【口语小组】mrt0917作业贴（12.6）

mrt0917UID：3555402

12.6 一战
口语考了20
打算五月再报一次。
求各位狠批！！！！！
之前没能坚持下来。现在放假回家可以好好备考了！！！！！
网盘地址：http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gd4CajT
:loveliness:

最近一直在实习，早出晚归。还好实习地点离学校近，中午抽时间跑回来录口语。
有没有小伙伴可以推荐一个录音app啊。能在手机上录好上传就好了

mrt0917UID：3555402

10.13
Task 1: Which of the following would you rather be? Lawyer, vet or restaurant owner. Explain your answer in details.
Task 2 : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s impolite to make calls or send text messages at a dinner table. Explain in details.


10.11
task1 Which of the following activities do you think benefits young people the most? Doing team sports, talking to seniors of the community, or traveling.
task2 Some people prefer to live in residence with strict rules, others prefer to live in residence without strict rules. Which do you prefer and why?




10.10
task 1 what are the benefits of talking with older family members? include specific and details.
task 2 where would you more likely to choose to live, a place noisy but near shopping centers, restaurant and transportation hub, or a place quiet but is not close to anything?
第一题说了：
life experience
feel comfortable
第二题说了两点：
便利
safe

10.9
task 1 if you choose a place to live, you would choose to live in 1, a place near your school or workplace, 2, a place near your parents' home, and 3, a place near transportation hub such as bus terminal?
task 2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the government should spend more money on projects that can encourage citizens to have healthier lifestyles.


10.8
task 1 how do you deal with homesick?
task 2 some people like to keep or collect old things. others throw things away when they are worn out. what is your preference？

第一题说了两点：
make a phone call
go home
第二题说了两点：
old things are full of memory
it can be useful one day


10.7
task 1 describe a person that you look up to as your role model. please include specific reasons in your answer.
task 2 agree or disagree: when students hand in their assignments late, their grade should be reduced.

今天说的不好，刚从家回到寝室超累的。
第一题说的是我以前在新东方认识的一个和我同专业的老师
第二题说的是反对意见~好的作业本来就需要更多的时间去斟酌啊找资料什么的~


10.6
task 1 describe an artist, musician or performer that you think is great. give specific reasons why you like him or her.
task 2 do you think students today need to work a lot harder than students in the past to get a good job?
第一题说的是周杰伦啊，实在想不出来该说谁。。。
第二题是反对意见，两点：
working hard doesn't mean you can get a good job
lose ability

10.4
task 1 if your foreign friend comes to your country, what food would you recommend him to try and why? please give specific reasons.
task 2 some people believe that in the future students will be taking courses online. others think that traditional classrooms will still exist in the future study. what is your opinion and why?
第一题一开始没反应过来。说了两点：
famous and delicious
easy to be found
第二题说了两点：
online study cause the lack of ability
built relationship
求问小伙伴一个最基本的问题我的发音有什么地方需要改进的吗~




10.2
第一次录好激动。只录了前两题。
task 1 what type of music do you like the LEAST? explain why you dislike that kind of music.
task 2 all children should learn how to draw or paint. do you agree or disagree?
第一题说了两点：
noisy and aloud
hard to learn
第二题说了两点：
some children do not like
children should play in this period
觉得自己口语练的很不流畅，停顿频率特别高，听上去像一个字一个说出来的。怎么解决:mad:
求小伙伴们给给意见

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mrholiday 发表于 2014-10-3 12:29
同学我看不到你的口语

你传完之后不要直接复制地址栏的地址，

好的好的。我回去就发。不好意思哈

mrt0917UID：3555402

mrholiday 发表于 2014-10-3 12:29
同学我看不到你的口语

你传完之后不要直接复制地址栏的地址，

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQ8EOXc
谢谢哈~

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mrholiday 发表于 2014-10-4 00:27
10.02

task 1:

:p谢谢哈~

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10.4
T1 开头，if 从句是虚拟额语气，主句的will是不是要换成would？ country和city较多，country可以用China 替换。
T2 可以直接说观点，不需要复述（口语和写作不同），一句话说明白自己的观点即可。face to face 可以换成 in persopn(面对面)
楼主虽然是个女的，但说话很有力气，挺好的。

RaistlinCHUID：3515565

冒昧点评1006
这录音的声音怎么这么奇怪……虽然发音挺好
T1 was amazed by that    不是in the young people吧，among the young people，并且这句的主语应该是they
T2 理由很充分 个别语法小细节，比如应该是the second reason和whether you are wanted or not

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RaistlinCH 发表于 2014-10-7 22:30
冒昧点评1006
这录音的声音怎么这么奇怪……虽然发音挺好
T1 was amazed by that    不是in the young pe ...

谢谢~
声音怪。。。是不是像男的。。。
我刷了好几遍你的帖子~~~还以为你忘记上传了，现在去听~~~

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mrt0917 发表于 2014-10-7 22:55
谢谢~
声音怪。。。是不是像男的。。。
我刷了好几遍你的帖子~~~还以为你忘记上传了，现在去 ...

引起误解不好意思……不是楼主的声音怪，是录音很奇怪，有各种杂音在里面……

万里追风兽UID：3526862

最近事情有点多，让你等了这么久实在抱歉，我的录音会今明天补上。
10.8
T1:我觉得开头你说的easy to go home没有必要，因为这对主题没有帮助，也没有让步的效果。实际口语中也不要求一定要遵循实际情况，怎么好说怎么说就行了。楼主开头可以换成思乡病的危害很大，所以必须想办法解决，然后我如何解决balabalabala。还有中间那句how can i deal with that，这种问句没什么意义，当然如果一时想不出话来可以拖延一下时间。
T2整体不错，不过开头结尾复述题目或重复观点有点冗余，多给点时间说例子就好了。
语音语调整体不错。话说楼主是安徽的？我也是~

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万里追风兽 发表于 2014-10-10 17:42
最近事情有点多，让你等了这么久实在抱歉，我的录音会今明天补上。
10.8
T1:我觉得开头你说的easy to go  ...

谢谢点评啊~
对呀，我是安徽的，我在芜湖读书~你呢

万里追风兽UID：3526862

我是合肥的，在重庆读书。
还有我10.8的作业交啦，你要是还有时间的话麻烦帮忙改一下吧，谢谢啦

纪晓晴UID：3561823

1010~~
task1 内容方面开头表示观点的时间有点长~~不如直接就说明“near parents”,三个观点的话其实是有点局促的，不如少一个观点，把每个观点都说的细致一点，语速有点快，所以感觉发音不是很标准`
task2 语音和语调都比上一个好很多！！还是内容方面第二个观点其实有一点废话，就是感觉没有提出任何有力的论据，可以再从其他方面想想观点，第一个单词“basis”而不是“base"
一战说的这么流利已经很好啦~加油加油啦~~