A letter of F2 to VO

judyyunyunUID: 161805

欢迎大家提意见。
Dear visa official:
May you have a lot of happy days no matter whether you approve of my visa or not, because I know you just do what you should do according to the laws and regulations.
I guess it is better for me to make some concise presentations about my husband and me. I don't want to lose my chance just because of the information missing.
I graduated from the university M years ago, then entered M. It seems like that all things were destined. Just there I met and fallen in love with my husband. After 1 year we married. We went through hardships, quarrels as well as happiness, sweetness and peace during this M-year-long marriage. But most of all, we learned sharing and patience, therefore we became more and more harmonious. In addition to the living, we, especially my husband also did well in the work. Last year, my husband was promoted to M and I was done to M.
For more knowledge and to experience something different, my husband finally accepted the ＄M scholarship (tuition waiver and research assistantship) of M university and left for the U.S. at the beginning of this year. He did a good job in his study and already got his next year’s scholarship, while I stayed in China, working, going out on business and so on. Everything is ok except we miss each other more and more. So I sincerely hope you can approve of my visa if I comply with the relevant qualifications.
Besides all above, I want to make some statement about our economic conditions to show that we have enough financial support for my trip to the U.S.（Ⅰ）Actually my husband’s current scholarship is enough to cover our life expenditures. He told me the consuming level in a town is not high.（Ⅱ）My husband’s university will increase his scholarship a little later.（Ⅲ）My husband’s teacher gave him a summer-vacation work due to his prior excellent job.（Ⅳ）My husband has a savings account of ＄M in the local M bank.（Ⅴ）If necessary, our savings in China are enough to cover unexpected expenditures. Here are 3 deposit books in my name with more than ¥M in each one. (VI) Here are my latest 5 months’ bank records. They demonstrate that my average income is about ¥M per month (Tax, all kinds of social insurance fees and some welfare are deducted).
If you have some other questions, I’m glad to answer. Thank you very much.
Best wishes from my husband and I.

chicagochenUID: 116575

第一句的开头方式不太正式 效果怎样不好说
我觉得你应该好好描述一下你们夫妻分别后是如何的想念和难过 情真意切的应该可以在情理上打动签证官 毕竟他们也多数是两地分居 很有同感的
还有 你没有说你过去做什么啊 就是陪公子读书啊 你自己也得有事维持生活啊

chicagochenUID: 116575

第一句的开头方式不太正式 效果怎样不好说
我觉得你应该好好描述一下你们夫妻分别后是如何的想念和难过 情真意切的应该可以在情理上打动签证官 毕竟他们也多数是两地分居 很有同感的
还有 你没有说你过去做什么啊 就是陪公子读书啊 你自己也得有事维持生活啊
个人意见  仅供参考

judyyunyunUID: 161805

看了你的意见，挺不好意思的。本来我还觉得写得挺好的呢，真贴出来了，心里就有些不安，真不知道大家会怎么批评。可是，有批评才会有进步，对吧？我最多有点不好意思，但绝对不会生气。
先说说我贴文的本意：一是我刚刚拿到了签证，把这信贴出来给众多F2做个参考；二来呢，我自己也想知道自己的不足，尤其是英文上的不足，因为我也打算考gter了。
信的开头我也觉得不是很好，但我不清楚怎么说，也就将就了，能不能指导一二，麻烦了。
关于夫妻的思念和难过，我倒有一些自己的考虑。也许是我工作有一些时日了，年纪也不是初出茅庐。我不是很赞同把这种比较私人的事情搬给签证官看，除非真能写得象那个我们高中学过的林觉民《与妻诀别书》凄恻婉转。换句话说吧，也许我的签证定位就是比较从容自信的都市女性，所以我也就懒得渲染我和先生是如何的思念，如何的难过。某种意义上，我甚至蓄意淡淡的提到我和我先生的工作情况，如职位的升迁。
但无论如何，正如前面说的，你我都是个人意见，仅供大家参考。很多F2都是才出学校的小妹妹，我的套路不一定适合她们，她们倒是可以尝试用柔情、用思念去打动签证官。无论她们采取何种方式获得签证，都是我们所乐见的。
再次谢谢chicagochen

wy12.24UID: 89976

我觉得一个劲的来描绘二人的相思之苦,有时会适得其反. 这封信条理写得很清楚,抓到了要点(签证官不就想知道你有没有钱嘛) .

wy12.24UID: 89976

可以问问judyyunyun ,你和你的LG分开多久了?

judyyunyunUID: 161805

about four months

chicagochenUID: 116575

"不是很赞同把这种比较私人的事情搬给签证官看"
这到是签证外的另一境界 privacy是很重要的
祝福JJ和GG 幸幸福福的。

dedianUID: 20072

最初由 judyyunyun 发布
[B]欢迎大家提意见。
Dear visa official:
May you have a lot of happy days no matter whether you approve of my visa or not, because I know you just do what you sho..

以下省略...... [/B]

Bless u 2 :cool: