【口语小组】 wangxiang870725作业帖12.28

wangxiang870725UID: 2573982

crazy要GT 发表于 2013-11-20 11:52
task 1 例子什么的很细致~很好哦，不过楼主你说的是transformers, 然后又说 this toy~是不是应该把单复数统 ...

谢谢啊~呵呵，我给你评晚了，不好意思啊。
刚评完

ad9075UID: 3423773

11-21

感觉说的很连贯啊，比我准备了半天还磕磕绊绊的好多了，我就挑挑刺，感觉有几处发音还可以注意一下

T1

想说的是 People's Park吧，我第一次听成People's Pack了，其他的都还好


T2

如果非要说的话，就是感觉不太口语化，比如examination感觉比较书面化，印象中口语说exam或test比较多一些

另外开始的时候用了一个较长的句子 because of.. not only... but also，感觉有些别扭，我觉得说not only because his experience of teaching. And more important, his way of analysising a problem 这样可能更好

ad9075UID: 3423773

有空点评下我的吧。。多谢

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1686578-1-2.html

wangxiang870725UID: 2573982

ad9075 发表于 2013-11-24 19:50
有空点评下我的吧。。多谢

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1686578-1-2.html

谢谢啊

RonHeUID: 3171251

T1:录音中的busy发音不太准确
T2:建议单词结尾发音s，t轻一些，听TPO有时候会发现甚至听不到s和t
T3:觉得第一句可以更精炼一些，不用把plan的全部细节都描述；相反听力部分的叙述略显简单了一些，第二部分少了fantastic food的细节
T4:这题我没做，我听了下，结构组织都没问题
总体还是不错的，叙述比较有条理

yl499235070UID: 3464743

实在不好意思，这两天比较忙，在外面听不了录音，今天回去就补上

yl499235070UID: 3464743

11.24对不起晚了好久
T1音质真的是很不好啊，建议用自己录音软件，而且话筒别离太近，要么真是听不太清，
前面是the ones吧
其实例子挺好的，a teacher educate us to be a good person前面半句是什么没听清
T2 人际关系网是my network么？我查了查好像说relationships net
最后是什么？image of 什么 professional？
我尽力了骚瑞……

wangxiang870725UID: 2573982

RonHe 发表于 2013-11-26 09:17
T1:录音中的busy发音不太准确
T2:建议单词结尾发音s，t轻一些，听TPO有时候会发现甚至听不到s和t
T3:觉得 ...

多谢点评~

wangxiang870725UID: 2573982

yl499235070 发表于 2013-11-26 23:16
11.24对不起晚了好久
T1音质真的是很不好啊，建议用自己录音软件，而且话筒别离太近，要么真是听不太清，
...

T1 的例子我其实是编的，呵呵。
T2 人际关系网应该可以用network吧。  比如说你建立人际关系可以说， network with others。
谢谢点评哈~

yl499235070UID: 3464743

hello小伙伴对不起我明天给你评哈~要断电了……

小丸子dahUID: 3396660

有空给我评一下呗https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1687522-1-1.html

小丸子dahUID: 3396660

楼主，我11.26的作业没给我评，有空评一下吧，多谢

yl499235070UID: 3464743

11.26
T1觉得楼主语言功底超棒的，没什么语法问题，例子也给到了，挺好的
建议练听力之后跟读两遍材料，练练发音
T2个人觉得这个里面信息量就没有T1说的多。可以适当提点儿速，然后后面time waste那句和最后一句感觉没有很强的关联，time waste应该是对于早上状态好来说的，算是和前半部分一起的。后两句前面加一点合适的连接词吧，要么感觉逻辑性不是很强。

wangxiang870725UID: 2573982

13 Dec

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wangxiang870725UID: 2573982

20 Dec

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