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dallowayUID: 156640

发文章了，真是有点不好意思～～～

四个多月没写了，本来水平就差的:(

批吧，掐吧～～

103 In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.

To be successful in life, I think, the most important characteristic a person should have is the honesty. As is known to all, honesty is the basic element for people to communicate with each other. Without honesty, there would be no actual interaction and cooperation between people, not to mention other complex human activities.

First of all, since human being is a kind of social animals, each person has his own friends. Above all, friendship is founded on the basis of trust. We believe in our intimate friends and tell them our true inner voice. As time passing by, there goes the deep friendship. If one is dishonest even to his intimate friends and tell lies constantly, his lies will certainly be exposed one day. Once his friends realize this point, they will no longer trust the liar and thus the friendship is close down correspondingly. How can we make friends with the liars?

When stepping into the society, a person has to work with many co-workers. Although the relationship between co-workers seems a little different from that of friendship, honesty still plays the most important role in it. In a project group, the main goal of all members in it is to accomplish certain task. A typically cooperative team often shares some wonderful ideas among the members. Only through honesty can everyone in the group express his own ideas directly. The more honest the members are, the more cooperative and efficient the group will be.

I concede that there are still many other qualities a person should be equipped with in order to succeed. But without honesty, intelligence will lead to abuse resources for improper use, and also without honesty, the sense of humor will turn out to be superficial and insincere. Honesty, in my opinion, is the most precious quality for one person.

dallowayUID: 156640

6 Demonstrates clear competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it may have occasional errors. A paper in this category
effectively addresses the writing task
is well organized and well developed
uses clearly appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas
displays consistent facility in the use of language
demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice

5 Demonstrates competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it will probably have occasional errors. A paper in this category

may address some parts of the task more effectively than others
is generally well organized and developed
uses details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea
displays facility in the use of language
demonstrates some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary

4 Demonstrates minimal competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels.
A paper in this category

addresses the writing topic adequately but may slight parts of the task
is adequately organized and developed
uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea
demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage
may contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning

3 Demonstrates some developing competence in writing, but it remains flawed on either the rhetorical or syntactic level, or both. A paper in this category may reveal one or more of the following weaknesses:

inadequate organization or development
inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate generalizations
a noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms
an accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage

2 Suggests incompetence in writing.
A paper in this category is seriously flawed by one or more of the following weaknesses:

serious disorganization or underdevelopment
little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics
serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage
serious problems with focus

1 Demonstrates incompetence in writing.
A paper in this category

may be incoherent
may be undeveloped
may contain severe and persistent writing errors

dezhiUID: 156141

占位：中午来看看

BTW，我这样跨组活动没什么问题吧 --_--|

dallowayUID: 156640

呵呵，谢谢dezhi好兄弟啊～～

不过，我是真不想写文章，这篇是不到1个小时在教室挤出来上半部分，然后又回来在电脑上敲的，还是习惯在电脑上写东西了，现在。我字儿特乱:(

唉！

dezhiUID: 156141

103 In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.

To be successful in life, I think, the most important characteristic a person should have is the honesty［这里不需要加the吧］. As is known to all, honesty is the basic element for people to communicate with each other. Without honesty, there would be no actual interaction and cooperation between people, not to mention other complex human activities.

First of all, since human being is a kind of social animals［human being能用单数吗？不如直接说：since human beings are social animals］, each person has his own friends. Above all, friendship is founded on the basis of trust. We believe in our intimate friends and tell them our true inner voice. As time passing by［As time passes by？］, there goes the deep friendship［哇，句式真漂亮］. If one is dishonest even to his intimate friends and tell lies［小错误，tells］ constantly, his lies will certainly be exposed one day. Once his friends realize this point［不如用realize it］, they will no longer trust the liar［应该是lier吧］ and thus the friendship is close down［is closed down？不如说：would come to an end］ correspondingly. How can we make friends with the liars?

When stepping into the society, a person has to work with many co-workers. Although the relationship between co-workers seems a little different from that of friendship, honesty still plays the most important role in it. In a project group, the main goal of all members in it is to accomplish certain task［加s或前加不定冠词］. A typically［我觉得用形容词更好，用来修饰team］ cooperative team often shares some wonderful ideas among the members. Only through honesty can everyone in the group express［第三人称单数］ his own ideas directly［倒装句用的漂亮］. The more honest the members are, the more cooperative and efficient the group will be.

I concede that there are still many other qualities a person should be equipped with in order to succeed. But without honesty, intelligence will lead to abuse resources for improper use, and also［我觉得这个词用得不好，不如把这个插入词去掉，直接用and连接，或者写出三个来，用排比句，不过这个比较难］ without honesty, the sense of humor will turn out to be superficial and insincere. Honesty, in my opinion, is the most precious quality for one person.

dezhiUID: 156141

整个文章思路很清晰
用了好几个很棒的句式；词组用的也很好
单词很丰富，佩服啊！我现在写作文，想不起来几个比较好的词，郁闷中。。。
挑了几个小错误，都不是大问题；我说的也不一定对，你看看吧：）

dallowayUID: 156640

问道听力啊

02-09-19

19, M: Gee, it keeps raining like this; they’ll probably cancel the play tonight.
    W: Yeah, too bad they can't jsut move to an indoor stage.
    Q: What can be inferred from the conversation?

(A)The play will be performed at another location
(B)The woman didn't intend to attend the play
(C)It isn't possible to cancel the play
(D)The play was going to be performed outside

为啥是D啊？不解～～

dezhiUID: 156141

Ｍ说下雨，可能会取消play
然后Ｗ说yeah：意思是play确实可能会取消
too bad they can't just move to an indoor stage.意思是，可惜play不能转到室内进行。暗含之义为，play只能在室外举行。
注意D中的"was going to be"，表明本来计划是要在室外举行的

dallowayUID: 156640

最初由 dezhi 发布
[B]整个文章思路很清晰
用了好几个很棒的句式；词组用的也很好
单词很丰富，佩服啊！我现在写作文，想不起来几个比较好的词，郁闷中。。。
挑了几个小错误，都不是大问题；..

以下省略...... [/B]

呵呵，感谢dezhi的正评价撒～～

嗯，的确很多语法错误直接反应了我语法部分的弱点，实际上，你指出的一些地方我做语法时都错过，还是没长进:(

唉～～作文啊，别提了，我也是挤出来的啊～～你了解我的水平啊:p

看了一些胡敏的范文（那个2004年新版的），觉得还是有些不适应的说，有些确实写的不错，但有的就...象记叙文

看的时候我会着重记一些句式、单词、词组，结构上会记一些例子和saying，有时冥想会突然迸出一些issue时用过的东西以及思维方法，不过当时写issue的状态也早没了，很郁闷

机器上敲还行，拿着笔我就写不出来了，划得乱乱的，还是在word里敲比较适合我:(

前天听了imongQQ里的教训，昨天发誓不憋出一篇不出三教，于是就这样了

一开始想得很多，然后下笔时就乱了，失语。于是在走廊里溜达了几圈，推翻了前一个思路，重写的。这这这～～考试时不能啊～～

另：dezhi，你现在是怎么挑着写的啊？

dallowayUID: 156640

最初由 dezhi 发布
[B]Ｍ说下雨，可能会取消play
然后Ｗ说yeah：意思是play确实可能会取消
too bad they can't just move to an indoor stage.意思是，可惜play不能转到室内进行。暗含之义为，..

以下省略...... [/B]

啊～～

没注意是虚拟语气～～掉进了选项的圈套啊，现在错的很多题都是听懂了8成，结果选错了或者改错了:(

这题的can't我又没听出来，can和can't是我的一大弱点:(

dallowayUID: 156640

to dezhi：

你也很棒啊，come to an end我就没想出来嘛，嘿嘿

最后一段的also确实不好，好像语法里有过一道类似的题，我再斟酌一下

Only的那个倒装句是部分倒装，前面有助动词can，应该后面不用三单

查了牛津，liar，尤指经常性的说谎者

typically，确实该用形容词，这个语法点我错过不只一次，写的时候也没把握

嘿嘿，谢啦～～

dezhiUID: 156141

Only的那个倒装句是部分倒装，前面有助动词can，应该后面不用三单
查了牛津，liar，尤指经常性的说谎者

改错了两处，汗~~~

TWE你看到晚舟发的那个帖子了吗？他的老师是李笑来
我的老师是张洪伟，所以我正在写他给的必写题目，如下：
5,8,10,14,15,29,36,44,48,79,184,152
好像和晚舟的很不一样。Anyway，只要把每一大类都练到就成了

加油！

dallowayUID: 156640

哦，其实啊，T都是要凭实力的说

我就是太懒了:(

唉，每天一篇吧～～这个奥运会赶得真不是时候～～不过好在下周就能解放喽，忽忽

那个，你这个分类是怎么个分法的呢？

dallowayUID: 156640

01-10-38
（Different fourteen ）crops were （being grown） 8,600 years （ago ）by some of the world’s earliest （farmers）.
选的时候又给晃住了，改错了:(        觉得B用得好诡异啊

再问一下阅读10题和38的答案，是都是A吗？

谢谢喽～～

dallowayUID: 156640

02-01-32

（ As do） all insects, a butterfly has a hard （outer） covering, （called it） an exoskeleton, （that both） supports and protects the body.

唉，没看完就选了A

不过这个A读起来确实很难受啊，一般好像是As all insects或者As all insects do，这个地方为啥倒装啊？