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happymichelleUID: 154082

issue175
"It is always an individual who is the impetus for innovation; the details may be worked out by a team, but true innovation results from the enterprise and unique perception of an individual."

syllabus:
1.革新的动力来自于个人   
2.革新的动力来自于团队   例子：革命是个好例子，比如Civil War
3个人和团队并非是矛盾的，真正的true innovation 是个人的创新+整个社会的气候 例子：文艺复兴和其中的牛人
4 对于现在我们这个社会，个人职责和团队精神尤为重要

Nowadays, with a more competitive and cooperative society,  there is debate over the two hot words: teamwork and individual.  When it comes to innovation, someone holds the opinion that only the working of individual ensure the achievement of innovation.  However, without the teamwork, I doubt whether innovation could be carried out successfully.  That is, the effectiveness of innovation results from the impetus of individual as well as teamwork.

In the first place, I admit that most amazing creative ideas and marvelous inventions in our history have been the results of individual's creation.  And that’s reason why Nobel prize is awarded to those who individually made great contribution to our human society.  Let us get down to the fundamental cases in history book and we can find so many examples: Newton’s gravity of law is such; Edison’s electric bulb is such; and so is Maria Curie’s discovery of uranium.  In addition, more convincing evidence could be found in the area of arts and literature, which is just based on the artists’ personal experience as well as their unique way of interpretation of the world.  For example, Van Gogh, the representative of Postimpressionism, betrayed the traditional genre of painting to draw in his own way and become famous even posthumously.  For them, they are solely responsible for their own success and failure by their independent and creative works.  In this sense, it is just the individual inspiration and unique perception that result in breakthrough and invention.

However, when we emphasize the key role played by individuals, we should not neglect the importance of team work.   After all, no one would live without others,  it is almost impossible for individual to make great innovation depending on his/her own effort.  The revolution is exact such example showing the significance of group work.  The Civil War, as we all know,led by one of American's greatest Presidents, Abraham Lincoln, was markede as the milestone for the start to emancipate the slaves in the South.  But even such great leader can not by himself decide the success of the war, it is only by the large number of people supporting him that makes the North win the war.

As a matter of fact,  we should realize that teamwork and individual enterprise are not necessarily exclusive, as the speaker assumed.  In fact, they can operate harmoniously with each other to bring about true innovation.  A good case in point is the Renaissance, during which time humanism was introduced and replace the regalism ever prevailed in the Middle ages of Europe.  Probably no one would deny  there existed a great amount of versatile artists who created enormous masterpieces at that time , for example, Da Vinci’s famous paintings “Mona Lisa” and “The last mea”; Michelangelo’s well-known sculpture “David” .  They are all famous individuals, but are just a part of the Renaissance, which means they cannot lead to great innovation individually. It is because of the group work of so many excellent humanists that lead to the huge innovation of Renainssance.

In nowadays’ world, it is even more important to emphasize the team work spirit as well as the invidual enterprise.  Generally speaking, in our society in which the work is divided minutely, it is almost impossible for individuals to make great innovation depending on his or her own capability. For example, the accomplishment and innovation of LSI( Large Scale Integration) needs the cooperation of large number of members who take charge in only a small portion of it respectively.  But only if every member of the team has its own responsibility, individual's enterprise and unique perception can be aroused and therefore the effectiveness of teamwork begins to emerge.

In conclusion, we should not rashly assert which element plays great role in determining innovation. what we should do is to keep a balance between individual's perception and team work's cooperation.  Any emphasize on each side is equally dangerous to the innovation even to the society.  And for this issue, true innovation results from both the enterprise, perception of individual and the effort from the team work.

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不怕开水烫的猪UID: 187893

你的语言很流畅啊，佩服佩服！
这个题目应该算是难写的吧，写的很好了

林肯那个例子，用来支持teamwork，只是说了离不开群众的支持，而没有具体的team，显得有点虚，说他是个人的创新似乎也可以。最好能找个有实际team的例子。

body3 文艺复兴的例子，你是不是要把整个文艺复兴当成一个创新啊？这样的话当然每个人都是team member了。照这个思路，如果把人类文明的进步看作一个创新的话，整个世界都是个team了吧。我觉得不应该把team的含义扩展到所有与这个创新有联系的所有人吧，那样似乎就是在狡辩了。

还有，居里夫人发现的Ra和Po, 好像在她之前已经发现U了吧

genie05UID: 30358

a  ?
还要再考？

莫名NUID: 146481

michelle偶这个星期考完后开始帮你改作文:)

genie05UID: 30358

给我啥好处~
我也改。
:D

happymichelleUID: 154082

to不怕开水烫的猪
你提的意见很好，我重新改写了body2和3
body2重点说是群众的impetus决定了innovation,而非某个领导
body3关于Renainssance，teamwork其实应该是individual的集合，所以还应该说二者并非是矛盾的
还有Maria Curie发现的应该是radium,多谢提醒

However,considering the great innovation, when we emphasize the key role played by individuals, we should not neglect the importance of general people.  After all, it is not mere the leader’s wish, but the general people’s desire for improvement that result in the true innovation.  People can only be lead where they want to go, the leader follows, though a step ahead.  Americans wanted to climb out the Depression and needed someone to tell them they could do it, and Roosevelt did.  The British believed they could still win the war after the defeats of 1940, and Churchill told them they were right.  Without matching common people’s mood and desire, no individual can make a nation that wants peace at any price go to war, or stop a nation determined to fight from doing so.  In this sense, the impetus for innovation is not from individuals, but rather from general people.

As a matter of fact,  we should realize that teamwork and individual enterprise are not necessarily exclusive, as the speaker assumed. Teamwork, as a combination of many individuals’ works can operate harmoniously with individual enterprise to bring about true innovation.  A good case in point is the Renaissance, during which time humanism was introduced and replace the regalism ever prevailed in the Middle ages of Europe.  Probably no one would deny  there existed a great amount of versatile artists who created enormous masterpieces at that time , for example, Da Vinci’s famous paintings “Mona Lisa” and “The last mea”; Michelangelo’s well-known sculpture “David” .  They are all famous individuals, but when they were gathered together they formed the Renaissance, which means they contribute their part of effort to the great innovation.  It is because of the group work of so many excellent humanists that lead to the huge innovation of Renainssance.

happymichelleUID: 154082

谢谢莫名和genie
好处~~~当然有啊
考完了我请大家K歌好了
hehe.......

genie05UID: 30358

爬过~~
离我太远。
不爽~

让IMONG唱了，录回来我听就好。:D

flyingwindUID: 189320

我改是不是也请我k啊？