issue73 这次不知道是否contrast

一朵盛开的牛粪UID: 182912

我重新整理后写的，不知道这次是否切题，语言方面的问题一下子可能还是很糟。
"In mos professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge."


Today, there is a growing opinion that more knowledge will lead to more achievements in professions and academic fields. But I think imagination is more important than knowledge in most profession and academic fields.

To scientist, the principle power to social improvements, imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is like oil  needed by a car, but imagination is like a car's engine. If a car has no good engine, it will not run more fast even with much oil. Let us get down to fundamentals and agree these men who have won the Nobel Prizes are imaginative people, not those who only master much knowledge. Knowledge is still knowledge in books if you can't use them with your brain, but imagination will help you use this knowledge efficiently, and impel you to acquire more new knowledge. In history of mankind we find human's imagination act as a more major role in the development of science. Even in ancient age, with little knowledge, they could make tools of stone, and use fire to cook by imagination. At that time, they didn’t wonder what it would do besides drinking and washing. Then when people first knew the knowledge of water and electricity, after thinking and imagination, and they conceived to use water-producing electricity. If human beings always stop at the lever of knowledge, the result is we just drink it without other uses till today.

Furthermore, imagination not only tells us how to use knowledge but also encourage us to learn much knowledge. We knew birds can fly long years ago, but we didn't known how they fly until we imagined flying in the sky like birds. Just for this imagination of flying like birds, people began to research how birds fly and imitated flying of birds, and at last, about 100 years ago, the Wrights brothers got the aerial age off the ground, even this flight being only one minute. In summary, without imagination there is no development of knowledge; without imagination there is no good use of knowledge. Therefore I believe imagination is important than knowledge.

Additionally, imagination is more important than knowledge in art field, such as drawing, music, film and literature. When you know the knowledge of how to draw a picture, you are only a painter but not a artist. Really great artists are those whose imagination is beyond contemporary, and they had an original and creative idea. With imagination, the artwork is alive and vivid, and not follows the feet of ancestors. Moreover imagination will create new type of art, and then art is advancing with various shades. All students of painting know it is most difficult to create, but not to learn how to draw and copy. At the beginning, they are taught the knowledge of imitation, but the highest class art is to create with imagination. In the same way, many lasting literature and classical music works were totally created by the authors with  great imagination, but not by the authors who just knew how to spell or how to compose.

In the end, I think it is necessary for everyone who works in any fields to realize the significance of imagination. Knowledge helps us see the world, however, imagination is more important than knowledge because it help us use and improve knowledge well.

mack1983UID: 183345

好久没来了，占坐，明天改

mack1983UID: 183345

我重新整理后写的，不知道这次是否切题，语言方面的问题一下子可能还是很糟。
"In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge."


Today, there is a growing opinion that more knowledge will lead to more achievements in professions and academic fields. But I think imagination is more important than knowledge in most profession and academic fields.

To scientist, (注意用从句 who is)the principle power to social improvements, imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is like oil needed by a car, but imagination is like a car's engine. If a car has no good engine, it will not run more fast （fast就行了吧）even with much oil. Let us get down to fundamentals and agree these men who have won the Nobel Prizes are imaginative people, not those who only master much knowledge. Knowledge is still knowledge in books if you can't use them with your brain, but imagination will help you use this knowledge efficiently, and impel you to acquire more new knowledge. (接下来的东西同science没关系了,应该另写一段)In history of mankind we find human's imagination act as a more major role in the development of science. Even in ancient age, with little knowledge, they could make tools of stone, and use fire to cook by imagination(我觉得这个例子有些牵强). At that time, they didn’t wonder what it would do besides drinking and washing. Then, when people first knew the knowledge of water and electricity, after thinking and imagination, and (and 去掉)they conceived to use water-producing electricity. If human beings always stop at the lever (level)of knowledge, the result is we just drink it without other uses till today.
例子我觉得不是很好，其实，imagination比knowledge重要的例子有很多，比如艺术方面的，像电影，绘画，等等。同汽车的那个比较，我觉得似乎逻辑不过严谨，就算有好的发动机，没有汽油不也没办法开的快吗？

Furthermore, imagination not only tells us how to use knowledge but also encourage us to learn much knowledge. We knew birds can fly long years ago, but we didn't known how they fly until we imagined flying in the sky like birds（这句话说不通）. Just for this imagination of flying like birds, people began to research how birds fly and imitated flying of birds, and at last, about 100 years ago, the Wrights brothers got the aerial age off the ground, even this flight being （似乎用was）only one minute. In summary, without imagination there is no development of knowledge; without imagination there is no good use of knowledge. Therefore I believe imagination is important than knowledge.
这段同上一段的关系不是很明确，不像是递进。如果是并列的话，相对于科研和艺术，到底指的是什么方面呢？

Additionally, imagination is more important than knowledge in art field, such as drawing, music, film and literature. When you know the knowledge of how to draw a picture, you are only a painter but not an artist. Really great artists are those whose imagination is beyond contemporary, and they had an original and creative idea（逗号之后的话可以不要了，或者改为Really great artists with an original and creative idea are those whose imagination is beyond contemporary）. With imagination, the artwork is alive and vivid, and not follows the feet of ancestors. Moreover, imagination will create new type of art, and then art is advancing with various shades. （加个连词才能体现出逻辑性）All students of painting know it is most （more）difficult to create, but not to learn how to draw and copy. At the beginning, they are taught the knowledge of imitation, but the highest（advanced） class art is to create with imagination. （最后这句我觉得加到前面讲比较好）In the same way, many lasting literature and classical music works were totally created by the authors with great imagination, but not by the authors who just knew how to spell or how to compose.

In the end, I think it is necessary for everyone who works in any fields to realize the significance of imagination. Knowledge helps us see the world, （这个转折不太好）however, imagination is more important than knowledge because it help us use and improve knowledge well.
比较写得挺到位，特别是倒数第二段。加油
段落中的句子的联惯性不强，给人感觉是想到哪里写到哪里。
我觉得，这道题目中庸比较好些，应为很容易找到imagination和knowledge 之间不相交的重要性，例如，就算认为art中imagination很重要，但没有knowledge，再好的imagination也无法实施等等。

一朵盛开的牛粪UID: 182912

其实写完我就觉得例子用的不好，我想先放上来看看。本来我一开始就是说两个都重要的，但是给批说走题了，我发现我一中庸就没比较，所以这次就还是往一边写了，先切题吧。