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Nowadays, media has changed the world, causing individuals keeping pace with the developing information. Being well-informed becomes a beneficial ability for people in this technology and information era. Some people maintain that people ought to follow many different news in order to get first-hand information, while others argue that people can get enough information without wasting time on varies media. I agree with the later opinion, because of the efficiency people make to get information.

In the first place, most of news are similar in different media, so people do not need to spend time on finding varies media. Generally speaking, resounding news are limit, so if one sensation happened, almost every media would broadcast this news. For example, when Obama succeeded in presidential election, all media in the world broadcasted this news instantly. Therefore, individuals can get most of important information after they looking through whatever a news resource, causing time that is used to finding another resource just useless.

On top of that, most people do not need to pursuit first-hand news, for the sake of knowing a little bit latter will not influence people's life. Although always getting fresh news sounds cool when people are chatting with others, getting information latter than others is also suitable for common people. Despite people that are doing some jobs like journalist, most of people follow news resources in order to get enough information to know what happened in the world and new policies that are related to their life. The pursuit of information, however, would degrade the quality of life. Because finding information from many different news resources would costing time that should have been used on more valuable things such as doing exercise and companying families. In short, information from one news resource is enough for people.

Eventually, some media is not credible enough for individuals to believe in. Nowadays, people are emerged in varies information. Some false information, however, is produced by some website and some media which give up their professional ethics in order to benefit from the fake news. Moreover, most people cannot distinguish fake news from truth, so people ought to follow authoritative media to preventing deceived by fake news. Also, authoritative media is limited, so finding varies news resources may lead individuals get involved in questionable news. Therefore, the pursuit of different news resource may bring individuals fake news.

Simply put, people should not look through different news resources for getting well-informed, because following one authorial media is enough for most individuals.