issue131 逃不掉的机经题，很想让大家把把脉

haiyaUID: 187989

131. Arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.

As the crystal of human’s wisdom, arts take a role to reveal the ideas and impulses of a society over the course of human’s history. Since its unique function is to establish a bridge between the inner and outer world in a specific style involving connotation and symbolization, without art, some ideas and impulses of a society, such as emotion, spirit and pursuit, will be buried forever.

Arts are regarded as an emissary who shuttles between the reality and ideology as well as catch emotion, spirit and pursuits. When it comes to science, the final goal is to reflect the fact objectively. Similarly, when it comes to politics, its task is to deal with the social relationship. However, for the part of art, it possesses the function of resorting to the mundane material to display the prosperous inner world, including the thoughts whose source comes from the reality. The mundane material may be the pigment, words, stone, instrument, wood and so on. Due to the familiarity of these materials, arts are not luxurious and elusive but are understood and took advantage of by all people to convey emotion, spirit and dream,.

Depending on the connotation of arts, the accusation of the society’s evil is possible to be unveiled carefully and condemned seriously. Since some evil always links with the benefits of the majority or the sovereign power, persons, who protest it directly in public, will be doomed to persecution. Thus the accusation against the evil is likely to be hidden and people have no choice but to bear it in silence. However, the appearance of arts gives rise to the expression of satisfaction in an ostensible irrelevant but actually profound style. Consider the “Hackleberry Finn”, which was written by Mark Twain. Through the story of Hackleberry, the fiction criticizes the truculence of feudal family, unveils the irrationality of lynch, lashes the falsehood of religion and blames the evil of slavery. By the epochal art works, these hidden dissatisfaction about the evil in a society finds the way to be released and more people will realize and pay attention to the acute detrimental social phenomenon.

Depending on the symbolization of arts, the contemporary spirit and pursuit of a society becomes concrete. The spirit and the pursuit for a future world are too abstractive to be understood by the common. In order to reach a uniform definition, the arts function again to construct people’s inner world with realistic entities. When it comes to the spirit, the dragon embodies the ancient China since it is noble and ambitious. And the bold eagle, in the minds of Americans, represents the spirit of freedom. When it comes to the pursuit, the ancient pyramids and great cathedrals of Europe rise upward toward the star and heavens so as to embody the society’s yearning for the kindness, truth and beauty. The symbolization confirms people’s belief and encourages them to advance with a common wish.

To sum up, the expression of some idea and view in the society need the assist of arts. If arts, as an emissary, disappear one day, a rigid and fixed boundary will be impressed between realistic and ideological world and the two worlds will lose certain contacts.


这道题最终还是逃不掉，硬写。希望大家提提意见。
2月机经题

foreverlovesUID: 166930

As the crystal of human’s wisdom,[人类智慧的结晶是这么说吗] arts take a role to reveal the ideas and impulses of a society over the course of human’s history. Since its unique function is to establish a bridge between the inner and outer world in a specific style involving connotation and symbolization, without art, some ideas and impulses of a society, such as emotion, spirit and pursuit, will be buried forever.

Arts are regarded as an emissary who shuttles between the reality and ideology as well as catch emotion, spirit and pursuits. When it comes to science, the final goal is to reflect the fact objectively.[arts 包括science 吗] Similarly, when it comes to politics, its task is to deal with the social relationship. However, for the part of art, it possesses the function of resorting to the mundane material to display the prosperous inner world, including the thoughts whose source comes from the reality.[这个句子好] The mundane material may be the pigment, words, stone, instrument, wood and so on. Due to the familiarity of these materials, arts are not luxurious and elusive but are understood and took advantage of by all people to convey emotion, spirit and dream,.

Depending on the connotation of arts, the accusation of the society’s evil is possible to be unveiled carefully and condemned seriously. Since some evil always links with the benefits of the majority or the sovereign power, persons, who protest it directly in public, will be doomed to persecution. Thus the accusation against the evil is likely to be hidden and people have no choice but to bear it in silence. However, the appearance of arts gives rise to the expression of satisfaction in an ostensible irrelevant but actually profound style. Consider the “Hackleberry Finn”, which was written by Mark Twain. Through the story of Hackleberry, the fiction criticizes the truculence of feudal family, unveils the irrationality of lynch, lashes the falsehood of religion and blames the evil of slavery. By the epochal art works, these hidden dissatisfaction about the evil in a society finds the way to be released and more people will realize and pay attention to the acute detrimental social phenomenon.这一段挺好的,揭露社会现实

Depending on the symbolization of arts, the contemporary spirit and pursuit of a society becomes concrete. The spirit and the pursuit for a future world are too abstractive to be understood by the common[common peple]. In order to reach a uniform definition, the arts function again to construct people’s inner world with realistic entities. When it comes to the spirit, the dragon embodies the ancient China since it is noble and ambitious. And the bold eagle, in the minds of Americans, represents the spirit of freedom. When it comes to the pursuit, the ancient pyramids and great cathedrals of Europe rise upward toward the star and heavens so as to embody the society’s yearning for the kindness, truth and beauty. The symbolization confirms people’s belief and encourages them to advance with a common wish. [sprit和pursuit一个是idea, 一个是impulse]

To sum up, the expression of some idea and view in the society need[needs] the assist of arts. If arts,[这里arts是表示art的复数还是另外有别的含义,现在也头晕了,关系到后面disappear+s的问题]as an emissary, disappear one day, a rigid and fixed boundary will be impressed between realistic and ideological world and the two worlds will lose certain contacts.

[好文章哎,好多好单词哦,我得赶紧学学]

bradlinUID: 184289

我想二楼误会了.楼主第二段的"it comes to science"应该不是指arts 包括science..而是指对于arts的任务是~~~来说,science 是指~~~~
P4的common people 也可以写成common的..

goasupleaseUID: 195799

语言挺流畅的,赞一个

但是感觉思路没打来,写得有点累,应该挺花时间的,除非是牛了
楼主的body思路大概是

艺术在理想和现实之间传达信息,而其它学科做不到;(写得不错,但有点离题之感);
艺术能反映社会阴暗(写得挺好的)
艺术易被接受,而其他表现形式太抽象(感觉又回来第一个上去了)

逻辑上ms不够coherent
看过一遍外国人的文章,文笔不能和楼主比(印尼人,呵呵),但从个人情感表达,社会情绪发泄,反现民族文化其个层次写,看上去挺连贯的,至少在逻辑上

有机会请多拍砖,都是挺具争议的题,多谢
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davidjackyUID: 135962

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haiyaUID: 187989

看了楼上的评语，我想讲讲我对于这个题目本身的理解。
特别是那个otherwise。

我写b1的目的是证明如果没有艺术的话，社会中的一些idea和impulse会边hidden掉。

也就是说

艺术能揭示那些否则（otherwise) 会被hidden掉的social impulse & idea.

也就是有些impulse和idea只有艺术能揭示，其他学科不能揭示。

不知道我把自己的意思说的明白否。

这篇文章我当时列不出提纲就是因为要证明这个otherwise觉得好困难。而不是难于它的揭示功能。

这题有两个关键
1。otherwise hidden
2。reveal impulse and value of the society.

haiyaUID: 187989

顶一下，还想再看听听评价。因为我对于这篇把握不大。

冥界星灿UID: 184746

占座^_^

冥界星灿UID: 184746

131. Arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.

As the crystal of human’s wisdom恩？, arts take a role to reveal the ideas and impulses of a society over the course of human’s history. Since its unique function is to establish a bridge between the inner and outer world in a specific style involving connotation and symbolization, without art, some ideas and impulses of a society, such as emotion, spirit and pursuit, will be buried forever.文章结构是完全同意？部分同意？看到这不知道你的想法和后续文章结构那

Arts are regarded as an emissary who shuttles between the reality and ideology as well as catch emotion, spirit and pursuits. When it comes to science, the final goal is to reflect the fact objectively. Similarly, when it comes to politics, its task is to deal with the social relationship. However, for the part of art, it possesses the function of resorting to the mundane material to display the prosperous inner world, including the thoughts whosewhose? source comes from the reality. The mundane material may be the pigment, words, stone, instrument, wood and so on. Due to the familiarity of these materials, arts are not luxurious and elusive but are understood and took advantage ofof去掉 by all people to convey emotion, spirit and dream,.注意标点作为散文很好，作为议论文，看得人有些迷茫，不知道你想说什么

Depending on the connotation of arts, the accusation of the society’s evil is possible to be unveiled carefully and condemned seriously. Since some evil always links with the benefits of the majority or the sovereign power, persons, an individualwho protest it directly in public, will be doomed to persecutionbe persecuted. Thus the accusation against the evil is likely to be hidden and people have no choice but to bear it in silence. However, the appearance of arts gives rise to the expression of satisfactiondisfaction in an ostensible irrelevant but actually profound style. Consider the “Hackleberry Finn”, which was written by Mark Twain. Through the story of Hackleberry, the fiction criticizes the truculence of feudal family, unveils the irrationality of lynch, lashes the falsehood of religion and blames the evil of slavery. By the epochal art works, these hidden dissatisfaction about the evil in a society finds the way to be released and more people will realize and pay attention to the acute detrimental social phenomenon.

Depending on the symbolization of arts, the contemporary spirit and pursuit of a society becomes concrete. The spirit and the pursuit for a future world are too abstractive to be understood by the common歧视人民大众？. In order to reach a uniform definition, the arts function again to construct people’s inner world楼主注意，艺术是express or reveal the inner worlds of human being, not construct them with realistic entities. When it comes to the spirit, the dragon embodies the ancient China龙使acient China具象化？还有，龙是艺术？ since it is noble and ambitious. And the bold eagle这一类图腾不是艺术形式啊, in the minds of Americans, represents the spirit of freedom. When it comes to the pursuit, the ancient pyramids and great cathedrals 建筑是艺术，这个例子可以的of Europe rise upward toward the star and heavens so as to embody the society’s yearning for the kindness, truth and beauty. The symbolization confirms people’s belief and encourages them to advance with a common wish这句好像是图腾的作用.

To sum up, the expression of some idea and view in the society need the assist of arts. If arts, as an emissary, disappear one day, a rigid and fixed boundary will be impressed between realistic and ideological world and the two worlds will lose certain contacts.

对你严要求。

也许是我领悟能力差，全文看完感觉你的观点不是那么鲜明。尤其是第一段。

语言很好，但这篇思路很怪

快考了，加油^_^

davidjackyUID: 135962

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No.1 issue131 逃不掉的机经题，很想让大家把把脉
131. Arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.

As the crystal of human’s wisdom, arts take a role to reveal the ideas and impulses of a society over the course of human’s history. Since its unique function is to establish a bridge between the inner and outer world in a specific style involving connotation and symbolization, without art, some ideas and impulses of a society, such as emotion, spirit and pursuit, will be buried forever.开头可以

Arts are regarded as an emissary who shuttles between the reality and ideology as well as catchs emotion, spirit and pursuits. When it comes to science, the final goal is to reflect the fact objectively. Similarly, when it comes to politics, its task is to deal with the social relationship. However, for the part of art, it possesses the function of resorting to the mundane material to display the prosperous inner world, including the thoughts whose source comes from the reality. The mundane material may be the pigment, words, stone, instrument, wood and so on. Due to the familiarity ofJust based on these vividmaterials, arts are not luxurious andor elusive but are understood and tooktaken advantage of by all people to convey emotion, spirit and dream,.中心点论述还不是很清晰

Depending on the connotation of arts, the accusation of the society’s evil is possible to be unveiled carefully and condemned seriously. Since some evil always links with the benefits of the majority or the sovereign power, persons, who protest it directly in public, will be doomed to persecution. Thus the accusation against the evil is likely to be hidden and people have no choice but to bear it in silence. However, the appearance of arts gives rise to the expression of satisfaction in an ostensible irrelevant but actually profound style. Consider the “Hackleberry Finn”, which was written by Mark Twain. Through the story of Hackleberry, the fiction criticizes the truculence of feudal family, unveils the irrationality of lynch, lashes the falsehood of religion and blames the evil of slavery. By the epochal art works, these hidden dissatisfaction about the evil in a society finds the way to be released and more people will realize and pay attention to the acute detrimental social phenomenon.用词老练，已经很不错

Depending on同义词太多了，为什么不试着变换一下 the symbolization of arts, the contemporary spirit and pursuit of a society becomes concrete. The spirit and the pursuit for a future world are too abstractiveabstract to be understood by the common. In order to reach a uniform definition, the arts function again to construct people’s inner world with realistic entities. When it comes to the spirit, the dragon embodies the ancient China since it is noble and ambitious. And the bold eagle, in the minds of Americans, represents the spirit of freedom. When it comes to the pursuit, the ancient pyramids and great cathedrals of Europe rise upward toward the star and heavens so as to embody the society’s yearning for the kindness, truth and beauty. The symbolization confirms people’s belief and encourages them to advance with a common wish.

To sum up, the expression of some idea and view in the society need the assist of arts. If arts, as an emissary, disappear one day, a rigid and fixed boundary will be impressed between realistic and ideological world and the two worlds will lose certain contacts.

文章写的比较保守，很多词汇值得学习,再接再厉，表态观点要明确即可

crystal_shenUID: 158842

"Wow!" when read the fisrt sentence, since my name is "Crystal"
Huh, I will read this essay later.

Go dining and see you!

pherUID: 192036

As the crystal of human’s wisdom, arts take a role to reveal the ideas and impulses of a society over the course of human’s history. Since its unique function is to establish a bridge between the inner and outer world in a specific style involving connotation and symbolization, without art, some ideas and impulses of a society, such as emotion, spirit and pursuit, will be buried forever.【论点很清晰，同意。但问题是开头这句话结构不太好，since ...without arts, some...主语就成some  ideas了。不如改成这样： since... ，arts do reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impuls of a society,such as...此时引用TS的原词未尝不是个办法。】

Arts are regarded as an emissary who shuttles between the reality and ideology as well as catch emotion, spirit and pursuits. 这句话改成“Arts act as a shuttle between the reality and ideology, carrying emotions, spirits and pursuits.”这样显得更生动形象:) When it comes to science, the final goal is to reflect the fact【s】 objectively. Similarly, when it comes to politics, its task 【purpose】is to deal with the social relationship【s】. However, for the part of art, it possesses the function of resorting to the mundane material to display the prosperous inner world, including the thoughts whose source 【source喝come from重复，说“...thoughts that come from...”即可】comes from the reality. The mundane material may be the pigment, words, stone, instrument, wood and so on. Due to the familiarity of these materials, arts are not luxurious and elusive but are understood and took advantage of by all people to convey emotion, spirit and dream【几句对比，就把science、politics和arts的区别道出，实际上也说明了为何arts能reveal诸如science和politics不能reveal的东西。
注1.我不同意4号楼的观点。这段的意义很重要。
注2.我看了资料，arts在西方也不包括science，haiya放心写，science在西方属于哲学:)】

Depending on the connotation of arts, the accusation of the society’s evil is possible to be unveiled carefully and condemned seriously. Since some evil always links with the benefits of the majority or the sovereign power, persons, who protest it directly in public, will be doomed to persecution. Thus the accusation against the evil is likely to be hidden and people have no choice but to bear it in silence. However, the appearance of arts gives rise to the expression of satisfaction in an ostensible irrelevant but actually profound style. Consider the “Hackleberry Finn”, which was written by Mark Twain. Through the story of Hackleberry, the fiction criticizes the truculence of feudal family, unveils the irrationality of lynch, lashes the falsehood of religion and blames the evil of slavery. By the epochal art works, these hidden dissatisfaction about the evil in a society finds the way to be released and more people will realize and pay attention to the acute detrimental social phenomenon.【逻辑上讲，这段写的不错，尤其是Hackleberry的例子，那串排比很赞。
不过，我问个题外话？既然一开始讲arts容易被所有人接受，那么这所有人当然包括帝王君主这些原本hide其他表现形式的人，他们既然也能理解arts，那么他们为何不想办法也hide arts呢？（比如焚书坑儒）。呵呵，不好回答了吧。其实呢，我觉得可以再陈述arts的另一个character—具有生命力vitality，arts一旦被创作后，便有了生命力，它可以通过book承载、可以通过music score承载，通过paper承载，尤其是可以通过people传承和播广，只要这些不消亡，arts就不会消亡，不会被hidden。而且，这么一说，由此还可以引申到下一段阐述arts易于被大众接受，更增加了文章的逻辑性】

Depending on the symbolization of arts, the contemporary spirit and pursuit of a society becomes concrete. The spirit and the pursuit for a future world are too abstractive to be understood by the common. In order to reach a uniform definition, the arts function again to construct people’s inner world with realistic entities. When it comes to the spirit, the dragon embodies the ancient China since it is noble and ambitious. And the bold eagle, in the minds of Americans, represents the spirit of freedom. When it comes to the pursuit, the ancient pyramids and great cathedrals of Europe rise upward toward the star and heavens so as to embody the society’s yearning for the kindness, truth and beauty. The symbolization confirms people’s belief and encourages them to advance with a common wish.
【嗳！你前面提到的emotion呢？虎头蛇尾了吧，要说的，比如马赛进行曲Marseillaise，表达了法国人们保卫祖国的决心，激励着一代又一代的法国人。】

To sum up, the expression of some idea and view in the society need the assist of arts. If arts, as an emissary, disappear one day, a rigid and fixed boundary will be impressed between realistic and ideological world and the two worlds will lose certain contacts.
【总的来讲，写的挺好，如果把第四和第五段位置倒一下，先讲arts易于被人接受，再讲因为arts易于接受，传承的多媒介，有生命力，能揭示社会阴暗，这样在逻辑上是不是更连贯呢？我说的这个生命力的hint应该不错，用上应该能增色不少 :)
通篇呢，还有个缺点—单复数不分，不过呢，真正考试时评卷应该也不太注重这个的吧。
还有两天，加油！考完看你的表现 :) 】