组织安排我来改你的文章,虽然我很久不写了
While Japan experienced a roughly 2% increase in the first year, Tunisia’s GDP growth dropped sharply from about 6.3% to 4.5%, and all the way down to 3% in 2009.
这句话并没有表明Tunisia是在哪两年从6.3下降到4.5的
The 2007 witnessed an approximately 2% increase.
这是单独一句话,没有表明哪个国家,虽然我知道你指的是哪个,但是总觉得和前面一句话合并成一个复杂句更好,同样包括后面的一句话
After 3 years’ development, the figure in Japan became the first, next came the number of Tunisia and Ecuador.
主语好像不对,你是指In the figure吗