issue 154 教育类 机经题，请拍砖，必回拍，谢谢~~~

nickaaronleeUID: 183378

Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.
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Should education be only leave solely to either a group of professional educators or parents and communities? In my opinion, education needs the support from not only the professional educators but also the parents and communities. Thus, I agree that both parents and communities should be involved in the local schools.

Education, which is not just the professional educators' responsibility, requires the parents to be involved in. The first step of learning of a child is to imitate what his parents do. For example, the baby cannot speak at all when he was born. He learns to speak step by step by copying what his parents speak. And with the time being, the way their parents behave and the personalities of their parents may even influence the children. In this case, the education of parents is basic and significant to children. Furthermore, when the children are qualified to go to school, the parents should contact with the schools from time to time. In this way, they can have a general idea of how their children behave in school. Sometimes the students may do something wrong due to their parents and the parents should communicate with them heart by heart, which is a very efficient and effective way. Therefore, the parents should be involved in both education of their children and the local schools.

With the kids growing up, the communities will have more influences on them. The values of a society may directly affect the children. For example there is a tendency of the society that IT industry is very popular nowadays, which will encourage the students to choose computer science as major before they enter the university. By doing so, the amount of the graduates of computer science may be much larger than the number of the demand of the IT industry, which will lead them to have no jobs available. Thereby, the communities should be involved in the local schools in order to educate the students that there are a lot of valuable and interesting professions or field available for them. They may choose what they are interested in without considering the values of the communities, which is likely to achieve them in this area.

Besides both parents and communities should be involved in education and local schools, the professional educators still play a fundamental role in education and school. It is the teachers that give lessons of different subjects to the students, which can be given by neither parents nor communities. Moreover the professional educators help the students grow up comprehensively. They not only teach various expertises but also educate the students how to behave themselves. For example, Tom, a student of my class, used to be very self-willed and he did anything without considering the right place or time. He always went to school late for no reasons. However, our class teacher never blamed him in class. Instead he often chatted with Tom and helped him to get rid of his wrong behaviors. Generally speaking, the professional educators may influence us both academically and spiritually.

To sum up, education needs the efforts from parents, communities and professional educators. With the parents and communities being involved in education and schools and the instruction from the professional educators, the students can have an all-sided growing up.
感觉这类题目挺难举例子的，大家有何建议呢？谢谢~~

cccc17UID: 192900

你所谓的几经是从哪里来的？


不是说机井是同一个考场一段时间的小题库吗？

hanlu2005UID: 184597

我也没找 到机井

onlyfishUID: 192741

Should education be only leave(left) solely to either a group of professional educators or parents and communities? In my opinion, education needs the support from not only the(the去掉吧） professional educators but also the parents and communities. Thus, I agree that both parents and communities should be involved in the local schools.

写的不错诶，我觉得例子不光指具体的也可以是泛泛的， 能证明观点就行

我觉得还可以从 教育经费的方面说 commuinity 应该支持， 还有 community应该创造好的环境，让孩子能好好学习

hanlu2005UID: 184597

我们同一天考，我看看你的文章，水平有限，明天给你回复如何

fengboallanUID: 157405

至今为止，未弄明白机经是咋回事，有空给我讲讲吧。
Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.
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Should education be only leave solely to either a group of professional educators or parents and communities? In my opinion, education needs the support from not only the professional educators but also the parents and communities. Thus, I agree that both parents and communities should be involved in the local schools.

Education, which is not just the professional educators' responsibility, requires the parents to be involved in. The first step of learning of a child is to imitate what his parents do. For example, the baby cannot speak at all when he was born. He learns to speak step by step by copying what his parents speak（also their pronunciation characters.). And with the time being(going), the way their parents behave and the personalities of their parents(去掉两个parents更为简洁) may even influence the children. In this case, the education of parents is basic and significant to children. Furthermore, when the children are qualified to go to school, the parents should contact with the schools from time to time（often，有时不太好）. In this way, they can have a general idea of how their children behave in school. Sometimes the students may do something wrong due to their parents（这句话说得不明白，学生的错误怎么能归咎于家长呢） and the parents should communicate with them heart by heart, which is a very efficient and effective way. （加一句，否则跳跃性太大：正因为，在正常的家庭中家长扮演vital role，所以，无论家长在忙，或者工作或者其他的事情，也不应该推卸教育孩子的责任。）Therefore, the parents should be involved in both education of their children and the local schools.（有了我加的一句，这句可以去掉了）

With the kids growing up, the communities will have more influences on them. The values of a society may directly affect the children. For example there is a tendency of the society that IT industry is very popular nowadays, which will encourage the students to choose computer science as major before they enter the university. By doing so, the amount of the graduates of computer science may be much larger than the number of the demand of the IT industry, which will lead them to have no jobs available. Thereby, the communities should be involved in the local schools in order to educate the students that there are a lot of valuable and interesting professions or field available for them. They may choose what they are interested in without considering the values of the communities, which is likely to achieve them in this area.
说说我对这段的想法。其实我觉得在国外communities正确的理解应该是社区。不是社会。就是咱们家小区阿，或者国外的一个街区，都是大的house的那种的。区域性组织。对于，“居委会的作用”可以这样举例子，当学生放学之后或者假期，或者周末。街区的负责人和组织应应该组织一些活动：例如，组织孩子有偿清雪（国外没有少先队的先进性，干活不要钱）。到企业去参观等等。对孩子都是有很大的作用的

Besides both parents and communities should be involved in education and local schools, the professional educators still play a fundamental role in education and school. It is the teachers that give lessons of different subjects to the students, which can be given by neither parents nor communities. Moreover the professional educators help the students grow up comprehensively. They not only teach various expertises but also educate the students how to behave themselves. For example, Tom, a student of my class, used to be very self-willed and he did anything without considering the right place or time. He always went to school late for no reasons. However, our class teacher never blamed him in class. Instead he often chatted with Tom and helped him to get rid of his wrong behaviors. Generally speaking, the professional educators may influence us both academically and spiritually.

To sum up, education needs the efforts from parents, communities and professional educators. With the parents and communities being involved in education and schools and the instruction from the professional educators, the students can have an all-sided growing up.
具体语言没有看

说说你的层次问题吧。
文章的statement已经暗说了职业教育家的作用巨大。还有必要在第三个论点中重复么？这个论题不用balance.直接agree就完了。说得也轻松！论述一个问题不一定有实际的意义，主要以论述的清楚为主。要不到了考场上就没有这么轻松了
怎么好写怎么写
instuction paragraph
完全同意
body
1 强调家长的教育作用
a 在法律上家长有责无旁贷的责任
b 家长多关注孩子的家庭，孩子容易在人格和各个方面更为的健全
2强调社区的作用
我在文中已经说了怎么写了
最后
来个总结，展望：这个社会都关注教育，那么未来有希望了
这样比较好写
要不
你第三段就有点形同虚设了。


小建议呵呵

nickaaronleeUID: 183378

机经就是考过的题目吧，我也是看到人家贴出来这个题目考过的，所以就认为是机经了

nickaaronleeUID: 183378

非常谢谢onlyfish的意见，我正觉得缺少角度呢，经费问题不错：）to：hanlu2005，我水平也不高，大家共同进步，加油~~~！非常感谢fengboallan的修改，你的意见我接受，因为我已经习惯中间三段式，，呵呵，因为如果前面两段挖掘得不够深入，第三段不写我的文章字数就不够了。你的修改我都记下了：）