issue47 考虑对intellect的理解

sniper613UID：147372

我怎么听说爱因斯坦同学的智商比一般人高100啊

xqmelissaUID：140370

这个题目，我对intellect的理解还是智商、智力

题目说：社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视，比如人的推理和其他认知能力。
我的立论是：同意题目观点，没有给予足够重视。
然后围绕这一点进行阐述，逻辑脉络就是：为什么说智力重要----为什么说社会重视不够----如何去加强重视。

至于你们所说的EQ问题，题目根本没有涉及啊？
题目就是问你，你是否认为现在社会给予IQ足够的重视
所以，我认为，如果再牵扯进来EQ的话，可能偏离的有点远。

xqmelissaUID：140370

噢，补充一句：
可能第一段我的例子，BILL 的是没一些科学家的好，同意这个观点，谢谢！

sniper613UID：147372

晕了，再想想回答你

ballackxjjUID：134855

我觉得你论述的是学校没有成功培养intellect能力，而不是does not place enough emphasis on the intellect。两个例子都不是很有力


姐姐语言表达真是。。。。。不错！

sniper613UID：147372

题目说：社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视，比如人的推理和其他认知能力。我的立论是：同意题目观点，没有给予足够重视。
然后围绕这一点进行阐述，逻辑脉络就是：为什么说智力重要----为什么说社会重视不够----如何去加强重视。

至于你们所说的EQ问题，题目根本没有涉及啊？
题目就是问你，你是否认为现在社会给予IQ足够的重视
所以，我认为，如果再牵扯进来EQ的话，可能偏离的有点远。

我的观点是只要和题目里面关键词可以联系的内容都可以写啊
一般意义上讲，IQ基本上是和EQ相对的。题目说没有对IQ重视，但是也没问你如何加强重视啊？
我记得issue里面有些题是关于竞争是否有利,但是我们仍然可以联系到合作阿。
所以我觉得这道题完全可以联系到EQ上面去。
另外：我写了一篇立论和你完全相反的，不是抬杠啊，呵呵~~~~，你看看，好吗？

imongUID：140258

拜托各位~
没觉得这篇文章语言表达很出色，society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.后半句怎么看怎么觉得是一个Toefl语法的选项，还有下面的being existed，前面in the process of success之类的用词，拜托各位不要溢美过头了~

刚刚琢磨了一下，觉得关于intellect的理解其实这道题目有漏洞可以钻。看我开的新帖子。

文章并没有特别出彩的地方，不过基本上响应了题目。其实第一段用bill gates的例子我觉得未必不妥，毕竟前面已经都说了Intellect, defined as the capacity for rational or intelligent thought，定义已经下死了，又不违背常理。sniper和paisley的反驳，恐怕都是先变化预设，然后再进行驳论的吧？我想也许这已经超出issue的“立论”而进入“辩论”了。在行文过程中是不用涉及辩论的，成功立论就可以了。

xqmelissaUID：140370

最初由 sniper613 发布
[B]我的观点是只要和题目里面关键词可以联系的内容都可以写啊
一般意义上讲，IQ基本上是和EQ相对的。题目说没有对IQ重视，但是也没问你如何加强重视啊？
我记得issue里面有些题是关于竞争是否有利,但是我们仍然可以联系到合作阿。
所以我觉得这道题完全可以联系到EQ上面去。

我现在是这么想的,可能我们的想法都可行,只是界定不同罢了,所以只要可以自圆其说就OK了,而不必大家都写成一个模式

你觉得呢?

xqmelissaUID：140370

最初由 imong 发布
[B]拜托各位~
没觉得这篇文章语言表达很出色，society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.后半句怎么看怎么觉..

以下省略...... [/B]

:(
真是的,一点面子都不给
郁闷~

lovebrianUID：157127

不知道imong看了我的语言会怎么说~~sigh

xqmelissaUID：140370

最初由 lovebrian 发布
[B]不知道imong看了我的语言会怎么说~~sigh [/B]

哈哈
直接砍了
:p  ;)  :p

lovebrianUID：157127

你也太不给我面子拉`~55555

dezhiUID：156141

瞧你们说的，呵呵
真会开玩笑:)
共同努力！

davidjackyUID：135962

最初由 xqmelissa 发布
[B]Issue 47   
Issue 47
Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.
社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视，比如人的推理和其他认知能力。

正好我也看了飞跃的材料：过来讨论一下，希望大家能够帮我想象这个提纲可行性，我不能确定的是第四段的写法。怎么布局，还是带一下即可。
我的提纲
支持作者的说法：
1)学校里学的知识是job-related的工作，这个我不想和您们争论我只想说这个观点是正对这个题目的。
In schools or colleges, students have to learn the theoretical courses and abide the rigid curricula, which restrain, at certain level, the student culture imagination and cognitive skills.--具体例子就是说叫我们一些practical skills-job-related education比如：我们去工厂实习，老师们会告诉我们不要乱动，好好听操作，将来工作能用。
2). 在工作岗位也是这样，每天重复无聊的工作，比如：我们天津的学生都知道天才公司，很多人以为买盗版光盘的，实际是个大公司，对此我们也不追求，我们回到下面买盗版光盘的地方，一般那些不懂电脑的大妈都回装机，手法比我熟练，我们加入这个“站队”，也只会装机，限制思维，李子不是这样了，李子：在工厂，我们工人以来计算机辅助控制，只需简单按几个纽，一天任务完成，不去想怎么做的，为什么？所以限制思维With the development of the line-production and computer-progress, people in the work are gradually accustomed to the strict courses, as the consequence, it declines the people's enterprise.-secretary-working machines
3). 这个比较麻烦，我想笔锋一转，又怕过分会跑自己d的TS，大家帮我参考：
No doubt, people should abide by the common courses and progresses, in order to conform to an effective group. 但是我们应该怎么做But we should cultivate a field that can prompt individual's reasoning and other cognitive skills.



下面谈谈我对这片文章的理解，请大家予以斧正：恳请大家指正，往往纠正的正确的自己还很得意，希望大家坦言，学习本来就是一个值得争论的话题吗？我个人认为没有绝对的权威，ETS也不是，尽管控制着我们的命运，至少是我们这些人。
As we all know, intellect, including reasoning and other cognitive skills, is an important factor in the process of individual success and social development. However, society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.
提出观点，很明确，给分，尽管我说了不算。说的是社会忽视了intellect的教育，和我的一样，如果我没有记错pay attention to 才对，这个至少没见过。你那个写成这样，你看可以吗？however, society does not pay  sufficient attention to intellect , neither does the somewhat unresonable educational system.或者这样：however, society, education system in particular, does not pay  sufficient attention to intellect .教育制度前不要用的那么狠，既然你对教育已经否定了，ETS认为很生气。
Intellect, defined as the capacity for[B][ability of] [/B]  rational or intelligent thought[B][thinking], [/B]  includes reasoning ability, capabilities of analyzing and solving problems, etc.[B][and the like多几个字，可以不这样][/B]  It is a crucial factor in the process of not only individual success, but also the development of society. Take Bill Gates, the founder of one famous corporation in the world, as an example.[B][这个地方被大家否定了，很遗憾，不过我想是这样，该一下Bill Gates, hornored for his great intellect by the world, 将Microsoft公司搞得蒸蒸日上。世界最大了，谁还怀疑世界错了，换个角度，错误也是真理，正如男女之间，不爱也是一种爱，总比故意去伤害好][/B]  If he had not owned high intellect, Microsoft under his control, would have had no opportunity to develop advanced computer operating systems and dominate the PC market triumphantly. Therefore, intellect has an important influence on the individual success. As for the development of a society, the function of intellect also could not be neglected[B][今天GITER给我改作文提到这个词，你这个地方我看也改成这样could not be neglected or ignored][/B] . Social development depends on exploring more unknown fields, other than fields being existed. Discovering the unknown areas rests on the ability of reasoning, a factor included in intellect and an impetus for social development. As a result, intellect is a basic factor promoting individual success and social development.大的方面没问题

The phenomenon that society does not place enough emphasis on the training of intellect [U]is produced by [/U] --->[B]results from  [/B]  the defect加S，下面说SUCH AS  of existing educational system to some extent, such as overemphasizing [U]on [/U]  不要姓马?一般我写overemphasizing 长相，你找不到好老婆，overemphasizing 人品，你也找不到好老公scores. Grades, standards[B][one of the most important standards] [/B]  to measure [B][measure太俗了fathom][/B] how much knowledge in textbooks being mastered by students, have many defects[这里嫁了为什么前面不佳]. For example, the capability trained in the test is [U][B]the repeating [/B]  [/U]  to tediously repeat  what the book says, while others, such as creative thinking and reasoning, could not be improved from[B][during][/B]  this process. A consequence of these standard tests is the fact that some students, owning high scores in the school, have difficulties to fit [B][in qualifing][/B] the job requiring them to use their cognitive skills, other tan [B][rather than][/B] repeating. Only if educational systems could pay more attention on the training of the development of students' whole abilities, jobs requiring more cognitive skills are easier to be taken on than ever. Then, the improvement of educational systems will bring advantages to society.个人认为这一段论述和我的一致，我也会这么写！


对不起，今天太晚了，下一段不予评价，sorry
The approach of solving this problem is that not only educational systems, but also whole society should begin to attach importance to the training of intellect, as doing in some successful companies and universities nowadays. Some successful companies and universities adopt many measures to overcome defects in existing school education. For example, Microsoft has a strict procedure of enrolling employees, including an elaborate designed test which could scientific evaluate various intellect levels of job-finders. Employees in this company will receive a systematic training to improve their comprehensive intellect not only reasoning, but also other cognitive skills. There is another instance about the successful pushing an approach which reduces the pressure of pursuing high scores in Chinese elementary school recent years. As a result, a survey taken by an authoritative organization shows that the general abilities have obviously increasing after carrying out the approach, and recommends other schools to adopt this approach. From these examples, we could draw a conclusion that some good ways to solve the problem of ignoring intellect could be used as references by both educational systems and the whole society.

To sum up, society should pay more attention on intellect by adopting some effective approaches immediately, since it is too important to be neglected. （557 words）

以下省略...... [/B]

davidjackyUID：135962

不好意思，以前来的时候从不乏文章，本来我想把我改的地方变粗，怎么全变了，对不起，影响版面整洁，自我大嫂中。。。。