2013年1月12日托福口语独立题［求拍砖］

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以下是我拿2013年1月12日的口语题目做练习：感觉完全找不到点儿。求大神板砖
Task1 what is the one style of clothing that the students in your school tend to wear? Why you like this style of clothing? Include specific reasons and details in your response
Sports clothes
        This kind of clothe is flexible. It is good at sporting.
        Sport clothe is bright in color, it is fit for student.
        Both male and female can wear it with little difference
新东方版：
the student uniform from my school is sporty.
        It’s pretty good looking. It is blue with white strip that make you standout from a crowed.
        Our uniform fit really well because the material it’s made of is very stretchy.
        It is very comfortable. The uniform is made of 100% cottion so it’s nice and soft.
        It breathes really well so I can wear it during exercise.
Task 2 what kind of job will you choose? To choose a job through which you can get a lot of money or to choose a job through which you can get great personal satisfaction? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
        A job can get great personal satisfaction.
        the most important thing of my age is to accumulate knowledge and make myself powerful in the field of my specification
        the work can make you feel grate satisfied will make you happy. Keep a happy attitude towards work will improve work efficiency
        happy working facilitate promotion
新东方版：
        I would choose a job out of which I get great personal satisfaction rather than money for the following reasons.
First of all, we typically work from the age of 22 until retirement at around 60. We spend an average of five days a week, eight hours a day working. It makes a significant part of one’s life. Obviously, being forced to do something when you would rather be doing something else can be killing.
Also, Your passion should be what you do with your time. Life is too short to pursue other people’s or employer’s goals. Pursue your own, and rich or poor, happiness will follow.

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第一题我觉得前两点差的不大，第三点男女都能穿没啥必要。范例有一点比较好，就是他每个理由都落到了一个具体的点上（白蓝条，料子好，还纯棉），你在组织答案的时候也要注意include specific details.
第二题的第一点偏题。
帮你把帖子挪了一下，下回问题贴可以直接发到主版更多人能看到。作业区基本没人看新帖的

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hj1313 发表于 2014-1-18 21:25
第一题我觉得前两点差的不大，第三点男女都能穿没啥必要。范例有一点比较好，就是他每个理由都落到了一个具 ...

谢谢版主。:D

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hj1313 发表于 2014-1-18 21:25
第一题我觉得前两点差的不大，第三点男女都能穿没啥必要。范例有一点比较好，就是他每个理由都落到了一个具 ...

点评非常到位。