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发表于 2004-8-14 14:22:06 |显示全部楼层
还有一道02-01的听力

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W:8:45? I guess I'd better get going. When's the next bus up to univ.?
M:That bus leaves here in an hour. (我听的是in the hour)
Q:what does the man mean?

(A) The next bus leaves at 9 o'clock
(B) The buses are running an hour late.
(C) The woman will have to wait an hour.
(D) He isn't sure when the next bus leaves.

答案A,那in the hour是指9点?
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
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放心去飞勇敢地去追
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I believe I can fly, I believe I can touch the sky!

坚强 是无论面前是高山还是海洋
都能始终执着的去追求心中的梦想~~~~~~

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发表于 2004-8-14 18:07:27 |显示全部楼层
我查了on the hour指在某一正点,那为啥就是9am呢?

(听的好像还是in啊)唉,不管了,反正这题要遇到了我肯定错:(
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-8-14 21:21:49 |显示全部楼层
作文里要用的一句话--为祖国健康工作50年,咋说比较好呢?
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-8-14 22:48:26 |显示全部楼层
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[B]发文章了,真是有点不好意思~~~

四个多月没写了,本来水平就差的:(

批吧,掐吧~~

103 In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for ex..

以下省略...... [/B]


这两天我犯懒呢,不过还是给你看吧,好久没写东西了,水平肯定还不如你呢,你就将就着看吧啊


To be successful in life, I think, the most important characteristic a person should have is the honesty. (不用the吧?读着好别扭) As is known to all, (你肯定这么用吗?) honesty is the basic element for people to communicate with each other. Without honesty, there would be no actual interaction and cooperation between (among吧?) people, not to mention other complex human activities.

First of all, since human being is a kind of social animals, each person has his (one's吧?) own friends. Above all, friendship is founded on the basis of trust. We believe in our intimate friends and tell them our true inner voice. As time passing by, there goes (there后面好象只能加be啊) the deep friendship. If one is dishonest even to his intimate friends and tell lies constantly, his lies will certainly be exposed one day. Once his friends realize this point, they will no longer trust the liar and thus the friendship is close down correspondingly. How can we make friends with the liars?

When stepping into the society, a person has to work with many co-workers. Although the relationship between co-workers seems a little different from that of friendship, honesty still plays the most important (建议不要用最高级,太绝对了) role in it. In a project group, the main goal of all members in it is to accomplish certain task.(少冠词)  A typically cooperative team often shares some wonderful ideas among the members.(不需要用冠词)  Only through honesty can everyone in the group express his own (their) ideas directly. The more honest the members are, the more cooperative and efficient the group will be.

I concede that there are still many other qualities a person should be equipped with in order to succeed. But without honesty, intelligence will lead to abuse resources for improper use, and also without honesty, the sense of humor will turn out to be superficial and insincere. Honesty, in my opinion, is the most precious quality for one person.


总体来说,觉得写的很向issue,语言部分我看的比较粗,好久没写也没改别人的东西了,全是凭语感给你改的。

TWE我觉得还是写成5段比较好,你选的这种题目,我觉得开头点题,中间罗列3个理由,然后结尾就OK了。
比如你说诚实是最重要的品质,那么可以列举原因,如诚实是人与人交往的基础啊,诚实的人可以交到更多的朋友啊,诚实可以拉近人们之间的距离啊,等等。

总体来说,写的还不错,继续努力!

对了,文章中尽量避免第三人称的出现,因为涉及性别的问题,这个和GRE作文要求差不多吧。
爱情无需刻意去把握,越是想紧紧地抓牢自己的爱情,反而容易失去自我,失去原则,失去彼此之间本来应该保持的宽容和谅解,爱情也会因此而变的毫无美感。
每个人都希望自己拥有幸福美满的婚姻和爱情,但是爱是需要能力的,这个能力就是让你爱的人爱你。

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发表于 2004-8-14 22:49:41 |显示全部楼层
最初由 dalloway 发布
[B]还有一道02-01的听力

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W:8:45? I guess I'd better get going. When's the next bus up to univ.?
M:That bus leaves here in an hour. (我听的是in the hour)
..

以下省略...... [/B]



这道题我有印象,当时也是想了很久的一个题目
大概就是说,是每整点一趟车吧
爱情无需刻意去把握,越是想紧紧地抓牢自己的爱情,反而容易失去自我,失去原则,失去彼此之间本来应该保持的宽容和谅解,爱情也会因此而变的毫无美感。
每个人都希望自己拥有幸福美满的婚姻和爱情,但是爱是需要能力的,这个能力就是让你爱的人爱你。

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work 50 years in good health for the country?
I believe I can fly, I believe I can touch the sky!

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发表于 2004-8-14 23:46:20 |显示全部楼层

哪位牛人帮我看看作文啊?(小弟新加入的)

It has been said, “not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gain from books. In your opinion, which source is more important.

When it comes to the knowledge, Some people say that it’s more important to get it from books while others believe that experience is a much more important source of knowledge.As far as I am concerned, both of them are the essential resource for us to explore the world. Any one who discard either aspect of the twoo cannot become a successful person in his life.

“Books are the ladder for progress”. It gives us the knowledge beyond the scope of our experience. In books, I travel all over the world and see various beautiful landscope which I have never been;
in books, I see Newton’s great ideas and his deep understanding in Physics field; in books, I see Chinese long history and its great inventions. Books are the most important tools for us to learn knowledge. Maybe you don’t like reading, you will feel happy or relaxed when you leave books for a time. But can you feel the long happiness after that? You may feel lonely or anxious because you lose the most intimate friends of our human beings.

Another equally important aspect from which we obtain knowledge is the experience. Almost each of our basic skill such as walking, articulating and reading come from our own experience. Without practice, you may still lie on bed and cannot say any word. In addition, sometimes we get a much deeper understanding through our experience. We may not quite understand or feel confused after we have a physics course. But after an experiment, every point of the theorem, the process and much detailed information will be quite clear for us. In this point of view, experience is more effecctive and efficient than books.

In my opinion, both of experience and books are of equal importance. Books make the base for our knowledge system and experience serve us to understand it more deeply.We cannot overlook each of them. Only if we combime our knowlede both from practice and books can we say we understand this world quite well.

这个题目是问你In your opinion, which source is more important..是不是一定要选一个更重要的啊? 我这片文章说两者都好是不是会偏题啊?
我才刚刚开始写, 所以不足之处请各位多多包涵
还有,字数一般多少比较合适啊?

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发表于 2004-8-15 05:57:06 |显示全部楼层
dezhi不是还在上课吧~~~DALLOWAY`咋头衔改了?看柯南?
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发表于 2004-8-15 05:58:42 |显示全部楼层
No.245
作文里要用的一句话--为祖国健康工作50年,咋说比较好呢?


这个~~是不是太中国化的说法了 ~~~
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发表于 2004-8-15 06:24:35 |显示全部楼层
”唉,没看完就选了A~~“要考试了,还出这个问题~~嘻嘻,看来和我一样懒啊~
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发表于 2004-8-15 17:01:15 |显示全部楼层
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[B]dezhi不是还在上课吧~~~DALLOWAY`咋头衔改了?看柯南? [/B]


为什么说又呢?嘿嘿

当然是柯南的粉丝、还有棋魂了

不过近来机器里没空间了365之后的没看呢,还

考完试补:p

嗯,最喜欢的剧场版就是《迷宫的十字路口》,sigh~~什么时候可以去kyoto啊,55555555555

嘿嘿,以后多交流cartoon撒
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-8-15 17:01:48 |显示全部楼层
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[B]”唉,没看完就选了A~~“要考试了,还出这个问题~~嘻嘻,看来和我一样懒啊~ [/B]


那个,我是粗心大王嘛,不过还是不明
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-8-15 17:02:38 |显示全部楼层
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[B]No.245
作文里要用的一句话--为祖国健康工作50年,咋说比较好呢?


这个~~是不是太中国化的说法了 ~~~ [/B]


这个是清华操场上印着的标语啊~~想借用一下,嘿嘿
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-8-15 17:03:17 |显示全部楼层
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[B]work 50 years in good health for the country? [/B]


dezhi这个说法不错,我在那for来for去半天没弄明白,嘿嘿,用了
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
[/B]

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