第三篇(第一次限时)issue，大家帮忙看看啊:)

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159 Will humans always be superior to machines?


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When the caveman first used a rock to kill an animal thousands of years ago, the humans began to use the tools. Human invented the automobile to relieve their feet from walking. Human set up the telephone networks to make the distance zero.. People kept on accumulating knowledges and making good use of it. They invented countless novel tools and made them to work well for humans. The humans  were able to be predicted the weather by the help of high performance computer. And humans can get latest news by accessing to the Internet, clicking serval times of the mouse.

In the end of last century, when the Deepblue, which was manufactured by IBM, first beated the human in the area of chess, humans began to wonder if humans would always be superior to machines?

In fact, machines do have some advantages to human in some aspects. For example, the machines is much faster than human doing digit computation. The computer finish billion times of computation in just a heart beat while the human need perhaps life time long to finish the same work. The machines seldom make mistakes while the humans make mistakes inevitable. The machine is much tougher than humans: it can lift tons of goods while the huamn can't. The machine can work days and night while the human need a good sleep to start a new day.. Therefore, the machines is superior to Man in some aspects.

Additionally, man can not always control the things they invented. One example was the wild rabbits in Australia last century. After somebody brought the variety of rabbits from Europe to Australia, the rabbits propagated without control and soon it ran over the whole continent. The rabbits devoured the herbage that could maintain millions of sheep and cattle for years. People invented a virus to killed most of this rabbits in Australia. Ironically, the virus spread to the Europe, where the rabbis was the basis of the profitable fur industry, and the people found difficult to get rid of this virus. This example says that man can not always take charge of the things they invented, including the virus and also the machines.

Finally, with the develop of science and technology, it's possible that the machines could some day gain the intelligence. The Deepblue gave some signs to show this. As is showed in many fantasic movie, after the machines gain intelligence, the can get rid of the restrictions from Man.

In summary, I take leave to doubt that humans will always be superior than machines. The machines have already exceeded humans in some aspects, and with the development, machines may gain intellegence some day in the future. The moore law which says that the computational speed can double in 18 months works until now. The competition between human and machines continues.

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wuwu, 大家帮忙看看吧

calesusanUID: 196857

那个rabbit的例子好像不大适合human和machine的关系吧。
BTW，这个rabbit的例子是新概念4上面的例文吧，呵呵

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No.1 第三篇(第一次限时)issue，大家帮忙看看啊
159 Will humans always be superior to machines?


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When the caveman first used a rock to kill an animal thousands of years ago, the humans began to use the tools. Human invented the automobile to relieve their feet from walking. Human set up the telephone networks to make the distance zero.. People kept on accumulating knowledges and making good use of it. They invented countless novel tools and made them to work well for humans. The humans were able to be predicted the weather by the help of high performance computer. And humans can get latest news by accessing to the Internet, clicking serval times of the mouse.

In the end of last century, when the Deepblue, which was manufactured by IBM, first beated the human in the area of chess, humans began to wonder if humans would always be superior to machines?很新颖的开头，我只看你的Body部分了。

In fact, machines do have some advantages to human in some aspects. For example, the machines is much faster than human doing digit computation这个句子有问题. The computer finish billion times of computation in just a heart beat while the human need perhaps life time long to finish the same work. The machines seldom make mistakes while the humans make mistakes inevitable用副词. The machine is much tougher than humans: it can lift tons of goods while the huamn can't. The machine can work days and night while the human need a good sleep to start a new day.. Therefore, the machines is superior to Man in some aspects.机器优于人：计算速度、犯错误、工作强度；首尾各有总结句，但是最后in some aspects可以略微变换一下，are 不是is

Additionally, man can not always control the things they invented. One example was the wild rabbits in Australia last century. After somebody brought the variety of rabbits from Europe to Australia, the rabbits propagated without control and soon it ran over the whole continent. The rabbits devoured the herbage that could maintain millions of sheep and cattle for years. People invented a virus to killed most of this rabbits in Australia. Ironically, the virus spread to the Europe, where the rabbis was the basis of the profitable fur industry, and the people found difficult to get rid of this virus. This example says that man can not always take charge of the things they invented, including the virus and also the machines.这个例子不对，从病毒怎么衍生到机器？三思

Finally, with the developbreakthrough of science and technology, it's possible that the machines could some day gain the intelligence. The Deepblue gave some signs to show this. As is showed in many fantasic movie, after the machines gain intelligence, thethey can get rid of the restrictions from Man.深蓝的例子说明人打败人，机器没有获得intelligence，科幻不能用来证明你的观点，

In summary, I take leave to doubt that humans will always be superior than用法不对 machines. The machines have already exceeded humans in some aspects, and with the development, machines may gain intellegence some day in the future. The moore law which says that the computational speed can double in 18 months works until now. The competition between human and machines continues.

实事求是的说，文章试图创新但B2的例子不支持，B3的论述过于简单