第一篇issue，希望大家路过能给批一下，谢谢~~

amyalex111UID: 192730

第一篇issue，前天开始准备作文，一共看了2篇官方范文，就自己写，没想到那么吃力。。。我是下载的PP2 ，里面给的文章题目挑了道拿出来写的，写完后来去Issue题库看看，好象没这篇文章，很简单的题目，结果硬是盯着题目半天憋不出一句话。。我觉得自己范文看的太少了，词汇量也太小，写完都不忍心看了，没进行修改，想让大家看看帮着改改，我想3月中旬考试作文，不知道这个水平再努力1个多月还有没有救。。

"The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things."

As we know, commonplace things are easily for people to acquire knowledge. as it can provide us various commenly preformances
in which we can find something specially and strangely that we feel difficultly to understand, therefor, the great interest inspiring people who has a insightful view and a passionful action in research the conmmonplace things.

Living in the modern society, anyone who can claim that they will live better without electric light, telephone, transport such as motorcar. they are all useful in our daily life. While these things are commonly enough, none of them were exist at first, but relied on the certern surroundings, more and more things were created by our inventers, for example: aeroplane was originally designed by imitated the bird. this idea sounds funny, however, it is also the most effective method after countless failure. this fact indicate that something we ordinarily meet can greatly inspire the best idea.

While successful is so simply, just observe carefully the thing that occur in our daily life. But why only a few person can be an inventor? the fact that as an inventor not only had they pay more attention on the environment, but more importantly they also need passionate interest which can makes you concentrating on the research and never feel boring,only in this way can you put your whole heart into the searching. Or else, anything is impossible without interest. It is the best teacher for you.

Therefore, commonly things is objective, many of them are useless unless we put enough focus on them, in addition, take greatly interest in your favourable thing in which you can fully display you ability.According to this principle, perhaps you may feel that invent something extraordinarily is not very difficult ,after all, the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

amyalex111UID: 192730

我知道写的很烂。。但是我也真的想听听大家的批评意见，谢谢了。。。

kkytUID: 188814

好,一会我来,先站位

kkytUID: 188814

不好意思，昨天没看完，思路很不错，就是有些语法错误，值得商榷．应该没问题
The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things."

As we know, commonplace things are easily for people to acquire knowledge. as it can provide us various commenly拼错了吧 preformances in which we can find something specially and strangely that we feel difficultly to understand, therefortherefore, the great interest inspiring people who has a insightful view and a passionful action in researchresearching the conmmonplacecommonplace or quotidian things.这句语法有问题吧inspiring？

Living in the modern society, anyone who can claim that they will live better without electric light, telephone, transport such as motorcar. they are all useful in our daily life这句晕. While these things are commonly enough, none of them were exist at first, but relied on the certern certainsurroundings, more and more things were created by our inventers, for example: airplane was originally designed by imitated the bird. this idea sounds funny, however, it is also the most effective method after countless failure. this fact indicateindicates that something we ordinarily meet can greatly inspire the best idea.例子不错啊

While successful is so simplyone succeed, just observe carefully the thingthings that occur in our daily life. But why only a few people can be an inventor? the fact that as an inventor not only had they pay more attention on the environment, but more importantly they also need passionate interest which can makes you concentrating on the research and never feel boring语法错，不是一句话吧？, only in this way can you put your whole heart into the searching. Or else, anything is impossible without interest. It is the best teacher for you.

Therefore, commonly things is objective, many of them are useless unless we put enough focus on them, in addition, take greatly interest in your favorable thing in which you can fully display you ability. According to this principle, perhaps you may feel that invent something extraordinarily is not very difficult, after all, the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

amyalex111UID: 192730

kkyt ，非常谢谢你~~
语法问题一直是我很头疼的。。回头补一下
我觉得我词汇量也不行，写这个文章时拼不出来的词总查词霸，但还是有错词。。汗。。

这句话改成这样对么？
the great interest inspires people who has a insightful view and a passionful action in researching the commonplace or quotidian things. 开始是inspiring，查了一下词性是形容词，呵呵

the fact that as an inventor not only had they pay more attention on the environment, but more importantly they also need passionate interest which can makes you concentrating on the research and never feel boring 第3段这句话我也觉得有问题哦。。但是不知道该怎么个改法。。请教请教：）

who can claim that they will live better without electric light, telephone, transport such as motorcar? they are all useful things in our daily life.第2段这句话去掉了anyone加了？号在结尾，应该对了吧~

kkytUID: 188814

谈不上请教,一起进步吧.
the fact that as an inventor not only had they pay more attention on the environment, but more importantly they also need passionate interest which can makes you concentrating on the research and never feel boring偶认为,加上the fact that 是不是就是一个短语了,应该改成As an inventor not only should they pay more attention on the enviroment,but more important they also need passionate interest which which can make you concentrate on the research and never feel boring