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Through history of human being, people constantly encounter problems which they think(thought?)complex and challenging because of their limitation of some knowledge and experiences. Nowadays people still ask the question that whether the problems we confront today are even more complex and challenging than our predecessors faced, or they are just illusions and can be eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experiences. From my angle(这个用法我没想到哦 学习!), I think complexity and challenge are relative concepts but not absolute ones, which may be evaluated by quantity of obtained knowledge and experience and(这里我觉得另起一句比较好 因为有很多and了) based on this attitude I would like to say questions today are much more complex and challenging (换一个说法吧 用了很多次了)than our predecessors once faced.
Changing from simple to complex is the regulation of development. Any problem put forwards has its own history(historical?) background. For example, our predecessors may think how to protect and continue the fire as a complex problem(think...as...没见过这个搭配波~用consider...as..可能好一点), which everyone, even children, can easily accomplish(这个词用的有点大) today. This example may be a little exaggerated but from which we can see complexity and challenge is a relative concept but not an absolute one.(照旧,换一个说法吧 重复了) That is because the limitation of people’s knowledge and experiences. Today, to some extant(extent 不应该的错误), with the accumulation of science and technology, we know much more and have much broader horizon than our predecessors; we have already resolved many problems once considered complex and changing,(...) but face new ones which we still can not resolve.
There are numerous examples from which we can find more and more complex and challenging characteristic of problems we have faced before and we are facing now. Newton, for instance, resolved the problem why apples fall down to the ground, and his theories can be most people accepted(有这样说的吗?) and are mostly taught in middle school physical classes. However Einstein, born much later than Newton, discovered the theory of relativity, which few people can understand and are mostly taught in universities. (这个例子我没懂:P)The same conditions are also in other areas. In social areas more and more problems, just like sex, abusing, drug and so on, appear in front of people, which seldom affect people’s life in the past time because less or no experiences (was?)similar to those our predecessors had and they even never think(thought) about those. Moreover, with the increased science and technology, we face many problems our predecessors might never face, such as internet crime. All of these present the fact that current problems are more complex and challenging than before.
However we should realize that no matter how complex and challenging the problems are, we will find new theories and technology to resolve them, and these questions become simple ones when they are resolved. At the same time we can not forget that after we resolve the old ones, we still have to confront new problems which may more complex and challenging than resolved ones. This process will continue all the time and totally resolving will never achieve, no matter how broad and deep our knowledge and experience will reach.
Human beings should always realize that even though we will confront more and more complex and challenging problems than our predecessors faced, we have confidence to resolve them with the increased knowledge and experience. This process will never stop, and just it makes our society develop more and more advanced.(你想用强调吗?应该是it is ....that...吧)
语言上有很大的提高空间,不过思维很好,有一个递进的过程,但表述上最好能体现出这种递进
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