【托福作文】echo的作文贴

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TPO1 独立写作
The increasingly competition of society require students have more comprehensive ability.Reflecting to the change , universities and colleges should encourage students to walk out of class to attend sports games and social activities rather than stuck in the classrooms and libraries.Therefore euqal financial support should put in sports and social activities as that in classes and libraries.My reasons for supporting this statements are following.

First of all,  comtemporary jobs not only requires students have proficient knowlege in specific field but also physical health. That's why people have to take an physical examination before receiving a job. Large amount of work enforced on the employees causes huge pressure. The negtive emotions produced by pressure lead to bad work performance even  poor health condition.Considering this, a strong body is really fundamental element for good job performance.Taking part in sports activities can strenghen the body  ,meanwhile, provide people with efficient ways to release bad feelings. What's more,sports activities has life long effect on humans.

Secondly, the tendency of  corperating in various fields indicates that it's less possible to complete an major work by a single person.Given the essencial role of social skills in the business interaction, engaging in some social activities in the universities and collesges become gradually necessary. Taking one of my classmates as example, he once joined the Japaness corner and get acquaint with a Japaness.After their nice talk ,my classmate kept contact with the man.In the end of this semster, the Japaness introduced my classmate to a producer of a Japaness TV station. And that's not the end of the story, because the relationship between the producer and my classmates, they promote the collaboration of their own companies.Withought mature social skill, my classmate can never make this happen.

It's undynable that, classes and libraries are the major resource where students gain professional knowledge.However,sports and social activities can contribute to high efficiency of study and work.Students who play in the sports activities share the team spirit which do good to the groop study as well.Making friends is not the sole purpose of social activites,it can also inspire students to form critical mind through communicating with dieferent people.

For all three reasons I provided above, we can come to the conclusion that university and colleges should give financial support to sports and social activities as classs and libraries.

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求大牛们指点迷津，
几次托福作文都在20分上下，这次要好好的练练了！

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怎么没有人帮我改一改呢？

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TPO 2 独立作文
People never doubt that telling the truth is the most essential principle in any relationship between people.Someone has ever claimed, however, that the world is filled with lies.Will lies destroy the relationship among people? As a matter of fact, lies are not merely playing the negative role in the society.

To be honest, real fact of the world sometimes turns out to be crude.It’s not consistent to people’s willing to reveal the awkward news.For example,doctors constantly have hard time telling patients that they only have a short time to live.When young children fail in an examination, parents wouldn't criticize them for didn't work hard previously.In stead,parents might say they just haven't get well prepared for the example and encourage them to work harder. Fake truth can work out opposite effect.

In addition,lies can act out an opposite effect as people commonly convinced.In an job interview, candidates might tell fake truth to replenish themselves, in order to achieve the job opportunity. The fake truth is understandable if it doesn't go far from the truth. Of course,over exaggerating the ability of candidates is not appreciated. People should aware of the distinction between white lies and over exaggerating.Proper embellishing of the handed-on experience can help the candidates leave a deep impression on the interviewers.From this case,telling lies is not thoroughly a bad behavior.

Finally, although it's human’s traditional virtue to be honest in  any relationship between people, lies and repair some mistakes people made and reverse an endangered  relationship. Women siting in a classic restaurant and waiting for the  men who hasn't shown up, doesn't like to hear words like ,I forgot the time. It's really hurt feelings to the female friends. Men can explain in another way ,maybe traffic jam is better excuse than the former one.

All these three reasons I argued above help to come the conclusion, telling the truth is not that always necessary in the interpersonal communication.

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这位童鞋，作文贴是要参加小组作业的~这样发会被大家忽略，可以把写好的放在讨论版，让大家改，不过这种也很难得到回复就是了，还有就是参加写作小组，觉得综合弱的话就出综合的题目的时候参加就好了~

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dolphin_wby 发表于 2014-10-24 21:50
这位童鞋，作文贴是要参加小组作业的~这样发会被大家忽略，可以把写好的放在讨论版，让大家改，不过这种也很 ...

哦，原来 是这样 呀，谢谢你！

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TPO3 独立作文
There is a proverb goes that " friends are the only  person we can rely on when we are going outside". Speaking about the importance of keeping old friends or making new friends,some people reclaim that it's more important to keep contact to old friends than to get acquaint with new friends. Is it really fit to the fact? I cast doubt on that statement.

It's no deny fact that old friends are great fortune in our life, we feel no limitation or pressure in getting along with them. However, only keeping old friends lead to a small friends circle. Imagine that, you keep talking to the same people with familiar topic.Your life is cycling in a copied model. In another words, old friends can't bring you creative minds. It is just like a poor frog living in the bottom of a well. Your life never being stimulated by new things. I don’t believe there will be anyone want to live in such an invariable and boring life in this colorful world with multiple possibility.

In addition, a large social relationship net can equip people with easier access to the constantly developing  society. Most jobs require people has mature social skills and take use of the interpersonal relationship to accomplish the project better. Like I've been mentioned above, compared to old friends, new friends can be depict as fresh blood of creative air in people's life. Some amazing inspiration is induced through the process of getting along with new friends.

Last but not least, not all old friends are true friends, those who still keep in touch with you no matter  how long you neglect contacting them are true friends.Enlarge the circle of friends has more weight than only interact with your old friends.

Considering all the reasons I argued above, we can safely draw a conclusion,that is it's more important to make new friends than keep your old friends.