Issue 34, High-speed electronic communications media

johnlockUID: 129399

题目："High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication."
Position: Disagree
Outline:
1 电子邮件和电视等高速通讯方式加快信息传播速度，事实上使得meaningful and thoughtful communication."更为容易。（反）
古今信息交流速度和范围对比
2 高速通讯方式没有妨碍meaningful and thoughtful 思想观点的产生（反）
高速媒体开阔了眼界--〉易于形成全面深刻的思想
高速媒体拉近人们心理距离，增加好奇心（电视生动，电子邮件是双向的交互）—〉更加渴望深刻的交流
深邃思想的形成基础对于传统交流和高速媒体交流是相同的—〉对真理的把握程度
3 大量网络，电视的垃圾信息的确妨碍有意义有远见的交流。（散）

正文：
Nowadays no one would doubt that electronic communication media reach a much bigger audience at a speed that pales even forerunners a few decades ago. However, whether such high speed means as television and email have handicapped meaningful and thoughtful communication has been called into doubt. In fact, one needs not to go far to find that these doubts are groundless.

Far from being an impediment, high speed electronic media step up the communication of meaningful and insightful ideas. In previous times, most of communication was carried out by mail delivered by postmen hurrying in carts pulled by horses. This was undoubtedly slow and full of mistakes in addressing and delivery. Things became worse if weather was inclement. In 19th century, great writers, such as Tolstoy, Balzac and Moiposson, spent months waiting for important responses from their publishers and peer friends. However, what is need in the era of email is a click to send an insightful review, a brilliant idea or an enlightening paper to the other hemisphere.

Besides, it involved prohibitive costs of money and time to get thoughtful works, whether a play, a novel or musical composition, to a large audience that the greatness of the works ought to reach. Best sellers by scintillating names, for example, Dickens, Dumas, Hugo, hardly approached the threshold of a million. Today TVs and internet can place novels , drama or thoughts at the focus of national attention within minutes. Never has it been more convenient to conduct thoughtful and meaningful communication with high speed electronic media as today.

Not only do high speed electronic media contribute much to quickly communicating thoughtful and meaningful ideas or works, they also enhance their production. TVs and internet open up new fields of perception and broaden our horizon, bringing myriads of new knowledge before our inquiring minds. With the richness and completeness of information available, we are more ready to come up with meaningful and holistic ideas since insularity hampers perception and yields bigotry. What’s more, the vividness of TVs and highly interactive nature of email help draw closer the minds of people of different skin colors and nationalities, fostering curiosity and a sense of unity. This in turn promotes the readiness to a higher stage of meaningful and in-depth communication. In the Hollywood classic <You’ve Got Mail>, Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan demonstrates what a amazing altitude communication through email can reach. Meaningfulness and insight always result from the same things-perception and love of truth, candor and trust, and readiness to share ideas and skill in self-expression. The ease and richness of high speed electronic media add new strength to these things in bringing forth insights in communication.

Admittedly, there are lots of trash ads and unwholesome contents in TV shows and emails, which constitute real threats to meaningful communication. But we should not balk at promoting the usage of email or watching TV programs. We should see the tremendous joint efforts by email service providers, TV program producers and legislation to get rid of trash information that stands in the way of customer rights and meaningful communication. The hope for a clean and clear space both in TV and cyberspace is growing bigger.

High speed electronic media are blessing for meaningful and thoughtful communication, though there are spots that may mar their perfection. We should embrace them and help them grow wholesomely.

johnlockUID: 129399

请大家捧场！

乒乓球爱上九月UID: 162925

你好,请不要一天发这么多篇好么？好好改一篇效率才高. 请看一下我的签名.谢谢.

legendhfwangUID: 191674

好好看了一遍，不禁想说这样的范文还需要自己改吗？呵呵，写的很好，真的，佩服楼主，论证和例子以及词语使用都很好。

鸡蛋里挑骨头，最后一段有个to sum up就更好了，让人知道到头了，
另外However, what is need （needed) in the era of email is a click to send an insightful review, a brilliant idea or an enlightening paper to the other hemisphere.

johnlockUID: 129399

刀砍斧凿的粗滥之作，谢谢楼上使我增加一点信心
我哪里一天发很多，都是昨天没人回自己又顶上来的