issue131 限时基本成功

lakeqianUID: 157560

The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
上午写提纲，中午睡了一觉，下午开机就写~~差不多用了45分钟。

先对hidden两分：因为难于表达的而hidden与因为当局压制而hidden的。分别论述艺术可以reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
让步：有的艺术和ideas and impulses of a society没关系。

Miscellaneous art works are bequeathed to the modern people in large quantity. Some of them reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of society while others do not.

As a threshold matter, let us consider why ideas are concealed. The ideas are hidden mainly for two reasons: first, they are difficult to express, second, they are oppress by the authority. Arts, however, can give vent to them in both cases.

In the first case, arts serve as an effective way to communicate the unutterable. From the Renaissance, when people began to glean the Christian theme, many paintings were made in the aim of expressing the public respect to the deity. The construction of the church, often high and slim as the Cologne Cathedral , represents the awe and power of the deity and thus the people's respect to god. People have no difficulty in pointing out the meaning of the architecture and understand the society respected the god. And music, another form of art, has a mysterious power to utter the mind deep in our heart more effective than our words. On hearing the solemn Mass one will come to realize that the composer is telling him/her the divinity of the god. Hardly can a sentence like "we respect god" express people's esteem. In sum, arts act as a effective way to reveal some hidden ideas that are hard to express.

In the second case, when voice from the masses is quenched by the authority, the art can express the ideas and emotions via abstract works. When the Spain is under the reign of Nazi, the bombing that claimed many lives was going on, but no one dared to speak out their hatred and sorrow towards the dead. But Picasso drew an abstract painting of the bombed city to express the public hidden ideas. Were it not for his painting, nobody can know the masses' feeling. In this way, the painting transcended the art itself and became the avatar of the public voice.

However, not all arts deal with the hidden idea. After all, arts is a individual matter and utter the artist' feeling. The Chinese painting always focuses on the beauty and affinity of the nature such as the height of a mountain, the limpidity of a lake and the coziness of the early summer. A painting consisting of several fish, a pond and some flowers just describes a nature scene and the comfortness of its creator but has little to do with social hidden ideas. Likewise, the aim of Bach's well-tempered clavier book is only to construct and elaborate the well-tempered principles, a musical theory. Nothing about society hidden ideas can be figured out. If we really want to find some meaning out of the arts, then it is the personal emotion and inspiration that is expressed. The Beethoven's opus called moonlight is linked with his love of a lady and his sorrow emotion of losing her affection. To sum up, the arts can also serve as a way to express personal feeling or other aims far from revealing hidden ideas of society.

On balance, arts is so complex that it defies a single conclusion that it reveals the otherwise hidden idea of the society. Some art is employed as a tool to speak out the public otherwise hidden ideas and some of them may only speak for the artists themselves.

lakeqianUID: 157560

up~~
砖头呢。。。

xiaoxiao0524UID: 172512

Miscellaneous art works are bequeathed to the modern people in large quantity. Some of them reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of society while others do not.

As a threshold matter, let us consider why ideas are concealed. The ideas are hidden mainly for two reasons: first, they are difficult to express, second, they are oppress by the authority. Arts, however, can give vent to them in both cases.

In the first case, arts serve as an effective way to communicate the unutterableemotion. From the Renaissance, when people began to glean the Christian theme, many paintings were made in the aim of expressing the public respect to the deity. The construction of the church, often high and slim as the Cologne Cathedral, represents the awe and power of the deity and thus the people's respect to god. People have no difficulty in pointing out the meaning of the architecture and understand the society respected the god. And music, another form of art, has a mysterious power to utter the mind deep in our heart more effective than our words.这个句子有问题， 你在改改吧 On hearing the solemn Mass one will come to realize that the composer is telling him/her the divinity of the god. Hardly can a sentence like "we respect god" express people's esteem. In sum, arts act as an effective way to reveal some hidden ideas that are hard to express.我觉得你的第一个例子用得不好，既然ts是艺术可以难以言表的感情People have no difficulty in pointing out the meaning，似乎有些矛盾了或者你应该再深入说明一下

In the second case, when voice from the masses is quenched by the authority, the art can express the ideas and emotions via abstract works. When the Spain is under the reign of Nazi, the bombing that claimed many lives was going on, but no one dared to speak out their hatred and sorrow towards the dead. But Picasso drew an abstract painting of the bombed city to express the public hidden ideas. Were it not for his painting, nobody can know the masses' feeling.太绝对了吧，历时数不可以记载马 In this way, the painting transcended the art itself and became the avatar of the public voice.

However, not all arts deal with the hidden idea. After all, arts isare an individual matter and utter the artist's feeling. The Chinese painting always focuses on the beauty and affinity of the nature such as the height of a mountain, the limpidity of a lake and the coziness of the early summer. A painting consisting of several fish, a pond and some flowers just describes a nature scene and the comfortness of its creator but has little to do with social hidden ideas. Likewise, the aim of Bach's well-tempered clavier book is only to construct and elaborate the well-tempered principles, a musical theory. Nothing about society hidden ideas can be figured out. If we really want to find some meaning out of the arts, then it is the personal emotion and inspiration that is expressed. The Beethoven's opus called moonlight is linked with his love of a lady and his sorrow emotion of losing her affection. To sum up, the arts can also serve as a way to express personal feeling or other aims far from revealing hidden ideas of society.

On balance, arts arts 是复数吧你的谓语动词为什么用单数那is so complex that it defies a single conclusion that it reveals the otherwise hidden idea of the society. Some art is employed as a tool to speak out the public otherwise hidden ideas and some of them may only speak for the artists themselves.我觉得结尾写得不大好是不是时间太仓粗了？第一句写的很好，第二句或许在改改好一些

我觉得你论证层次清楚地，想请教一下你初稿就是这样吗？我现在最大的困惑是限时写完质量很差，要改很长时间真不知道到考试怎么应付
以上纯属个人意见不足之处请指正

flyxwUID: 106489

The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
上午写提纲，中午睡了一觉，下午开机就写~~差不多用了45分钟。

先对hidden两分：因为难于表达的而hidden与因为当局压制而hidden的。分别论述艺术可以reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
让步：有的艺术和ideas and impulses of a society没关系。

Miscellaneous art works are bequeathed to the modern people in large quantity. Some of them reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of society while others do not.

As a threshold matter, let us consider why ideas are concealed. The ideas are hidden mainly for two reasons: first, they are difficult to express, second, they are oppress by the authority. Arts, however, can give vent to them in both cases.说第一点，“言语表达不出的思想和冲动”是不是题目里讨论的问题呢考虑到“otherwise hidden...of society”总觉得不是主流艺术的那个意思，“另一种”，又是“隐藏的”，我怎么觉得言语不能表达的不是隐藏的哦，讨论一下

In the first case, arts serve as an effective way to communicate the unutterable. From the Renaissance我对艺术不大了解，斗胆问一句，文艺复兴不是宣扬人性主题的吗，people began to glean ...好象不是在文艺复兴哦, when people began to glean the Christian theme, many paintings were made in the aim of expressing the public respect to the deity. The construction of the church, often high and slim as the Cologne Cathedral 这都知道HOHO, represents the awe and power of the deity and thus thus没对吧？the people's respect to god. People have no difficulty in pointing out the meaning of the architecture and understand the society respected the god. And music, another form of art, has a mysterious power to utter the mind deep in our heart more effective than our words. On hearing the solemn Mass one will come to realize that the composer is telling him/her the divinity of the god. Hardly can a sentence like "we respect god" express people's esteem. In sum, arts act as a effective way to reveal some hidden ideas that are hard to express.老实说我觉得这个观点挺新颖的，艺术表达一种言语不能表达的思想。但是言语不能表达的就是隐藏的吗？本身来说图象、声音、语言都是表达方式之一，这个ineffective那个effective之，不存在主观的hidden啊，总觉得这个还需要好好研究一下的说，怎么觉得我现在也rigid了:(

In the second case, when voice from the masses is quenched by the authority, the art can express the ideas and emotions via abstract works. When the Spain is under the reign of Nazi, the bombing that claimed many lives was going on, but no one dared to speak out their hatred and sorrow towards the dead. But Picasso drew an abstract painting of the bombed city to express the public hidden ideas. Were it not for his painting, nobody can know the masses' feeling.觉得这句反国来说更切题一些：the great artist expressed his and all other inculpable masses' outrage for the ruthless killing via such a hidden way. In this way, the painting transcended the art itself and became the avatar of the public voice.没得说哈，这一段很好，例子也好，lake哥的语言偶是赶不上的，没有金山看不懂啊

However, not all arts deal with the hidden idea. After all, arts is a individual matter and utter the artist' feeling.好象没有因果关系 The Chinese painting always focuses on the beauty and affinity of the nature such as the height这个东东，好象是不能用图象表达的哦，只有纸笔能记录。觉得应该用greadness之类 of a mountain, the limpidity of a lake and the coziness of the early summer. 漂亮A painting consisting of several fish, a pond and some flowers just describes a nature scene and the comfortness of its creator but has little to do with social hidden ideaslake哥，你这个social hidden ideas到底是指什么呢，这些不就是你说的言语不能表达的东东吗？comfort. Likewise, the aim of Bach's well-tempered clavier book is only to construct and elaborate the well-tempered principles, a musical theory. Nothing about society hidden ideas can be figured out.倒！巴赫的音乐是严密得跟数学证明一样没有错，可是，这个是巴赫写曲子的目的吗？最多是他的追求吧。跟你前边的disclose the feeling of artists 也没有关系吧 If we really want to find some meaning out of the arts, then it is the personal emotion and inspiration that is expressed. The Beethoven's opus called moonlight is linked with his love of a lady and his sorrow emotion of losing her affection. To sum up, the arts can also serve as a way to express personal feeling or other aims far from revealing hidden ideas of society.看到这里我懂了，lake哥你的B1B2是讲艺术表达了“社会的隐藏的感情”，B3讲也表达了“艺术家的个人感情”，可是偶还是认为两者（B1B3）是一样的，艺术表达的就是艺术家的感情，不关它从哪里来，反映了什么。艺术家的感情是艺术品的源头，这个没有什么好讨论的。但是题目是问反映了什么，到底是反映了社会的隐藏的感情，还是反映了社会的主流，我觉得怎么这个才是重点呢。总之觉得B1B3有点overlap的说，应该把个中区分清楚。个人意见哈，也晕艺术的说

On balance, arts is so complex that it defies a single conclusion that it reveals the otherwise hidden idea of the society. Some art is employed as a tool to speak out the public otherwise hidden ideas and some of them may only speak for the artists themselves.

债转股UID: 170835

总体来说结构不错啊
我就没你想的那么周全和有层次
我写的只是例举了文学和电影的两个方面,
然后简单分析了一下原因
感觉没什么深刻的分析

不知道这种以举例为主的论证是否被接受?

鬼谷子UID: 159645

No.1 issue131 限时基本成功
The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
上午写提纲，中午睡了一觉，下午开机就写~~差不多用了45分钟。

先对hidden两分：因为难于表达的而hidden与因为当局压制而hidden的。分别论述艺术可以reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
让步：有的艺术和ideas and impulses of a society没关系。

我的想法是，你既然详细说了hidden的情况，是否还应该反应不hidden的情况呢？现在你的分类是1.揭示hidden的ideas和impulses  2.不揭示  但是，我觉得按你对hidden的两方面分析，我觉得下面说不hidden而直接表达是顺理成章的。因为，首先是reveal不reveal一些什么东西，再说是hidden或不hidden。你说呢？我把自己都绕糊涂了，不知道你看明白没？HOHO

Miscellaneous art works are bequeathed to the modern people in large quantity. Some of them reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of society while others do not.很简洁的开头。赞一个

As a threshold matter, let us consider why ideas 这个都写全了比较好吧，ideas and impulses。are concealed. The ideas are hidden mainly for two reasons: first, they are difficult to express, second, they are oppress by the authority. Arts, however, can give vent to them in both cases.我的感觉还是，应该先说reveal不reveal，然后才能谈到hidden不hidden。而且你的开头说的也是如此，some。。reveal。。。others。。do not，就是在说reveal不reveal啊，不应该是hidden不hidden吧。

In the first case, arts serve as an effective way to communicate the unutterable这个可以作名词吗？. From the Renaissancewhen people began to glean the Christian theme, many paintings were made in the aim of expressing the public respect to the deity. ,（since  the Renaissance。。。。had been。。。？）The construction of the church, often high and slim as the Cologne Cathedral , represents the awe and power 力量是神的，敬畏是人的，放在一起有问题吧。of the deity and thus（为什么用thus呢？） the people's respect to god. People have no difficulty in pointing out the meaning of the architecture and understand the society respected the god. And music, another form of art, has a mysterious power to utter the mind deep in our heart more effective than our words. On（by/through??) hearing the solemn Mass one will come to realize that the composer is telling him/her the divinity of the god. Hardly can a sentence like "we respect god" express people's esteem. In sum, arts act as a effective way to reveal some hidden ideas that are hard to express.看你前面一段是分两方面说，难于表达和被压迫。那么这段应该是要说难表达吧。但是似乎没看到哦，是在说艺术表达神性。你是想说神性不好表达，所以通过艺术吗？最好明确的提出一下。还有一点就是，神性和社会ideas，impulses的关系应该证明一下的。

In the second case, when voice from the masses is quenched by the authority, the art can express the ideas and emotions via abstract works. When the Spain is under the reign of Nazi, the bombing that claimed many lives was going on, but no one dared to speak out their hatred and sorrow towards the dead. But Picasso drew an abstract painting of the bombed city to express the public hidden ideas.（Guernica） Were it not for his painting, nobody can know the masses' feeling. 呵呵，蜘蛛那篇的句子，好句子，但是绝对了一点。In this way, the painting transcended the art itself and became the avatar of the public voice. reveal被压迫的ideas和impulses，照应了hidden分类的那段。

However, not all arts deal with the hidden idea还有impulses. After all, arts is a（an啊，检查） individual matter and utter the artist' feeling. The Chinese painting always focuses on the beauty and affinity of the nature such as the height of a mountain, the limpidity of a lake and the coziness of the early summer. A painting consisting of several fish, a pond and some flowers just describes a nature scene and the comfortness of its creator but has little to do with social hidden ideas. Likewise, the aim of Bach's well-tempered clavier book is only to construct and elaborate the well-tempered principles, a musical theory. Nothing about society hidden ideas can be figured out. If we really want to find some meaning out of the arts, then it is the personal emotion and inspiration that is expressed. The Beethoven's opus called moonlight is linked with his love of a lady and his sorrow emotion of losing her affection. To sum up, the arts can also serve as a way to express personal feeling or other aims far from revealing hidden ideas of society.这段很好的，没什么可说的

On balance, arts is so complex that it defies a single conclusion that it reveals the otherwise hidden idea of the society. Some art is employed as a tool to speak out the public otherwise hidden ideas and some of them may only speak for the artists themselves.

限时写成这样不错的，恭喜lake兄了！
语言很好的
结构我有一点疑问，在上面也都说到了
两方面的reveal和不reveal中的reveal里面分的是不同的hidden，而我觉得应该是hidden和不hidden好一点，比如说很多时期和艺术家的作品由于政府或贵族资助，社会思潮影响等等原因，直接就表现社会的ideas和impulses。你对于hidden的方面说的太多，而且散了一点，我觉得即使不说不hidden的情况，这里也应该缩短和整合一下，你说呢？

加油啊！限时语言还写这么好，你一定成功的！

说的不对的地方再讨论啊

againUID: 175079

我想问一下，你说艺术后来到音乐表达了说不出来那种尊重，是在人深处的共鸣对于它所表达思想的共鸣。这才ideas.所以应当再多说两句吧？

pippo1983UID: 172110

我自己刚写的提纲
a. What is hidden ideas and impulses of a society? Maybe it is something that can not be explained but felt.(这里想说只可意会,不可言传.谁有更好的句子?) Like spirit or soul of human, few of us can tell what it is, but many of us believe of them since we  can feel of their existence in our minds.
b. Arts, as a subjective creation, can directly indicate ideas and impulses hidden in society, because they do not need to consider more about its reality or possibility.   
例子我想到了基努 李维斯的<魔鬼代言人>(谁知道英文名),通过魔鬼在现实世界的所作揭穿了人类的欲望
还有超现实主义,不过不是很了解.谁有好的例子??

lakeqianUID: 157560

。。。一会没看就被拍的这样了。。。等等。。。等我仔细看看。。。
3X!!

lakeqianUID: 157560

回复大家：（累死了）

to xiaoxiao
提纲想的比较详细。但是初稿。发现想的挺好，一写就完蛋。
我现在最大的困惑是限时写完质量很差

我刚开始限时。。。汗。。。只能多练了。问问鬼兄吧

to flyxw:
关于hidden还是解释这个辩证的问题。。。
引用：flyxw说第一点，“言语表达不出的思想和冲动”是不是题目里讨论的问题呢考虑到“otherwise hidden...of society”总觉得不是主流艺术的那个意思，“另一种”，又是“隐藏的”，我怎么觉得言语不能表达的不是隐藏的哦，讨论一下
其实otherwise hidden...除了语言还有什么其它的convey meaning的方法吗？art的补集是什么啊？？
关于：本身来说图象、声音、语言都是表达方式之一。其实。。。我用utterable就是想打击面广些。。。应该说有的声音不是艺术是语言吧？图像不一定是艺术对吧，就如同关于摄影是否是艺术一直有争论。。。我再考虑下。

觉得这句反国来说更切题一些
提纲上写的比我文章里的好，一写就完蛋…你那句不错。恩…

PS我原句是 set free his brush什么的，用set free兼顾对比舆论压制这一点。还行吧。呵呵。

关于B1 这个文艺复兴。。。我似乎看280篇是说Christian themes.但我也有点奇怪，后来忘记查查了。一会再看看文艺复兴。。。印象中：文艺复兴是因为野蛮人蹂躏了罗马帝国的成就后为了恢复文艺吧。。。应该是学习希腊文艺对吧？以人为本？似乎是启蒙运动吧？Cologne Cathedral 是查的。

height问题：恩。齐文昱教过我们 measure the massiveness觉得传神，不用写的太死板。但这里灵活成这样不合适似乎。邯郸学步！！惭愧！！

这个是巴赫写曲子的目的吗。是。所以才叫平均律钢琴曲。他是为了证明是律是平均的。
跟你前边的disclose the feeling of artists 也没有关系吧。。哦。。开头少写了点。而且对应了individual matter差不多吧。这段开头应该像结尾那样提到or other aims far from revealing hidden ideas of society就行。

B1B2是讲艺术表达了“社会的隐藏的感情”，B3讲也表达了“艺术家的个人感情”，可是偶还是认为两者（B1B3）是一样的……艺术表达的就是艺术家的感情，不关它从哪里来，反映了什么。艺术家的感情是艺术品的源头，这个没有什么好讨论的……
我这么认为：艺术分社会艺术，个人艺术。社会艺术就是个人创作的有社会意义的作品。很多作品就是“为社会服务的”，属上层建筑。例如和平鸽，和轰炸这些画有一些动机的。
但是其他的艺术是表达艺术家自己想法的。不一定有社会基础。例如贝多芬纪念他老情人和社会没关系吧。
要说overlap：那就是艺术家感情和大众感情会重合：例如反战。但是作品的意义是不同的。

to 债转股：举例为主的论证是否被接受?
我还是有论证的吧？全是例子不行的。

to 鬼兄：
[B]！！！重点问题[/B] ： 引用：我的想法是，你既然详细说了hidden的情况，是否还应该反应不hidden的情况呢？以及：你对于hidden的方面说的太多，而且散了一点，我觉得即使不说不hidden的情况，这里也应该缩短和整合一下，你说呢？

不hidden不在本题范围内吧[B]：“otherwise” hidden[/B] .指没艺术就表达不出来的。[B]因此不用考虑不用艺术就已经表达出来的[/B] 。这点似乎280篇都没注意。或者就是我错了。这道题似乎不必超出题目范围吧？？？？

那么这段应该是要说难表达吧。但是似乎没看到哦，是在说艺术表达神性。
神性是难表达的东西的一种：看这句：can a sentence like "we respect god" express people's esteem. In sum, arts act as a effective way…

还有一点就是，神性和社会ideas，impulses的关系应该证明一下的。
嗯。我提到了当时社会的思潮就是崇拜神。many paintings were made in the aim of expressing the “public” respect to the deity[B]可能有的地方只用了个别词表达意思，没通过句子表现，意思藏在个别词中了。这种写法不知好不好？？？[/B]

蜘蛛那篇的句子？？嗯？哪篇？传说中的雷同？？怕！！！！！Guernica。。汗！！刚查到…

限时语言还写这么好
惭愧！！！！语言没戏的。鬼兄，我拼写巨差，经常把字母顺序搞反，花很多时间来改了，然后贴进word发现还是一堆typo…..哭………[B]如果拼错10多出是否肯定不能上5分[/B] ？？即：每个分数段的标准是都达到了才能得那个分数？？？


to again:尊重，是在人深处的共鸣对于它所表达思想的共鸣
我考虑了，但没写。因为这其实是个艺术表达idea还是激发idea。严格说这些宗教艺术是要[U]引发[/U] 人们的崇敬的！！！但我曲解成反映出idea了。因此这个关键问题必须回避。其实，反映或引发是个辩证问题，躲了…

to pippo1983
What is hidden ideas and impulses of a society。请看我对鬼兄的回复的第一点：重要问题.othewise hidden
it is something that can not be explained but felt考虑下unutterable 和 vicarious这个词。

通过魔鬼在现实世界的所作揭穿了人类的欲望.偶不了解。只要是反映“社会的”集体意识就行。

超现实主义…表现手法而已吧，不涉及内容。

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to flyxw
关于文艺复兴。你和我说的都是对的
http://www2.tku.edu.tw/~tahx/lau/index2.htm

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不hidden不在本题范围内吧：“otherwise” hidden .指没艺术就表达不出来的。因此不用考虑不用艺术就已经表达出来的 。这点似乎280篇都没注意。或者就是我错了。这道题似乎不必超出题目范围吧？？？？
恩，以前给人改131时我就谈过otherwise的问题，没研究出什么满意答案，你这么解释我觉得很合理，就是说，要么就被艺术表现，otherwise，就会被hidden，呵呵，对哦，原来怎么没想到。那么是我理解偏了，恩，你在B1或开头加一句有关otherwise的理解，然后说hidden的两方面，如何？更严密一些，HOHO


神性是难表达的东西的一种：看这句：can a sentence like "we respect god" express people's esteem. In sum, arts act as a effective way… 哦，我对这句的理解是你指提到了一个小方面，比如说语言sentence的方面，我的意见是，你最开始就可以说，艺术reveal了神性，which难以用任何其他的方式表达。然后在例子后面再说艺术把这些看不见的尊敬崇拜实体化云云。


嗯。我提到了当时社会的思潮就是崇拜神。many paintings were made in the aim of expressing the “public” respect to the deity可能有的地方只用了个别词表达意思，没通过句子表现，意思藏在个别词中了。这种写法不知好不好？？？  public respect。。。恩，我也不知道这样好不好，但是，我觉得为了更清晰和避免歧义，更明确的陈述一下，比如说，在很久很久以前的文艺复兴，when社会的思潮是崇拜神，（突然想到，文艺复兴不是崇拜人吗？？？对神我觉得是一种reassess 啊，中世纪更典型吧）

蜘蛛那篇的句子？？嗯？哪篇？传说中的雷同？？怕！！！！！
别怕别怕，雷同也不是那么容易的。我说的是NCE4的Spare the spider那篇，俺就背过两三篇，就有这篇。其实并不是完全一样的，原句是...would...，...would...,if it were not for....后来看有人把这个句子改成were it not for..., ...would...了，我自己也用过的，呵呵。只是句型相似，怎么也不可能被判雷同的。

Guernica。。汗！！刚查到…

限时语言还写这么好
惭愧！！！！语言没戏的。鬼兄，我拼写巨差，经常把字母顺序搞反，花很多时间来改了，然后贴进word发现还是一堆typo…..哭………如果拼错10多出是否肯定不能上5分 ？？即：每个分数段的标准是都达到了才能得那个分数？？？
具体拼错多少会到不了5分我不清楚，范文也有错误，但是不太多。所以最好能控制一下。
我的建议是，首先限时要限在30～40分钟，至少要留5分钟检查，（我后来留2分钟就够了），还有也许是不熟悉题目要考虑的时间。
然后每次限完都放在word里，把高频的（HOHO）typo总结出来，闲着没事就练长错的单词，检查的时候也要重点检查长错的单词。以我自己为例，我s和d一着急就打错，写快了时态和单复数错误，然后每次检查看到有s或d的单词就多看几眼，还有时态单复数重点注意。
这样typo会大大减少，而用来检查的时间也大大减少。以至于没typo了。

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有时候word里面检查出来的错误也不一定对，有的派生词好象收的不全

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我这么认为：艺术分社会艺术，个人艺术。社会艺术就是个人创作的有社会意义的作品。很多作品就是“为社会服务的”，属上层建筑。例如和平鸽，和轰炸这些画有一些动机的。

有道理，长见识了啊

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otherwise。。。呵呵，查查就行了。其实作文题中很多bt题眼。。。更难搞定的题眼是issue47的enough...

你最开始就可以说，艺术reveal了神性，which难以用任何其他的方式表达。然后在例子后面再说艺术把这些看不见的尊敬崇拜实体化。
恩，对。用定语从句就行。incarnation这种说法不错。学习

对是从Spare that spider那学的。哎。NCE4果然是个雷同之源。。。

突然想到，文艺复兴不是崇拜人吗？？？对神我觉得是一种reassess 啊，中世纪更典型吧
对，文艺复兴是用神的主题来反映人性。。。应该中世纪更好。好久不用忘记了。。。

把高频的（HOHO）typo总结出来，闲着没事就练长错的单词。。。
恩，正在积累常错词。。。无奈太多了。。。

有道理，长见识了啊
那种分类法是我编的，不知有没有这种说法。。。不过觉得从意义上来说应该可以这么分。但是这种分类的意义不大。。。

3X各位!!