Issue 4 单一领域 Vs 复合、边缘化(必回改！)

smartyrUID: 169453

Issue 4 “No filed of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.”

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I fundamentally agree with the assertion that significant advances in study require expertise from a range of fields. Indeed, the long history of human being exploring the principles and rules of nature has proved that incorporation of knowledge and experience from the outsider fields can eventually lead to distinguished achievements. However, it is too arbitrary to claim that outside knowledge and experience are the necessarily indispensable factors for the significant progress.

To begin with, nowadays, with the further researching of science and technology, any aspects of human activities is changing with each passing day so that it is impossible for anyone to acquire full of the knowledge of any fields of study because of lacking time and energy. No one can exclude the possibility that one prominent researcher may not have a knowledge of another field which his work doesn’t involve or cannot attract his concern. As the saying that two heads are better than one, spontaneously, cooperation and intercommunication between various fields of study are increasingly needed and become more and more widely. Take for instance, on a sunny autumn morning 2003, China's first manned spaceship ShenZhou-5 was launched which was a remarkable carrier of all fields' cooperation, such as mechanical, material, astronautic, electronic, communicational, computer and even biological knowledge. And ultimately, sucess came.

Besides, the novel approaches and perspectives of outside disciplines sometimes bring fresh ideas to our traditional disciplines, which can expand their sphere of researching and application in a much broader scope. To illustrate, a case in point in this respect is that the distinguished Hungary American mathematician, John von Neumann applied mathematic thoughts and ideas to economics, resulting in the born of the famous game thory which had a profound influence upon it. Another example is that when biologist initiated researching the genetics, they referred some of the chemistry knowledge and research methods. This lead to a new diverse and interdisciplinary fields-biochemistry, we all know today, which involves study the origins of life with both biology and chemestry means. In addition, in the increasingly competitive commerical society today, many military tacits and strategy are used in the enterprise management.  

Furthermore, it is easy for one to create new theories by referring the comprehensive laws and regulations which precursors of other fields have accumulated for their inheritors for a long period and proved to be true by their skillful experience and practices. Hence, he can obtain a much higher start point and doesn't have to start from the beginning level, and then avoid walking a lot of tough roads to reach his destination. Nanotechnology is one of the remarkable examples. This promising technology is based on traditional mechanical exact science, material and biology science.  All of these disciplines have been fully developed for a long time and the experters of these fields have gained a host of experience. It doesn't require the researcher working from zero. Therefore, outside knowledge and experience are of importance for significant advance in any fields.

On the other hand, however, it is seemingly ridiculous to assert that any significant progress in any fields resulting from the employing knowledge and learning from other fields. As we know, any significant progress is inseparable with the laborious work of the researchers in the very field. It is a child of their perspiration and long period endurance during the investigation process.

In the final analysis, it is conceded that the accurate results and fruition outsiders bring will introduce more fresh approaches and provide higher start point for researchers, also will help men to extend their scientific investigation fields and know better of their life. Nevertheless it is just serve as one of the important stimulations that objectively exists in the increasingly interdisciplinary fields of study.

davidjackyUID: 135962

[请结队改作文，谢谢]

https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=250350
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晨曦UID: 177893

如果没人看，试试看多改两篇别人的，既是借鉴学习，也是熟悉人口，才能有人来帮你呢。

作文论坛强调的是互动，而不是义务啦。认真就会有进步哦，不管是改别人的还是写自己的

偶是局外人，说这个话可能方便些。勿见怪。错了算我的。

PS:可以利用页面下方的工具条来找 0回复 的文章的 —— 按照 “回复数量” 以 “降序” 排列......

lililiwwwUID: 197572

文章真不错，像范文，请问你多长时间写出来的？改了几遍？

有一两个地方
perspiration
investigation process
还有一个问题，我个人意见是读完之后觉得有点乱，好像思路不是特别明显
:)

枫丹UID: 166492

今天来不及了，只改了一半，明天上午给你贴出来：）

smartyrUID: 169453

谢谢两位！
这篇是较早的时候写的，当时参照别别人的提纲写的，肯定超时了，估计3个小时都不至

枫丹UID: 166492

I fundamentally agree with the assertion that significant advances in study require expertise from a range of fields. Indeed, the long history of human being exploring the principles and rules of nature has proved that incorporation of knowledge and experience from the outsider fields can eventually lead to distinguished achievements. However, it is too arbitrary to claim that outside knowledge and experience are the necessarily indispensable factors for the significant progress.
不错：）
To begin with, nowadays, with the further researching of science and technology, any aspects of human activities is changing with each passing day so that it is impossible for anyone to acquire full of the knowledge of any fields of study because of lacking time and energy. No one can exclude the possibility that one prominent researcher may not have a knowledge of another field which his work doesn’t involve or cannot attract his concern. As the saying that two heads are better than one, spontaneously, cooperation and intercommunication between various fields of study are increasingly needed and become more and more widely. Take for instance, on a sunny autumn morning 2003, China's first manned spaceship ShenZhou-5 was launched which was a remarkable carrier of all fields' cooperation, such as mechanical, material, astronautic, electronic, communicational, computer and even biological knowledge. And ultimately, sucess came.（我 认为你的 这个例子的 论述还是力度不 太够， 似乎可以更详细和透彻一些的 。不过例子真的很不错）

Besides, the novel approaches and perspectives of outside disciplines sometimes bring fresh ideas to our traditional disciplines, which can expand their sphere of researching and application in a much broader scope. To illustrate, a case in point in this respect is that the distinguished Hungary American mathematician, John von Neumann applied mathematic thoughts and ideas to economics, resulting in the born of the famous game thory which had a profound influence upon it. Another example is that when biologist initiated researching the genetics, they referred some of the chemistry knowledge and research methods. This lead to a new diverse and interdisciplinary fields-biochemistry, we all know today, which involves study the origins of life with both biology and chemestry means. In addition, in the increasingly competitive commerical society today, many military tacits and strategy are used in the enterprise management.

Furthermore, it is easy for one to create new theories by referring the comprehensive laws and regulations which precursors of other fields have accumulated for their inheritors for a long period and proved to be true by their skillful experience and practices. Hence, he can obtain a much higher start point and doesn't have to start from the beginning level, and then avoid walking a lot of tough roads to reach his destination. Nanotechnology is one of the remarkable examples. This promising technology is based on traditional mechanical exact science, material and biology science. All of these disciplines have been fully developed for a long time and the experters of these fields have gained a host of experience. It doesn't require the researcher working from zero. Therefore, outside knowledge and experience are of importance for significant advance in any fields.

On the other hand, however, it is seemingly ridiculous to assert that any significant progress in any fields resulting from the employing knowledge and learning from other fields. As we know, （正是问题中，最好不要这么用）any significant progress is inseparable with the laborious work of the researchers in the very field. It is a child of their perspiration and long period endurance during the investigation process.

In the final analysis, it is conceded that the accurate results and fruition outsiders bring will introduce more fresh approaches and provide higher start point for researchers, also will help men to extend their scientific investigation fields and know better of their life. Nevertheless it is just serve as one of the important stimulations that objectively exists in the increasingly interdisciplinary fields of study.
（写的不错的，想狠拍一把，也没有机会，基本上没有什么逻辑错误，例子也不错， 如果发挥的时候也能这样，就很好的。不过似乎在那里见过这个提纲，尽量用自己的提纲，还有这些例子你真写的时候不一定能想到，这个应该注意。）