不好意思我家里今天断网,只能用手机上网。。。改的粗了一点抱歉。。。直接把建议写在这里了
以下是我认为应该改成d的样子
para 1
1 with what it was in the past then it is now
2 teaching used to be...ande teachers usually recieved...
para2
1 world was not so .....
2 went to universities and had degerees
3 at that time teaching were...
para3
1 teaching is not among them
2 rather than becoming teachers
总的来说我觉得你写的挺好了 只是有些句子时态有点对不上 以及说到教师这个职业时 我觉得teaching好一点
希望对你有帮助
不好意思我家里今天断网,只能用手机上网。。。改的粗了一点抱歉。。。直接把建议写在这里了
以下是我认为应该改成d的样子
para 1
1 with what it was in the past then it is now
2 teaching used to be...ande teachers usually recieved...
para2
1 world was not so .....
2 went to universities and had degerees
3 at that time teaching were...
para3
1 teaching is not among them
2 rather than becoming teachers
总的来说我觉得你写的挺好了 只是有些句子时态有点对不上 以及说到教师这个职业时 我觉得teaching好一点
希望对你有帮助