候都看不出问题来T-T
T1：内容很好，语速比我快多了。
T2：感觉在最后要点出来为什么improve life，你只点出了不同，没有说这个不同是好是坏。
T3：感觉还有5秒可以再把反驳的理由和学校的理由总结一下。
T4：中间说例子的时候有点蹦词，make the birds （difficulty→have difficult to） follow it。
T5：说快了，成了it takes me ...我在听力里面听的是去要1小时，不是1个半小时？可能我听错了。
    我觉得可以把2个选择的优劣精简一下，只说有2个选择，然后再在自己的陈述里面把优劣当理由讲
T6： 细节都说出来了。

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ノ淘气の小叶 发表于 2013-10-25 17:53
10.23迟了这么久才来点评不好意思。说得比我好有时候都看不出问题来T-T
T1：内容很好，语速比我快多了。
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感谢点评！这周就要考试了，，，还没准备好。

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10.24题目
Task 1 It is known that the teaching quality is very important for a university, there are also some other significant factors, which one would you choose and why? 1. size 2. price 3. Location
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Task 2 Which way do you prefer to spend your spare time? Reading, thinking alone or participating in group activities? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-25 13:24
楼主好，我是来改1024的作业的。。
结果只有25的。。TAT
楼主搞定的时候来回复我哦~

10.24 搞定啦！

糖甜甜UID: 3362181

10.24
1.语速太快了
2.有些词有些听不清，task 5中的concentrate的重音在con-
3.内容方面，条理清晰，但是细节太多了，有些内容可以概括地说，这样你的语速也会合适一些
task 5，挺好。建议在描述两个solution的时候可以在压缩一些
task 6，可以不说的地方，比如具体有什么feature可以提高一个product的quality等等

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-10-25 23:25
10.24
1.语速太快了
2.有些词有些听不清，task 5中的concentrate的重音在con-

版主的意思是不是说，要降低语速，同时保持更好的连贯性。我总是担心后面的题目说不完，然后语速就过快了。