【口语小组】whuph作业贴（1011）

One-doerUID: 3388623

LZ你好。不好意思。0423的还没有给你点评。这两天太忙。
明早就把点评写上来啊。
你的音频我已经下载了。
但是现在没时间细听。
明天早晨一定。

whuphUID: 3503458

In my perspective, the most important profession is police officer. Because they can protect our safety. Once I went shopping with my friends, my handbag was stolen by someone. At that time, the officer in the street nearby drove their police car to help me bring back my bag. And the thief was punished for stealing. The police keep the peace of society day and night. If there is no policeman, I can hardly imagine what the world will be? Therefore, I think police officer is dispensable in our society.

whuphUID: 3503458

One-doer 发表于 2014-4-26 20:42
LZ你好。不好意思。0423的还没有给你点评。这两天太忙。
明早就把点评写上来啊。
你的音频我已经下载了。 ...

谢谢哦，我说的很烂，希望多提出点意见。。。这样我就可以多多进步啦。。。
完全可以理解，大家都比较忙，不要放弃哦
一起加油啊哈~

whuphUID: 3503458

今天发现一个超级无敌屌的网站，朗读英语。。。而且还读的蛮好的，妈妈再也不用担心我的发音。。。
http://fanyi.00cf.com/speech.php

yummywangUID: 3477855

那424的录音在哪呀  我最近比较忙改的迟了希望你不要介意呢

whuphUID: 3503458

yummywang 发表于 2014-4-26 23:29
那424的录音在哪呀  我最近比较忙改的迟了希望你不要介意呢

都在2楼。。。你找找？应该不难找的。。。

whuphUID: 3503458

mrholiday 发表于 2014-4-27 12:28
4.25
同学你好认真哟，还写出文本来了

谢谢啊。。。确实是from。。。马上改过来~~
确实对比比较好，但是我不知道怎么表达顺畅来着。。。

One-doerUID: 3388623

不好意思，这几天手忙脚乱的。。。
20140423
TASK1 AND 2
总的来说，没有大的问题。时间有点多了，T1 49s，T2 47s ，所以你可能需要在时间的把握上再注意一下。两个reponses都很流畅，所以中间偶尔在某些词上的停顿就觉得有点明显了。
但总的来说，说的真的很好。我个人觉得没有什么大问题了，就会对时间的掌控做的再好一点就可以了。
最近看了大家的response，觉得自己好渣。。。

havrlUID: 2814564

0427
T1：
1. 建议加一些连词，更连贯。
2.encouragement 有英式和美式发音，建议采用美式。
3.最后learned, 不是d，而是t的发音。
4.in my home 是不对的。
5. 内容可以。
T2.
Well, I prefer to make decisions after careful consideration. Because making decisions too quickly may cause us to ignore some essential facts, and the choices would not be the best. Last week, my roommate, Jane, wanted to charge her meal card. She just thought about the time was still 15 ‘clock, and the closing time was 17 ‘clock . Without hesitation, she decided to go to the office. After arrived there, she realized that day was Saturday, the teachers didn’t work. If I were she, I would like to think about all the elements (发音错误)before I make decision.
1. 超时了。
2.例子可以生动一点哇。

martinmx87UID: 3498182

4/28:
Task1:
3s: watching的读音注意下，听起来有点像washing
38s:听得不是很清楚，是想说laugh?
44s: I can feel love?感觉有点奇怪，与前面看音乐节目关系也不大。
Task2:
11s: spirit的读音注意下
41s: deadline的读音注意下
49s: cool head的读音注意下
感觉这题楼主没说到点子上，觉得最重要是要阐明早上和晚上完成任务有何不同，因为时间来看基本相同。仅供参考哈！

yummywangUID: 3477855

4.24
Well, I prefer doing activity with children. Because my dream was to be a teacher when I was young. And there is a kindergarten near my home. I usually volunteer to look after the kids as soon as I have spare time. I play games with the children and we sing songs, dance and draw pictures together. We often have a good time. What’s more, smile in the children’s face makes me feel that is the most beautiful thing in the world. So, I want to volunteer to do activity with children.

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1.楼主有些单词的重读在哪好像不太清楚，而且每句话的语调都会不由自主的上扬，这两方面要多加修改。红色部分是需要注意重读的单词的



In my perspective, I agree the plan. Because health is very important to the citizens who make their contributions to the development of country. But they often ignore healthy problems because of too much pressure in the business. My uncle works in the Baidu Company. He is busy and he never takes exercise Finally, he got sick last week. If the government spends money to encourage a healthier lifestyle, people like my uncle will pay more attention to their body and can keep better spirits every day.
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1.感觉这个理由不是很能支持政府将预算投入到让大家变得健康的项目中。这个话题应该是要说国民的健康会对政府产生什么好处，说服政府去投钱吧~
2.楼主要努力克服一下口音的问题，多看美剧，跟读什么的，练习语感和语调~

JohnnyKingkiUID: 3505144

T1
Jackson是用中文在说的么['dʒæksn]
compose 发音需要注意[kəm'pəʊz]
at that time 感觉里面[eæt]的发音有点问题
come to like him 这个表达有问题吧
death 的发音[deθ]
T2
dress 的发音[dres] 跟上面的death同样的问题
借给我是lent me而不是borrowed me
told 的发音[təʊld]
repay back the money to her 这个表述感觉也有那么丶问题吧 简单点return her the money
since then的发音[een]

大家说的都比我充实。。。我自己口语也不行，就只能给你提这么多，有的也只是个人的拙见，凑合着看吧~~~

JohnnyKingkiUID: 3505144

JohnnyKingki 发表于 2014-5-1 21:13
T1
Jackson是用中文在说的么['dʒæksn]
compose 发音需要注意[kəm'pəʊz]

上面有的音标打不出来  1.death，dress，then 2. the, that

adrian小豆UID: 3395053

4.28

整体来说 还不错 卤煮说的都不叫谨慎小心，语法错误也很少哦
但是有几个问题注意一下
第一个就是，感觉卤煮对题目不是特别熟悉，所以在说的时候还是有些吞吞吐吐
这个很好解决，就是多说，反复说，总结属于自己的例子

然后就是语速，这个其实还是和第一个问题同一个根源，就是不太熟悉，所以语速可能受到影响
其次就是要注意以下发音，有些发音还是比较...不太地道，除了语音就是注意语气，这个很重要，语气是让你整个作答增色的法宝，没事，继续加油咯