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Issue30 Argument5.题目采用AW高频。（参加八月组：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1496041-1-1.html）

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issue 30

Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Argument 5

The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.

"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

占座ddl： 7.11 晚24:00. 作文互改ddl：7.12 晚24:00

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Issue #30 thuxyz.docx (17.09 KB, 下载次数: 8)

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占座。。argument..来不及写issue。。

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thuxyz 发表于 2014-7-11 12:23
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问一下你写作文的限时么》？你写的好多啊…………

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thuxyz 发表于 2014-7-11 12:23
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真的没有什么好改的啊……同学你太厉害了啊……你写作文的时候限时吗？？

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kathykathy~~~ 发表于 2014-7-12 19:38
真的没有什么好改的啊……同学你太厉害了啊……你写作文的时候限时吗？？

改完了~

issue30 revised by thuxyz.docx (18.95 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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Argument 5 revised by thuxyz.docx (17.22 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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明显是超时的啊，argument可能在45分钟左右。issue限时30min我也只能写到450，但后面会有修改补充基本上会超1h，不然自己的逻辑简直不能直视。
看来我们俩还要加油啊。。