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麻烦大神修改一下这篇life easier life easier.docx (26.17 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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谢谢！

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primboUID: 3479283

先吃个午饭，马上修改。大神文章得仔细读啊。吃饱了好发挥。哈哈

primboUID: 3479283

The speaker thinks that ethanol is a good choice for fuel that can take place of gasoline, and offer three points rebut the passage.
Firstly, admitted that burning ethanol will not help reduce the emission of CO2, but in order to gain ethanol, people will grow more plants, which consume CO2 and hence remove green-house gas from air, thus contribute to the relief of global warming, which refute the first point of the reading passage.

本身文章没有问题，这部分对听力原文的理解可能有出入。lecture里面是说plant成长的过程中需要吸收二氧化碳，这部分吸收的二氧化碳和ethanol 燃烧产生的二氧化碳抵消掉了，counteract 这个点是很重要的。因为一进一出，所以没有好处也没有坏处。


Secondly, the production of ethanol will not cause decrease in food supply for eating and feeding animals as stated in passage, because ethanol can be made from the parts of plant that are not eaten.


这部分写的有些少，就一句话，because ethanol can be made from the parts of plant that are not eaten如果时间够用的话可以展开了写。It is true that we have to produce ethanol from plant, but only  a specific part called cellulose, which is just from cell wall. Moreover, this specific part is not eaten by animals. So conclusion can be drawn that the number of animals' food will not be influenced by ethanol production.


Thirdly, the expenditure of ethanol will be competitive in the future compared with gasoline, not just resulted from subsidies as claimed in the passage. In the future, when more people use ethanol, the production will increase and it's price will fall. It's estimated that when the sales are three times bigger, the price of ethanol will drop 40%.

productivity triples, price will drop 40 percent,这个数据的例证加进去很不错。
总体评价应该算是 good了吧。😄

woodpecker017UID: 3455722

primbo 发表于 2014-2-13 13:28
The speaker thinks that ethanol is a good choice for fuel that can take place of gasoline, and offer ...

谢谢~~~counteract本来还记着的，然后写着写着忘记了···第二部分听不出来那个是什么啊，和cell wall 关系也听得模模糊糊，乱拼一个不大好吧，所以就用not eaten 代替了，还需继续努力听写！

copyzero2UID: 3433211

woodpecker017 发表于 2014-2-13 20:32
谢谢~~~counteract本来还记着的，然后写着写着忘记了···第二部分听不出来那个是什么啊，和cell wall 关 ...

唔，直接上传附件哦~~不要贴大段英语在主楼，很有可能被吞掉~~

copyzero2UID: 3433211

挺好的~~加油噢~~

primboUID: 3479283

修改好了，看看吧。

primboUID: 3479283

先把当前面临最严重的问题细化，然后就这几个问题展开论述的想法是可取的。但是总觉得论证不够有说服力哈。

woodpecker017UID: 3455722

copyzero2 发表于 2014-2-14 15:31
挺好的~~加油噢~~

谢谢斑竹~改得好认真，斑竹对作文的认知果然高深，涨姿势啦！

springiceUID: 3500532

楼主不知怎么的， 我用迅雷下下来确打不开，咋办呀

woodpecker017UID: 3455722

primbo 发表于 2014-2-14 23:20
修改好了，看看吧。

谢谢~~~~

springiceUID: 3500532

下载N次了，下下来后总是说文件损害，无语了。请问你能复制到记事本上再上传吗？

woodpecker017UID: 3455722

springice 发表于 2014-2-15 12:45
楼主不知怎么的， 我用迅雷下下来确打不开，咋办呀

好的，我试试~

woodpecker017UID: 3455722

springice 发表于 2014-2-15 14:07
下载N次了，下下来后总是说文件损害，无语了。请问你能复制到记事本上再上传吗？

上传了~顺便直接贴到一楼~~

springiceUID: 3500532

多谢楼主细心，已经下载，改好了，马上上传。第一次改作文，有些菜，楼主别介意。 parents do not understand.docx (16.34 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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