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本帖最后由 dengdeng619 于 2015-2-2 14:16 编辑

【独立写作】dengdeng619作业贴...准备一考（2015.3.7）

一开始没有弄好楼层，这层放的是二改稿。请互改的小伙伴到下一层看当天的作业吧~不好意思了
ps.路过的小伙伴也请看看作文提提意见啦~

1.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honest opinions even though other people may disagree with them.
[ESSAY MAP]
1. Disagree
2.reasons(3')
(1) to protect onself
(2) to establish better relationship
(3) to better serve the purpose of convincing others
3. summary

1.28-dengdeng619（2）.docx (14.07 KB, 下载次数: 0)
第一点没想到比较好的例子，想举国际博弈的例子又怕太黑暗了。囧。

1.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problems in today's world will be solved in our lifetime.
[essay map]
1. Disagree(despite human ability)
2."cake" model(假设模型，用“cake”做比喻，3步递进分析。这个写法新尝试一下，感觉考试的话最好还是不要这样= =传统的三段三点论比较好)
（1）先分析什么是most important problems，归纳为peace & development，再自然引出蛋糕模型，用简单点的说法来分析问题，第一层假设是最初始最简答的只讨论distribution of resources的客观影响，无法改变（无法解决问题的客观原因）。
（2）第二层加入“人”的主观复杂性，多形式的去争取cake（主观原因）。
（3）最后，综合各方面因素，模型复杂程度提升，自然得出多方角逐是一个长时间的过程，不是短短一代人可以解决的（主客观相互作用的复杂度）。
3.summary

1.24-dengdeng619（2）.docx (15.16 KB, 下载次数: 3) 总的来说，这篇写法上采用一个模型用到底这种形式，具体例子确实欠缺了，但是篇幅和时间问题我觉得挺难加= =本来想扯一下伊拉克石油的，但是想想会被美帝呵呵哒的就没加。感觉逻辑上没什么问题，但是我自己也拿不准这样写适不适合tofel考试QAQ还木有考过也不敢乱试，求小伙伴们指点~么么哒

12.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many countries are paying attention to environmental problems. But the attention is not making the environmental situation better.
[essay map]
1.Disagree
2.Reasons(3'):
Subtle transformation may not be noticed.
It takes time to turn the attention into action.
People’s attitude will influence how they see things.
3.Summary

12.18-dengdeng619（2）.docx (15.54 KB, 下载次数: 10)

12.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities.
【ESSAY MAP】
1. Social phenomenon, to introduce the topic; Show my attitude:disagreement
2. Analyze potential causes of the statement
3. Reasons for adverse attitude(3-5):
(3): Universities’ basic responsibility
(4): Common value
(4): Good students, good universities
4. Summary

12.16-dengdeng619（2）.docx (14.78 KB, 下载次数: 12)

作业

本帖最后由 dengdeng619 于 2015-2-5 21:04 编辑

2.4 独立

2.4-dengdeng619.docx (13.37 KB, 下载次数: 3)
[essay map]
1. Disagree
2.reasons(3')
(1)virtues
(2)meaningful stories
(3)different and inspiring views
3.summary

2.2 独立

2.2-dengdeng619.docx (13.72 KB, 下载次数: 4)
[essay map]
1.Should
2.reasons(3')
(1)sense of value
(2)better motivated
(3)social trend: comprehensive talents
3.summary

1.28 独立

1.28-dengdeng619.docx (13.43 KB, 下载次数: 4)

1.27 综合TPO3

1.27-dengdeng619（TPO3）.docx (11.87 KB, 下载次数: 0)

1.26 独立

1.26-dengdeng619.docx (13.72 KB, 下载次数: 6)
[essay map]
1.Agree
2.reasons(3')
(1)individually
(2)to the entire society
(3)moral required
3.summary

1.24 独立

1.24-dengdeng619.docx (13.71 KB, 下载次数: 8) （期末隔了好久没开工，这几天感冒嗓子完全哑掉口语做不来为什么连带作文也懒了= =开始重新战斗！！3.7考努力冲作文~）

这篇尝试了新的思路，没用正常的三点论（论点+例子）。可以看作是三段递进分析，做了一个分蛋糕的小假设，慢慢复杂化假设，跟社会问题相对应。写的有点匆忙，因为是不常用的思路，不知道考试中这样行不行一起讨论讨论吧 ≧▽≦

12.31独立

12.31-dengdeng619.docx (14.3 KB, 下载次数: 4) 新年快乐~~

[ESSAY MAP]这篇感觉怪怪的= =不太会写这种话题的，主要理由觉得各种扯
1. preference：live close to relatives
2.Reasons(3):
(1)the importance of family
(2)the motivation to fight
(3)care for the elderly
3.summary
12.23独立

12.23-dengdeng619.docx (13.68 KB, 下载次数: 9)

12.22独立

12.22-dengdeng619.docx (13.64 KB, 下载次数: 11)

12.20独立

12.20-dengdeng619.docx (13.58 KB, 下载次数: 9)
[ESSAY MAP]
1.Social phenomenon. Agreement.
2.My father's story as a teacher.(2-3)
(2)In the past
(3)Nowadays
3.Potential reasons & suggestion.

12.19独立

12.19-dengdeng619.docx (15.11 KB, 下载次数: 11)
[ESSAY MAP]
1.Social phenomenon. Disagreement.
2.Reasons for disagreement:
(1) Virtue
(2) If people were all impolite, the world will be…
(3) why it is still expected in today’s world.
3.Conclusion & suggestions.

12.18 独立

12.18-dengdeng619.docx (15.49 KB, 下载次数: 13)
[essay map]
1.Disagree
2.Reasons(3 points):
Subtle transformation may not be noticed.
It takes time to turn the attention into action.
People’s attitude will influence how they see things.
3.Summary

12.17 TPO12

12.17（TPO12）dengdeng619.docx (11.94 KB, 下载次数: 10)

12.16 独立

12.16-dengdeng619.docx (14.13 KB, 下载次数: 11)

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