3) 引用一些太过奢华的词藻。这些词藻甚至招生官都不经常用,目的可能是为了显示自己词汇量,结果往往会“弄巧成拙”。这里举个生动的例子,正常表达句为:“It is my greatest dream to come and study at your university”,其实这个句子已经够了,但被引用奢华词藻后为:“It is my paramount fantasy to originate and scholarship at your academia”,这下把招生官看懵了。。
2) 紧扣问题宗旨。谈到紧扣问题,不得不提要学会剖析问题,如果问题提问了2点,你就不能只回答其中1点,遗漏问题点会给你的文书减分;而同时,有些为了让你更清楚了解问题目的,会给你举例若干个角度你可以阐述,并不代表你都要一一进行阐述,你可以挑选其中某个你擅长的角度去深入。上面说的有些抽象,这里举个实际的例子,有这样一个文书题目:X university is a….. , how would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services and cultural experiences. 这个问题可以解析出有2个分问题:how would you benefit from such an environment? 和 how would you contribute to such an environment? 另外,such as… 提出的各种角度只是供你选择,无需一一阐述。