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我11.23就要考试了,现在才刚刚开始准备,心里确实还是挺着急的。
再加上刚开始联系托福口语,对各种细节或者要求了解都不多,请大家多多批评!

1018
Task 1: If the school received a large amount of money, what do you wish it will be spent on? A sports gym, a laboratory or a scientific research facility?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntt7Mpb
Task 2: Some people believe that it is important for young people to have a part-time job as a working experience, while others think they should spend more time on their studies. What is your opinion and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1nt3HjzN

1017
Task 1: Talk about the one thing government can do to improve the educational system in your country. Give details and examples in your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntE60yt
Task 2 : Some people prefer to own cars, others prefer to mainly use public transportation. Which do you agree with? Explain why.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnw9U03

1016
Task 1: Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdzP74B
Task 2 : Some people prefer to plan what to do in their free time ahead of time, others prefer to not having such plans. Which do you prefer? Explain why.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3zf5tV

1015
Task 1: Which of following study methods do you think is the most effective? Having discussions, repeating class materials or taking a lot of notes. Give specific examples and details in your explanation.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0vlWIW
Task 2 : Some people prefer to sit in the front of a classroom during a lecture, others prefer to sit in the back during a lecture. Which do to think is better? Explain your response in details and examples
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6yVuWy

1014
Task 1: Talk about a thing you always wanted to do but didn’t have time to yet. Explain why you want to do it, give examples and details in your explanation.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnng2xp
Task 2 : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live at a place where the climate stays the same all year round.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0b9g20

1013
task1 Which of the following would you rather be? Lawyer, vet or restaurant owner. Explain your answer in details
http://pan.baidu.com/s/12b6yE
task2 Do you agree r disagree with the following statement? It is impolite to make calls or send text messages at a dinner table.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQEeFQi



1012
task1 Which of the following brings you more pleasure? Spend time with friends, study by yourself or doing sports? Explain why in details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjlrYc1
task2 Some students prefer to have an early class schedule with classes in the morning, others prefer to have a late class schedule so they can go to classes in the afternoon. Which one do you prefer? Explain why.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/11vAk2




1011
task1 Which of the following activities do you think benefits young people the most? Doing team sports, talking to seniors of the community, or traveling.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDgWFmD
task2 Some people prefer to live in residence with strict rules, others prefer to live in residence without strict rules.

Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDCKLqD



1010
task 1 what are the benefits of talking with older family members? include specific and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn8LcSn
task 2 where would you more likely to choose to live, a place noisy but near shopping centers, restaurant and transportation hub, or a place quiet but is not close to anything?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD8bbKt



1009
task 1 if you choose a place to live, you would choose to live in 1, a place near your school or workplace, 2, a place near your parents' home, and 3, a place near transportation hub such as bus terminal?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDcmVbN
task 2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the government should spend more money on projects that can encourage citizens to have healthier lifestyles.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTHYj8j




1008
task 1 how do you deal with homesick?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6NXERK
task 2 some people like to keep or collect old things. others throw things away when they are worn out. what is your preference?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdEc8kN




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task 1 describe a person that you look up to as your role model. please include specific reasons in your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGLxXGy
task 2 agree or disagree: when students hand in their assignments late, their grade should be reduced.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQxP6qm
第一次做托福口语,实在是感觉非常无力
拿到题目不知道该说什么,就算知道说也感觉不知道用什么表达
另外,请教小伙伴们,我没有录成MP3格式,用win7自带的录音器录成了wma可以吗?
为什么在百度网盘上一点击文件,什么都没有被播放,只有下载之后才能正确播放呢?
刚刚加入口语小组什么都不懂,希望小伙伴多多包容多多指教!

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发表于 2014-10-8 21:54:10 |显示全部楼层
不好意思我来晚啦,今天一天满课,先抱歉了……
10.7
楼主第一次就说成这样已经很好啦。语音语调很舒服,不过说的时候最好不要出现同一句话的重复,T1里面你前后都说了more than a teacher,同样意思可以尝试换个句式。楼主说的不够流利,开始说口语都是这样的,以后多练练就好了,或者实在说不出来前期可以尝试先写出来。T2总体不错,还是说的不流利的问题。
楼主时间多的话可以尝试跟读,还有就是刷机经,平时多想思路,积累多了看到题目就知道说什么了。
wma格式我可以听,百度网盘的问题我也不清楚了。
我也是新手,水平有限,欢迎交流~

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US-applicant 美版2016offer达人

发表于 2014-10-8 22:16:42 |显示全部楼层
万里追风兽 发表于 2014-10-8 21:54
不好意思我来晚啦,今天一天满课,先抱歉了……
10.7
楼主第一次就说成这样已经很好啦。语音语调很舒服, ...

恩,跟读是吗?那我跟读TPO的听力吗?
今天满课还给我这么多的建议,辛苦你啦~~

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发表于 2014-10-8 22:27:14 |显示全部楼层
西瓜贝 发表于 2014-10-8 22:16
恩,跟读是吗?那我跟读TPO的听力吗?
今天满课还给我这么多的建议,辛苦你啦~~

老托听力Part C或者TPO的听力都可以。可以看看这个帖子https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1406924-1-1.html

我的口语今天尽量晚上放上去,麻烦楼主明天帮我改一下啦,麻烦了~

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发表于 2014-10-9 22:45:19 |显示全部楼层
10.8
task1 be eager to do sth.  楼主说的be eager for doing还有就是my progress in my work...楼主说的是with my work;最后一句中thus I get over homesick我觉得用got会好一点。内容很具体,很丰富,已经很好了,发音也很清晰,让人容易明白(我觉得这一点很重要)

task2 内容很丰富,有具体的数字非常好,相比t1也没有用词搭配上的错误,唯一不足的就是 最后还剩5s,剩的挺多的,最好不要空着,仓促间想不到说的可以说句总结语凑时间嘛,就像你t1中最后一句那样,你可以说this is why I like to collect and keep old things神马的

总体而言内容很丰富啦,发音也很清晰,我觉得已经很好了,就是再注意一下搭配的问题,如果还想再提升的话也可以多积累一些高级一点的词语。(啊呀我说得这么高端其实自己做得不怎么样,比楼主差远啦,加油吧共同进步!)

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hellowflower 发表于 2014-10-9 22:45
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task1 be eager to do sth.  楼主说的be eager for doing还有就是my progress in my work...楼主说的 ...

谢啦~~我感觉自己说的时候会不停地有小的语法错误,自己反复听录音感觉错误还比较明显,但是在说的时候一紧张就乱了。。。哎

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发表于 2014-10-10 01:14:04 |显示全部楼层
楼主语音语调都很好哇~语速也很快,也没怎么卡住,非常流利。其实我考试时间比你就晚一点点,可说的那是相差十万八千里。。。。经常不知道说些什么好
Task1: 例子很充实,理由很好。其他感觉也没什么问题。
Task2: 我觉得小伙伴应该把重点放在理由上,为什么应该,而不是政府应该怎么去做,显得第二点理由有一点点偏。但是总体很好!有一个小的语法错误就是spend doing sth楼楼说成了 to do, 下次注意就好啦~

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范范范唯 发表于 2014-10-10 01:14
楼主语音语调都很好哇~语速也很快,也没怎么卡住,非常流利。其实我考试时间比你就晚一点点,可说的那是相差 ...

谢谢亲~~我录了好几遍才能说成这样,感觉想要第一遍就能有这么多内容说还得多多努力啊。。。

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发表于 2014-10-11 01:47:18 |显示全部楼层
10.9作业
楼主的口语有2个优点:1)通俗易懂,观点明确 2)例子丰富,有血有肉。赞一个!
对照了OG的口语要求,我觉得你回答的已经很好了。继续保持即可。要说意见的话就是注意说快之后要保证语法的正确。比如:you said something in the task 2 "I can chat with my friends about what current life",说快了之后这个is 不容易听出来。还有一个细节是task 2的观点, you said "I prefer to live in the noisy place"。我觉得最好还是说成“I prefer to live close to busy places like shopping centers and transporation hub”。 虽然题目中有noisy这个词,但是感觉还是委婉一点好~~

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发表于 2014-10-11 07:26:17 |显示全部楼层
DavidCharles 发表于 2014-10-11 01:47
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楼主的口语有2个优点:1)通俗易懂,观点明确 2)例子丰富,有血有肉。赞一个!
对照了OG的口语 ...

恩恩,好的。不过我总是感觉自己的语调有些生硬,还想再多改进一下
谢谢你啦~~

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发表于 2014-10-11 13:14:43 |显示全部楼层
10.10【亲以后评之前记得加上评的是哪天的的这个日期呦~】

hotel的例子很奇怪= =不过倒是没什么问题 如果前面给出【你要出去玩的时候】类似这样的一个条件就会自然很多吧

第二题没什么问题啦 觉得说得很好  不过noisy这个词有unpleasant noise这样贬义的意思所以是不是考虑更换一下用词?

一起加油~

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发表于 2014-10-12 13:13:59 |显示全部楼层
10.11  口语作业互评

我也是刚刚开始互评,评的不好的地方请大家指教。我觉得我有些说的也不一定对,楼主要自己判断哦~
task1:
细节:
doing team sport can help cultivate cooporation---我觉得这里的cultivate换成develop,或者grow the sense of cooporation。
cooporation读音有些差别(楼主读的像corporation),可以查字典听一下--这建议有点精益求精了
思路和全文:
楼主说的很连贯,易懂。全片只说了一个论点,例子详实,但我觉得可以再稍微说得快一点然后多说一点会更充实一些。
(这里提个小问题,task1,2真的可以只说一点吗?我在新东方上课的时候老师都要求说两点,但我觉得如果说亮点例子就不是很有血有肉,我这里有些困惑)


task2:
dormitory发音有点偏差可以查查字典看一下哦
觉得楼主说得很棒!例子很好,语音语调也很好!给你一个大拇指!哈哈

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发表于 2014-10-14 07:01:23 |显示全部楼层
1012楼主说的好好呀!!内容上也很丰富,很个人化~
可能唯一美中不足的就是会有“嗯”什么的吧。。我觉得可以自己先多留些时间打草稿,然后再说~说几个固定的模板以后就会好了吧~加油!

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发表于 2014-10-15 00:12:40 |显示全部楼层
T1
第一个owner的发音
好棒啊 自惭形秽啊 语音语调都很棒 还很流利 例子也详实 赞
T2
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咱们俩的例子有些像哦  真没什么好挑的了....
加油~

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发表于 2014-10-15 14:40:08 |显示全部楼层
我来评1014的啦!
T1
说得好好啊!语音语调非常好!非常流利!例子也到位!

T2
很好啊!就是lz你的语调好像总体上扬?有时候可以试着降一下?
内容都很好啊!

总结:自己水平有限,你说的非常好!

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