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本练习的目的是训练大家在拿到题目后迅速的构思并用英语写出有层次的主旨句和三个主题句。因此，在开始练习前，请为自己找一个安静的环境，打开手机计时器。点击回复看到题目，要争取在2-3分钟内想出基本的思路，并在5-8分钟内完成第一段及中间三段的主题句的写作。完成后，记下所花时间。然后用汉语补充说明中间段打算用什么例子如何展开。

同时请花时间描述一下自己构思的过程，遇到了什么问题或困难。整个练习包括汉语的讨论应该可以在20分钟内完成。这个练习虽然所花时间不长，但是我在反馈的时候还是会同时关注内容与语言表达两个层面的问题。

所有的练习还是回复到自己的练习帖，并在这里回复楼层的链接。本周开始恢复同学之间的互评，每位同学请点评楼上的练习。

快速练习相对于全文写作节省的时间将用作对5月25日练习的总结。具体指引点击这里。

题目已涂成白色准备好后可以自行查看  其实这里有好几道题可以选一道来写提纲
过去4周参加了练习的同学请利用本周的时间准备作品集
中途加入的可以回头完成5月25日开始的练习
有意加入的同学请考虑清楚其实随便弄一下混个3分也挺好的多花时间搞科研更划算确实重视作文的请加我微信 tesolchina 注明寄托ID

35) The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager.
One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. I predict that modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits even more dramatically.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.

52) The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment building to its manager.
One month ago, all the showerheads on the first five floors of Sunnyside Towers were modified to restrict the water flow to approximately one-third of its original flow. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. Clearly, restricting water flow throughout all the twenty floors of Sunnyside Towers will increase our profits further.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

128) The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager.
One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. Clearly, modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits further.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

129) The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager.
Last week, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. Clearly, modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits further.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

我写的范文在这里，写完提纲后请自行比对。