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发表于 2005-2-20 17:33:43 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

今天仔细分析了一下范文，怎么觉得好几本书的同一篇经典招牌范文（就是孙远那本作文书上specialists V.S. generalists 的6分范文）有点问题。不知道是我的阅读能力还是理解能力，或者思维方式有点问题，我总觉得那篇文章的论述缺乏条理，不连贯。还有些句子表达看不懂意思（这个肯定是我的水平问题了！！！）很难认同公认的的榜样，郁闷ing……

上面这些刚才不小心贴在综合版了，在这里重贴一下，不好意思：）

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发表于 2005-2-20 18:17:26 |只看该作者

6分范文我从来没看懂过,我现在都还有你的那种感觉,多看几遍吧
5分的还好理解一些

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板凳

发表于 2005-2-20 21:32:33 |只看该作者

能够自己思考很好啊,不要着急下定论,可以多看看别的文章,等过段时间再来看这篇文章.

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地板

发表于 2005-2-20 22:25:34 |只看该作者

ETS范文却真的写的很好的

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发表于 2005-2-20 22:57:35 |只看该作者

writing is to express idea and thoughts.
reading is to get imformation and knowledge.
so, if you could hardly understand what the author wants to say, you probably assume that this is a BAD writing.

check it out: what makes your confusion? too many new words? long sentence? logic?
and try to grasp its meaning by repeated reading.

before you really understand the essay, it is a little hasty to get to any conclusion.

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发表于 2005-2-20 23:06:24 |只看该作者

BTW, chinese people are among the most smart, bright and brilliant ones, and everyone has his'her own idea on one thing. So it is hard to persuade us chinese to accept other's logical analysis.

If you image you are an teenager and do not be so critical when reading the issue, you might find that you would understand it more easily.

^_^
Huh...

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发表于 2005-2-20 23:21:39 |只看该作者

那些范文下面有ets的评语，可以从评语入手来理解范文和了解aw的要求

老米的思维、语言跟我们还是有些差异的

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发表于 2005-2-20 23:38:12 |只看该作者

不同的时间看收获总是不一样的！：）

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By hearing ye shall hear, and shall not understand; and seeing ye shall see, and shall not perceive: people's heart is waxed gross, and their ears are dull of hearing, and their eyes they have closed; lest at any time they should see with their eyes, and hear with their ears, and should understand with their heart, and should be converted, and I should heal them.

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