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11.29全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqHz4Cs
Task1: Describe a day that you enjoyed the most or was the most special to you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task2: Some people prefer to have classes during the day and do part-time jobs in the evening while others prefer to have classes in
the evening and do part-time jobs during the day. Which do you prefer?
Task3-6:TPO11

11.28全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdAFQxl
Task1: Describe a job, career or profession which you wish to pursue. Explain why this job is your ideal job. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task2: Some people think that government should spend funding to protect the endangered animals. Other people think that the funding should come from private sources only. What is your opinion and why? Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task3-6: TPO12

11.27全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqGd3Ha
Task 1: Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of children playing video games.
Give details and examples in your response.
Task 2: When learning to use a new product, some people prefer to read the instruction
manual. Others prefer to figure out how to use the product on their own. Which do you
prefer and why? Give details and examples to support your response.
Task3-6:TPO13

11.26全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj2TQ7j
Task 1: The university is recruiting volunteers to help the community protecting the
environment, which of the following would you choose to do? Pick up trash and litters
on the street, plant trees and flowers, teach children about protecting the environment.
Task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the statement that it is acceptable for students to
disagree with their instructor?
Task3-6:TPO14

11.25的全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1nt6zLs1
Task 1: Describe a person you enjoy talking to, it could be a family or afriend. Explain
why you like talking to this person.
Task 2: Some people prefer to watch a sport game from the audience seat, others
prefer to be in the sport field and compete with others. Which do you prefer to do?
Task3-6:TPO15

11.24全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWySoVE
Task 1: If your university plans to improve the life of students by one of the following
methods, which do you prefer? Building a new cafeteria, Build a new indoor swimming
pool or Making improvements in dormitories.
Task 2: Some people speak out in class, others prefer to listen and quietly observe.
Which do you think leads to greater success in school?
Task3-6:TPO16

11.23的全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj6XAtn
Task 1: Talk about an important skill of yours, and explain why this skill is important for
you.
Task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the statement that having class discussions is
important to students?
Task3-6:TPO17

11.22的全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/18ifuu
Task 1: Talk about the advantages of online shopping. Give examples and details in
your response.
Task 2: Some people prefer to prepare meals at home, others like to eat out in
restaurants. Which do you prefer? Explain in details and examples.
Task3--6:TPO18

11.19的全套:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0q2Zeg
Task 1: Describe how people's lives changed in your country. Explain why this change
is important.
Task 2: Some people prefer to go straight to their destination while traveling, others
prefer to spend more time looking around on the way. Which do you prefer?
Task3-4:TPO21


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发表于 2014-11-20 22:20:05 |显示全部楼层
忘记贴题目了~~
Task 1: Describe how people's lives changed in your country. Explain why this change
is important.
Task 2: Some people prefer to go straight to their destination while traveling, others
prefer to spend more time looking around on the way. Which do you prefer?
Task3-4:TPO21

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发表于 2014-11-23 15:05:59 |显示全部楼层
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T1. 说得很棒 基本上没有问题
T2. 声音时大时小是个什么情况。It;s more expensive than ... 这里语法注意一下 就好

总体感觉很不错的。
我看到你占座是全套,但是版主分的是1&2哦。
LL我昨天没做这个TPO就没办法帮你批改后3-6了。
抱歉哈~

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发表于 2014-11-24 13:12:07 |显示全部楼层
lyy5211 发表于 2014-11-23 15:05
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T1. 说得很棒 基本上没有问题
T2. 声音时大时小是个什么情况。It;s more expensive than ... 这里语 ...

谢谢点评~~!

其实我之前在帖子里写的是全套的,不知道为啥就分到了t1t2嗷~~~
没关系哈~
已经回评了,抱歉有点晚。

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发表于 2014-11-27 11:18:58 |显示全部楼层
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t1:声音很好。发音清楚好理解。细节可以。
t2:graduate之后为什么会有帮助没说清楚,觉得要说最好说到细节,只说一点没关系。第二点说得就很泛,没有细节这样不好
t3:建议r中的内容少说,听力多说。没有大问题~
t4:illustrate发音注意。内容在连贯些更好~
t5:说的不错!条理清晰,理由解释的好。但是最后一个词没懂,eract?
t6:第二条细节说得有点少,时间足够,说得再快点就好了

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发表于 2014-11-27 21:51:31 |显示全部楼层
wawaGRE 发表于 2014-11-27 11:18
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t1:声音很好。发音清楚好理解。细节可以。
t2:graduate之后为什么会有帮助没说清楚,觉得要说最好 ...

谢谢小伙伴的评价~总结得好到位,t5其实是想说correct的。。。一直以为eract也是改正的意思0.0……经过你的提醒查了一下发现没有这个词(跪

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美版2016offer达人

发表于 2014-11-28 13:11:52 |显示全部楼层
t1.很有条理。to的发音要注意一下。开头children playing。。。有语法错误哦。楼主声音挺好听的,内容也不错,在注意一下发音和停顿就perfect了
t2.product,complex,accident发音错了。
t3.strengthen,而不是strengh。这道题不是很流利呀,看出楼主在努力做paraphrase,但我还是觉得流利度和完整度是最重要的。
t4.change发音错。professor有一次加了s。最后的一句很好啊,把阅读听力链接在一起了
t5.cannot be 而不是cannot to。ask用了英音,建议用美音,不然就混了。
t6.kind用了英语。green发错音了。完整还是很好的

总体来说,楼主有些地方的发音有问题,停顿也要注意一下。内容挺好的,信息点都答道了。由于有第一次评,所以也不太清楚标准是什么。总的来说还是很流利的。求回评:handshake

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发表于 2014-11-28 14:11:18 |显示全部楼层
wlfjqcj 发表于 2014-11-28 13:11
t1.很有条理。to的发音要注意一下。开头children playing。。。有语法错误哦。楼主声音挺好听的,内容也不错 ...

谢谢小伙伴这么细致的点评~~语法简直是我的一大痛,导致口语和作文中屡犯别人说的比较低级的错误(泪)
发音的确是会经常英音和美音混淆念,感谢指出~以后会注意的。不过刚查了一下complex的音是英音为['kɒmpleks]美音为[kəm'pleks],按美音的读法应该没发错哈=v=

刚去评了你的呀,觉得你说得蛮流利的,如果考过托口语分数应该蛮不错,能不能弱弱问一句小伙伴口语分数是多少

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发表于 2014-11-28 14:45:45 |显示全部楼层
一夕vv 发表于 2014-11-28 14:11
谢谢小伙伴这么细致的点评~~语法简直是我的一大痛,导致口语和作文中屡犯别人说的比较低级的错误(泪) ...

我没有考过,才准备了两个星期,下周就考了:dizzy:
是我记错了,我弄成了complicated:mad:
建议楼主可以听听30满分录音,我听了几次,一直在膜拜中。楼主貌似在努力做paraphrase?我看到又帖子说不做也可以拿高分,不过口语就够了这本书建议说做paraphrase。说的时候说慢一点,错误就少了。不过说慢了就可能说不完,我经常会超时

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发表于 2014-11-28 14:46:22 |显示全部楼层
一夕vv 发表于 2014-11-28 14:11
谢谢小伙伴这么细致的点评~~语法简直是我的一大痛,导致口语和作文中屡犯别人说的比较低级的错误(泪) ...

我没有考过,才准备了两个星期,下周就考了:dizzy:
是我记错了,我弄成了complicated:mad:
建议楼主可以听听30满分录音,我听了几次,一直在膜拜中。楼主貌似在努力做paraphrase?我看到又帖子说不做也可以拿高分,不过口语就够了这本书建议说做paraphrase。说的时候说慢一点,错误就少了。不过说慢了就可能说不完,我经常会超时

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发表于 2014-11-28 15:58:55 |显示全部楼层
wlfjqcj 发表于 2014-11-28 14:46
我没有考过,才准备了两个星期,下周就考了
是我记错了,我弄成了complicated
建议楼主可以 ...

居然才准备两个星期~~嗷那你的英语底子应该蛮不错的~~

嗯那个帖子我看了的而且音频也下载了,同样在膜拜=v=  是呀是呀一直在练paraphrase,因为觉得这样可以提高口语的反应能力,做12题遇到没准备过的也不会太慌吧。。。好哒我会试着更流利一些,因为练p我真的说得很结巴。。。

考试加油!!!

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美版2016offer达人

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一夕vv 发表于 2014-11-28 15:58
居然才准备两个星期~~嗷那你的英语底子应该蛮不错的~~

嗯那个帖子我看了的而且音频也下载了,同样 ...

楼主时间比我多呀,所以可以练练p咯。
像我只剩一个星期就放弃p算了

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发表于 2014-11-28 20:08:02 |显示全部楼层
t1&t2 建议加一些例子哈,这样比较充实一些。其实好佩服你可以飙这么多理论的东西,我还是觉得例子比较好讲一些,起码有情节。另外,first这样的词尽量少出现吧,尽量显得随意一些比较好。英美混音的现象比上次好多啦
t3.it 和work之间的没有听清,second这个单词我看美国人一般说segend,就是k要发成g,但是音标又没显示出这种变化。楼主自己权衡吧
t4.a boy holds,注意尾音。漏了they are not told that they have seen they boy before这一点
t5.the women does her best, 不是do。建议楼主用一个虚拟语气,if i were the woman, i blablabla,这样人称的转化就不用担心了
t6.sometimes, 这里time发音要拖长,不知道怎么形容吧,反正要美国化发音一点。
楼主发音很清晰啊,内容也答道点上了。比昨天要好啊。建议我都在分点里面给出了,共勉

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wlfjqcj 发表于 2014-11-28 20:08
t1&t2 建议加一些例子哈,这样比较充实一些。其实好佩服你可以飙这么多理论的东西,我还是觉得例子比较好讲 ...

点评辛苦了~

突然觉得我们俩说t1t2的习惯可以稍微中和一下。。。也很羡慕你这么能想例子啊啊啊………………

t3:it does work……不知道通不通哈哈……

t5: 好的会试着用用这种办法!缓解语法问题~~~

明天会把24的补上!

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发表于 2014-12-1 20:56:18 |显示全部楼层
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T1说的很棒!

T2 14‘study efficiently 后面接了一个词组in that time不对,at/during that time
     17’ and students,I think, study well is important than do part-time job,students前面应该加for,study改成studying,后面do同理
      举了一个research说明 peiceful things=study,这和前面说对学生而言学习很重要是不是矛盾了

T3 27‘leads to 听起来有点像laid to,后面说increase students to move off-campus,应该是 the number of students或者改成motivate more students
  最后一句above those two reasons 说的很好~学习了!

T4 说的很好! 感觉tpo前几套的题内容有点少,所以60s会说不满哈,不过最后总结句说的不错!!

T5 第一个理由说own space->convenient(not drive to school)逻辑关系不是很强,应该是near school所以convenient;第二个理由说save money from gets最好能具体化gets,像是part-time job,因为并没有说这个男生的research有回报

T6 30’you  need to apply the second principle is(删)contrast 第二个点的例子是红绿对比好像没有提到 这道题说的特别流畅而且点答的很全!!学习了!

总体来说发音和流利度都很赞,内容也很好,剩下就是一些小的语法细节问题,没啥大碍~



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