issue132 改改开头，2分变5分 by imong

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Issue132"The university community consists of three different worlds—the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences."


People usually divide the knowledge studied in the university community into three parts: the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. For a long time, many person have held the view that there is little interaction among them due to their own assumptions and special habits of thinking. However, I think that though the assumptions and habits of thinking are different, the sciences, the humanities and the social sciences still interact each other.


To begin with, the sciences have effect on the humanities, and the humanities impact the sciences through educating scientists. In the old time, people usually thought that the sciences and humanities are so distinct that they could not contact them. However, many persons, who study the humanities, do their work better through studying the sciences. Da Vince is a good example in case, who was a famous artist in the field of the humanities. In the Middle age, people who engaged in the painting always work on the basis of their own feeling and the people drawn on the painting were not like the ones living in the real world. But Da Vince through studying sciences found the best ratio of drawing somebody. Meanwhile, he dissected the dead bodies to study the construction of human beings. Due to the hard work, he created one of the most famous and valuable paintings in the world, which is Mona Lisa. On the other hand, many scientists study the spirit of the people before them and work for the wealth of all human beings. Studying other people's spirit is one aspect of the humanities. Many scientists in the modern society respect Marie Curie, Nobel and so on. From studying them, people learn to be industrious, to overcome their difficulties, and to work for the progress of human. Under this situation, the humanities do impact the sciences. Therefore, the sciences and the humanities are able to interact each other.


In addition, the humanities and the social sciences interact each other to improve them together. Though the humanities and the social sciences are different with each other, but in some situations they do have effects on one another. In order to understand the gist of the statement, it is necessary to see an example. The Renaissance, which took place in the Middle Age in Europe, can prove that the humanities and the social sciences work together. The purpose of Renaissance was to free people's minds from the religion and through it humanities and the social sciences made a great progress. In Renaissance many famous artistic works were created, which reflected the demand that human should not be restrained by the religion. Art is one of the most important parts of the humanities. Many authors in the Italy, Germany, France, England, and other countries created a large number of masterpieces. They appealed that people should not be restricted by the domain of kings and religions. These works have large influence on the thinks in the French Revolution. In the French Revolution, some people proposed many meaningful ideas, such as the equality in the front of law, the power separating into three parts, and so on. They said that these opinions are thought by the inspiration of the works created in Renaissance. Consequently, the humanities and the social science do act together.


Moreover, the sciences contact with the social sciences in some fields. Economy is an important content of the social sciences. In the past, people usually analyzed the situation of economy on their own assumptions without any mathematical methods. In the modern society, many economists propose their theories through developing mathematical models. They use a large deal of the mathematical knowledge. For example, when John Maynard Keynes made his economic theory to public, he did base on the computation rather than on unfounded assumption. So it is clear to see that in the field of the social sciences, the sciences play an important role. At the meantime, the problems of the social sciences improve the development of the sciences. Now, many new questions are put forward and need the help of the sciences, so many scientists propose their own opinions and new theories. Under this situation, the sciences develop together with the social sciences. Thus, the sciences and the social sciences interact each other.


To sum up, although the assumptions and habits of thinking of these three disciplines are a little different, the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences can interact with each other. Through the interaction, they improve themselves and other fields in the university community.


个人看法：the sciences：自然科学
the humanities:人文科学
the social sciences:社会科学
interact:两两之间的相互作用影响,但我只说了一个对另一个的作用,应该说两个方面,但是由于时间和例子的限制,没能说清楚,
请各位提出自己的看法

eaglezhouUID: 156651

这篇文章实在是没水平改，因为看了楼主的文章觉得我在人文学科的理解上有点模糊，期待高人指教

sniper613UID: 147372

请教imong!

imongUID: 140258

到！接了！等着！

imongUID: 140258

People usually divide the knowledge studied in the university community into three parts: the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. For a long time, many person（people） have held the view that there is little interaction among them due to their own assumptions and special habits of thinking. However, I think that though the assumptions and habits of thinking are different, the sciences, the humanities and the social sciences still interact each other.

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Issue132"The university community consists of three different worlds—the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences."

重写吧。

说实在的，如果完全否定原题的话，后面来个C32的排列组合倒也真是个主意:rolleyes: 大不了算作细节展开的题目喽

sniper613UID: 147372

Issue132"The university community consists of three different worlds—the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences."
题目是说三个东东没有联系和interaction，我完全反对，后面三段就是组合阿
是不是meaningful 没有阐述清楚？

sniper613UID: 147372

Issue132"The university community consists of three different worlds—the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences."


People usually divide the knowledge studied in the university community into three parts: the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. For a long time, many persons have held the view that there is little meaningful interaction among them due to their own assumptions and special habits of thinking. However, I think that though the assumptions and habits of thinking are different, the sciences, the humanities and the social sciences still interact each other significantly.


To begin with, the sciences have significant effect on the humanities, and the humanities impact the sciences through educating scientists. In the old time, people usually thought that the sciences and humanities are so distinct that they could not contact them. However, many persons, who study the humanities, do their work better through studying the sciences. Da Vince is a good example in case, who was a famous artist in the field of the humanities. In the Middle age, people who engaged in the painting always work on the basis of their own feeling and the people drawn on the painting were not like the ones living in the real world. But Da Vince through studying sciences found the best ratio of drawing somebody. Meanwhile, he dissected the dead bodies to study the construction of human beings. Due to the hard work, he created one of the most famous and valuable paintings in the world, which is Mona Lisa. On the other hand, many scientists study the spirit of the people before them and work for the wealth of all human beings. Studying other people's spirit is one aspect of the humanities. Many scientists in the modern society respect Marie Curie, Nobel and so on. From studying them, people learn to be industrious, to overcome their difficulties, and to work for the progress of human. Under this situation, the humanities do impact the sciences. Therefore, the sciences and the humanities are able to interact each other meaningfully.


In addition, the humanities and the social sciences have important interaction on each other to improve them together. Though the humanities and the social sciences are different with each other, but in some situations they do have effects on one another. In order to understand the gist of the statement, it is necessary to see an example. The Renaissance, which took place in the Middle Age in Europe, can prove that the humanities and the social sciences work together. The purpose of Renaissance was to free people's minds from the religion and through it humanities and the social sciences made a great progress. In Renaissance many famous artistic works were created, which reflected the demand that human should not be restrained by the religion. Art is one of the most important parts of the humanities. Many authors in the Italy, Germany, France, England, and other countries created a large number of masterpieces. They appealed that people should not be restricted by the domain of kings and religions. These works have large influence on the thinks in the French Revolution. In the French Revolution, some people proposed many meaningful ideas, such as the equality in the front of law, the power separating into three parts, and so on. They said that these opinions are thought by the inspiration of the works created in Renaissance. Consequently, the humanities and the social science do act together significant.


Moreover, the sciences contact with the social sciences in some fields and have meaningful interaction. Economy is an important content of the social sciences. In the past, people usually analyzed the situation of economy on their own assumptions without any mathematical methods. In the modern society, many economists propose their theories through developing mathematical models. They use a large deal of the mathematical knowledge. For example, when John Maynard Keynes made his economic theory to public, he did base on the computation rather than on unfounded assumption. So it is clear to see that in the field of the social sciences, the sciences play an important role. At the meantime, the problems of the social sciences improve the development of the sciences. Now, many new questions are put forward and need the help of the sciences, so many scientists propose their own opinions and new theories. Under this situation, the sciences develop together with the social sciences. Thus, the sciences and the social sciences interact each other significantly.


To sum up, although the assumptions and habits of thinking of these three disciplines are a little different, the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences can interact significantly with each other. Through the meaningful interaction, they improve themselves and other fields in the university community.

imongUID: 140258

文章算不上太好，但是足够收录到issue习作区了。

文法问题自己检查，我不想多说。Though but这种错误word没道理放过。
In the old time, people usually thought that the sciences and humanities are so distinct that they could not contact them. 后半句指代乱七八糟。
In order to understand the gist of the statement, it is necessary to see an example. 这句话基本上是废话
第二body句子顺序组织太乱

如果你的开头没有改，文章不会超过2分，改完了，现在至少4.5。按照我的估计。原先那个开头彻底跑题，没有interaction和没有meaningful interaction差得太远了，怎么能在这里搞错！

三个段落的例证充分就可以，但是没必要讲故事，形容描述一大堆不如把chronical order和逻辑线索给清楚来的效果好（例如第二body，写清楚谁give rise to 谁）。而且你不一定非得“我影响你，你也得会来影响我”，这个interaction我认为没必要理解成reciprocity，只要是彼此的交集就可以。因而自然科学和社科相交结出经济学的果实就足够，不一定非得自然科学贡献给社科一个经济学，社科再回过头送自然科学一个XX，etc.彼此共同发挥效果产生的结果就应该是足够的例证了。

另外，写之前一定要自己搞清楚三个东西彼此都是什么，自己这里的认知可不能一团浆糊。这一点上这篇文章还算做的可以。

lovebrianUID: 157127

瓦赛~~~~imong把这帖子的题目改成这个了~~~呵呵~~~顶一下来学习学习

sniper613UID: 147372

感谢imong, 我每次都在word里面检查过的，没有下划线才发出来的，是不是word2000级别太低。
我还是觉得interaction应该是指两者之间，不然interact和impact等价了。
你觉得呢？

imongUID: 140258

我的理解：

interaction的动作主体是两者，但是产物未必就得一人一半儿。我认为在这里的interaction并不是说两个公司强强联合要求结果是必须各自的算盘都能落实，而是只要有额外的通过“共同参与”得到的结果就够了。这个结果未必依赖于任何一方。

当然，这是我的理解。看法不同的话尽管写就是，只要给说明白说清楚就好。

konieeUID: 158315

我觉得只有 the combination of the social science and science is the only way to realize the humanity.Humanity 的中文意思是人文精神.....
  你觉得呢

sniper613UID: 147372

interaction的动作主体是两者
我觉得我写的都是一个参与到另一个里面，
A act B, B有所发展。但是很难找到B act A, A变好。
如果一段举两个例子，时间上完全不行啊

imongUID: 140258

okay
所以我的意思就是不管写A参与B还是B参与A，只要是两个东西collaborate出来什么新的产物，就算大功告成。至于谁参与谁，产物归属谁，不关心。

当然，你的文章里面的例证，除去讲故事reiterate的语句，仍然是很丰富的。

sniper613UID: 147372

请问imong
你的文章里面的例证，除去讲故事reiterate的语句，
哪些是不好的语句，清指出，谢谢！