【口语小组】wlfjqcj 作业贴

wlfjqcjUID: 3560185

一夕vv 发表于 2014-11-29 22:38
重点我也不知道怎么说，每题都不太一样吧，就是觉得要有意识的去结合阅读和听力的内容部分，你的回答细节 ...

我尽量在剩余的日子里做到回扣阅读。。。不过难度实在有些大这个
谢谢提醒啊

wlfjqcjUID: 3560185

一夕vv 发表于 2014-11-29 22:38
重点我也不知道怎么说，每题都不太一样吧，就是觉得要有意识的去结合阅读和听力的内容部分，你的回答细节 ...

好的，我今天尝试着不说那么多细节了。。

chrischukovskiUID: 3538767

1128 才来不好意思
Task 1. Innocent strangers - inappropriate expression; innocent is seldom used in this manner according to my knowledge  
??? from negative feelings - sorry, didn’t hear clearly what the verb was
Generally speaking, with a clear theme sentence and some supportive reasonings with sound facts, this response is a successful one

Task 2. Three iterations of the birds - redundant but obviously caused by lack of thoughts
Obviously you didn’t prepare very well for this response, but I believe it doesn’t represent your full ability

Task 3. 1. Appeal to student
2. Nice control of time: 15s for the summary; 20s for first argument and 25s for the last; However, the organisations of the latter parts are not as well constructed as the first one.
Try to calm down when making a response to the questions.

Task 4. 1. Henry Darge: the name can be seen on the screen
2. The descriptions of facts are well presented, but the necessary reasoning to illustrate the relevance of these facts to the term ‘outsider art’ are somehow not enough

Task 5. 1. Live with his parents that is 2 hrs … ->live at his parents’ home
2. 第二部分有点没话说的感觉。我的个人经验是遇到这个就把前面的再说点或者重复一下Argument

Task 6. 1. 问题不大。有个不能算是经验的经验分享一下。楼主如果没有记笔记的话可以尝试记一记。这样很大程度上避免磕绊和不必要的重复。

以上。谢谢！

wlx1128UID: 3484206

不好意思作业传晚了
楼主还有空点评吗~麻烦了
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1778950100

一夕vvUID: 3545897

来评11.29咯～

t1：说得挺好～

t2：举例子说到“when i finished work it almost 6 o'clock”后面描述不清晰，觉得可以加一句“when i went home, there was insufficient time for me to study english" 先抑后扬没有说得太好呢，听得有点混乱。

t3：说得很好！就是注意下时间分配，第二点说超时了，因为说第一点时占用了太多时间。

t4：注意下时态，28'把see换成saw。细节说得很好，就是有时会重复讲的话，没注意时间，导致后面的内容说不完。35'那句“the same boy same cake but different pictures”可以省略，因为前面你已经提到“two groups watch different versions”

t5：第一句貌似有点语病？“she has to take exam while on the time when the ceremony”……可以换成“the time she has to take the exam is also the same time she need to go to ceremony“不过很繁琐就是……（我语法不好如果说错了抱歉哈=v=）其他挺好的没有啥可挑，得分点都拿到了。

t6：这题也说得有些重复……概念描述了一遍，举例又描述了一遍相同的。感觉细节不够，重复太多，听着有些累。

不过流畅度上总体比上次好些了，而且发音也更清晰～～

楼楼貌似这几天就考试了吧，杀T成功，一战就过！！！！！！