Jucy_x 发表于 2014-10-28 14:36
Oct.28
Help neighbor
链接是http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDvkiOT
1、流畅度:
还行,不过断句方面还需努力,比如bring the clothes in是一气呵成的,录音当中却先发了bring the clothes,停顿了一下才发的in。
2、词汇:
词汇、句式都比较简单,可尝试一下不同句型,加一两句从句。
3、语法:
"There are often thunder shower."应为"There are often thunder showers."
"..., she told me don't forget to bring clothes in and close windows..."应为"..., she told me no to forget to bring the clothes in and close the windows..."
"I rushed into yard."应为"I rushed to the yard."
"I checked each rooms."应为"I checked each room."
"They were impossible to stay home at this time."建议改为""It was impossible that they were home at this time."
"At the next morning, ..."应为"On the next morning/The next morning, ..."
4、语音:
help, felt的e发"哎",不发"衣"。
laundry发long-d-ry,不发logy。
coastal的tal发tl,不发tar。
primary的i应发字母本音/ai/ as in "eye"。
raining发rai-ning,不发rain-ing。
thing, think的th,发音时应该把舌头放在上下齿之间,送气。
came的a应发字母本音/ei/ as in "late"。
breakfast的重音在brea。
brought的ough发"哦"长音,不发"欧"。
王小刁 发表于 2014-9-26 22:49
0926 an important job
大家一起来练习吧~
链接: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnfE0TT 密码: v1p5
1、流畅度:
很流利。
2、词汇:
我挺欣赏initially,additionally代替first, second的用法的。不过我不清楚什么叫People who work humbles are called urban management officers,maintain civilized language以及to persuade those vendors to do business on a fixed pages,也不知道听对了没,你能解释一下么?
另外,athletic建议改为physically strong,因为城管只需要强壮而不需要热爱运动。
3、语法:
“Because they are government officers, so the prerequisite for them is to pass the civil service examination.”应为“Because they are government officers, the prerequisite for them is the civil service examination.”因为because和so不能用在同一个句子,只能选其一,类似的还有although和but。
“Initially, they have to be justice and responsible.” 应为“Initially, they have to be fair and responsible.”因为 justice是名词,不是形容词。
“They are forbidden to abuse their power or make verbal or physical assault on others.”应为“They are forbidden to abuse their power or make verbal or physical assaults on others.”
4、语音:
prerequisite /priː’rɛkwɪzɪt/第一个音节是pre不是per。
assault /ə’sɔːlt/第二个原因是长音/ɔː/as in “all”,不是短音/ʌ/as in “love”。
conflicts和pavements的s没读出来,要和t一起读/ts/。
damages的ges发/dʒɪz/,中间有个元音/ɪ/。