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karen小心 发表于 2014-5-2 10:08
写得很不错。学了不少好的短语哦。check it


check it~
另外我想问问姑娘,你说的不要写And开头的句子,意思是这种连词实在是太低端不洋气了咩?改成Besides,Moreover这些?

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Happy May day!!
Fighting!

写得很不错。学了不少好的短语哦。check it revise-5.1 baby_grape.doc (41.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)



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交作业啦!
好久没有写小作文啦!!!
帮我修改的人,谢谢啦!
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karen小心 发表于 2014-5-1 12:41
楼主,我要怎么打卡!?还有,4-30批改完的作用我放到4月份的贴里面?木有问题的吧?!

不用打卡啦~~  上交作业就行

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我在 2014-05-01 14:14完成打卡,是本组当天第2个打卡的组员,获得奖励 寄托币 1
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小作文:

A类   5.10考饼图概率比较大,5月有可能会出一次流程图地图。

大作文:

注:A类G类可以通用。

突击题:

0、 International tourism has become the biggest industry in the world. Some people think it cause tension between people from different culture. Others thing it leads to understanding between countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

1.In many countries prices of airplane tickets have dropped. Is it positive or negative situation? Write about your personal experience or knowledge.\\Air travel is cheap  these days, allowing ordinary people to travel further.  Some people say that  airfare  should be increased because this leads to environmental problems.  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.  

2、Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women . To what extent do you agree or disagree?\\Many people believe that women should be given an equal role to men in the military forces or police. Others, however, claim that such occupations are not suitable for women. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.\\The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females  and males. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

3、 Sometimes people are rejecting a job opportunity due to their age or other  circumstances. Is it a negative or a positive approach? Give your opinion and relevant  examples.

4、 Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.\\Some people argue that the purpose of zoos is only to entertain people. What do you think? What other purposes of zoos?

5、Unlike other countries, police in UK do not carry guns. Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, other think it reduce the overall violence in the society.  Discuss.//Some people think that a  police force carrying guns can  educate higher level of violence. To what extent  do you agree or disagree?

6、 Mobile phones and the Internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them.  What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How does the old people to be encouraged using this new technology?

7、We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trust the journalist.  What do you think? What qualities should a journalist have?

8、 Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?

9、 Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory  part  of high school programmes (e.g. working in a charity, improving the relationship of  neighbourhood or teaching sports to children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

10、Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than in quality. To what  extent do you agree or disagree?

11、 Some people believe that a country benefits greatly with a high percentage of young  people who go to university, while others argue that it only leads to graduate  unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

12、Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

13、In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?\\Scientists believe that junk food has bad impact on our health.  Some people  think  that people should be educated to consume less of it, while others  think that it  is pointless. What is your opinion?

14、 The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in  order  to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree  with this issue?\\A tendency of news reports in the media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society. agree or disagree?

15、 In today’s world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and  carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the  disadvantages?\\Since money for postgraduate research is limited, some people think financial support from the government should be only provided for scientific research rather than the research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

16、 Lately, more and more work has to be done by machines. Do you think the positive  effects of this development outweigh the negative effects on individuals and society?

17、Many people think it is very important to protect environment but they make no effort  to  do it themselves.  Why does it happen? How to solve this problem?

18、 An increase in the production of consumer goods results in the damage to the natural environment. Why is this case? What can we do to resolve this problem?

19、 Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Some  people  think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect  for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what  extent do you  agree or disagree?

20、The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?



2014年1-4月常规性预测题库:

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1、We are seeing a significant increase in online shopping today. What are the  advantages  and disadvantages of this trend? Give your own opinion and  relevant  examples.

2、 It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination  and good language skills than those who perfer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

3、 Some animal species such as dinosaurs and dodos become extinct because of natural processes. So, it is not necessary to try and prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?\\There are many extinct species in the world nowadays. Some people say we should protect these animals from dying out,while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.

4、More and more young people hold important positions in government. Some people think it is not suitable but others think otherwise.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

5、 Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this  the  case? Is it a positive development?

6、In some cultures the old age is more valued,while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.  

7、 In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

8、Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

9、In some countries boarding schools are getting more popular. Is it a positive or negative development? What are the reasons behind it?

10、Sport today is turning into a business, with many companies involved and ever growing prize money for the sportsmen. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

11、Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

12、Many people say that companies and private tour operators should pay the bills for cleaning up pollution, instead of the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?\\Some people think that individuals are not able improve the environment, only government and companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

13、 Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

14、Some people think the foreign visitors should be charged more than the local visitors when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in another country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

15、 Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.\\Solving environmental problems should be responsibility of one international organization instead of state or national governments. Do you agree or disagree?

16、 The consumption of the resources on the earth is increasing at an alarming rate and above a dangerous level. What are the causes of this? What can be done to reduce it?

17、Tourism brings benefits to a country but it also may have harmful effects. How can a country ensure that tourism benefits its development?

18、Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the  past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

19、Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

20、Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

21、 Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent do you think it has positively or negatively affected cultural development?

22、The number of people who watch foreign films is much more than people who watch local films, describ the reasons and should the government provide financial support to the local film industries?

23、More and more people these days work harder and longer hours and have no time  for  family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion? How is it affecting  family life  and the society as a whole? Use relevant examples to support your view.

24、Some people think parents should read or tell stories to their children, others say it is  not important and can be replaced by watching TV and movies instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

25、 Competition versus cooperation and group work for students. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?//Competitiveness  is seen as a positive  feature by manymodern  societies. What impact does it  have on an individual?  Is it a positive or a negative  quality?

26、More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

27、People are eating a variety of foods these days which encourages the flow of food from every corner of the world to a local supermarket. Do you think this is negative or positive development? Why?

28、 Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions. What is your opinion on this change? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?

29、 Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.

30、Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impact on their development. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?

31、Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?



题库补充:

32、Some people believe that the government spends too much money on developing  space exploration technology. There are many others financial needs that the  government  should address instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

33、 There are an increasing number of anti-social behaviors in recent years; People generally believe that the society is to blame. What do you think the causes are and who is responsible for this?

34、 Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

35、 Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can't be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

36、 Some people think about learning a foreign language but cannot use it frequently.  What are the difficulties that people face while learning a foreign language? What can  be done to overcome them?

37、If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs, people will buy it. Therefore,  advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

38、We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish.  What are the causes and what  are your solutions?

39、People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live  in  rather than   personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

40、Many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with families  and  friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects of this on family life and society  as a whole?


1、Write a letter to a moving company that you have used to move your furniture and let  them know you have a problem with some of the items. In your letter

- Give the details of your delivery.
- Explain what problems you have experienced with the furniture.
- Say what you expect the company to do.

2、Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company.  Please say

- What have you learned while working for the company?
- Did you enjoy working there?
- What are your reasons for leaving?

3、Write a letter to a friend in a foreign country who has invited you to their wedding and  say:

- Why can’t you attend the wedding?
- Tell them about the gift you are sending.
- Suggest how you can meet after the wedding.

4、Write a complaint letter to the manager of a sports complex about a problem with the  staff (non-action of staff in spite of repeated complaints).
5、You have recently bought a toy over the internet. When it was delivered you have  found  some problems with it. Write a letter to the toy company manager and say

- Give details of the purchase.
- Describe the problem.
- What do you expect the company to do about it?
6、Write a letter to your friend and invite him/her to a special event that you are  organising.  Please say

- Why do you organize this event?
- Why do you think he/she should come?
- Suggest accommodation arrangements for him/her.

7、You are living near a public park and the condition of this park is getting worse than  before. Write a letter to the park management and say

- Why are you interested in this park?
- What are the problems you are facing?
- What are your suggestions for improvement?

8、You work for an international company. Recently your job has changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say

- How has your job changed?
- Describe a type of training you will need.
- Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.

9、One of your friends is planning to visit your country and asking you for some information. Write a letter to him/her and say

- when the best period to visit your country is
- suggest a plan for the travel
- recommend places to visit in your country

10、An international company has opened its new branch in your town. You are interested in working there. Write a letter to the human resources and say:

- What position are you interested in?
- Why are you interested in this position?
- Ask for additional information about the company.

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