各位很怕写文章的G友们， 态度要积极点， 保持一个良好的state of mind

fengli408UID: 195844

前几天想放弃作文拉，一看电脑就头痛，都已经发帖子问怎么改时间了，不过但我还坚持过来了，终于写除出了几篇ISSUE， 其实在自己写了一些提纲以后感觉就出来了，而且要积极的取面对，不要很被动，被动是不会有太大提高的，很多时候送一口气我们会轻松万分，加一把劲我们可能会痛苦万分，但这个时候一定告诉自己肯定行的。绝对要有永不言退的精神。再者自己学会给自己培养兴趣。再保持一个良好的state of mind,    我们肯定可以 fulfill  our   dream   下面是今天刚写的一篇ISSUE25，请高手帮忙改一下吧，我前几天才开始好好写的。

issue 25 Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible[/SIZE]
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n our modern society, technology has come to pervade into more than one aspect of our daily lives. With the progress of the society and the increase of living standard, we are confronted with a great many of increasingly perplex and complicated problem, feeling at a loss and out our wits more than often. Under this circumstance, what we are supposed to possess is the ability to simplify the things and problems as possible as we could.

To begin with, it is the development of technology and the progress of human beings that make our earth more and more small, which is considerably regarded as a globe village. For this reason, the relation among people dramatically become anfractuous and reticular in highest measure. E-mail, for examination, frees people from the tremendous affliction in the past to wait for a long time when send a letter. And the emergence of internet proves to be another miracle in human history. Only with a computer can anybody know of the thing both important and trivial all over the world, less about the mobile phone, which considerably makes two friends at a large distance feel as if they were together. Taking into consideration all of this advanced technology, the correlation of people inevitably is showing the complexity of itself.

In addition, such is the tendency that all the world is coming into a unification, from the living to the work, from the technology to the politics. And also with the development of the science, it is more and more difficult for only one person to complete a task or a research. However, facing the variety of problem, the ingenious humans never fail to cease their step leading to progress. Nowadays, not only do people achieve their goal by the assistance of some useful implement but also turn to the predecessors for experience of reference. I want to take the current automobile production as a example. Hardly can other producer manufacture a automobile without a cooperation with others. Maybe a whole car is made by a American company, but it is possible some of its accessories come from Japan or China. Besides, a myriad of labors is also replaced by the robot to complete heavy and complicated task, which can commit fewer mistake and tremendously enhance the effect. When it comes to the lawyer in this society, what invariably happen is that they inquiry the past same cases as a reference. So all of these remarkably suggest that people now willingly tend to simplify the things and the problems.

Furthermore, with the disappearance of some old distinguished versatile person such as Churchill and Vinci, the current science has become special little by little. Seldom can a person be possession of a wide variety of knowledge, as in the past, now what usually happens is scientists engage in merely one or two sphere and when the problems engender that involve different aspects of knowledge, maybe cooperation is the best solution, for it not only can find the answers to the problem at the fast speed but also boost the communication among people. In this point, what the scientists rely on is also the ability to simplify the perplexity of the things.

To sum, I can draw a conclusion that it is a necessary result that the development will give rise the complicacy and the variety, and it is also the gauge that technology is developing and the society and civilization is progressing. As a result, if we can possess a good state of mind and attitude to face these problem, if we can learn the ability to make things more simple, if we can find a better approach to solute the complicated problem. It is a certain that human’s knowledge will be considerably boarded and it is also a tendency that our society and civilization will acquire more progress.

fengli408UID: 195844

怎么每人帮我改啊！
拍一下嘛

鬼谷子UID: 159645

很好的想法
大家共勉
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