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zhoulin00001UID: 189304

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Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
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Education significant for the whole society in that it cultivates the future of the society, everyone knows this. But here there is another problems related with it. that is how to teach the students, whether make them accept everything that is taught or bring them a skepticism to whatever they study. As far as I am concerned, the student should form a skeptical attitude and habit to what they learn, but skepticism is not to deny everything, we must make a balance between them.

Having a skeptical attitude in learning means analysing, examining and scrutinizing ideas and thoughts of others thoroughly. This is a very basic quality for every student to develop. At the times of knowledge explosion, the increase of knowledge is far beyond our image. We can not learn everything we need in the future at school, we must meet lost of new things that we haven learned in school. In this sense, skepticism and thinking is fundamental ability for us to survive in the future.

Moreover, without skepticism, no progress will be made in any academic fields.  With the development of the science and technology, lots of so saying ‘truth’ is not perfect, even wrong. It is the skepticism make us to examine and check the authority' idea and thought, by which we can find the shortage, even errs among them. On the contrary if every student was educated to accept everything was taught, they will not own the habit to suspect the idea they meet, which is significant in every great breakthrough, and the society can progress. In the past everyone believed Aristotle' theory that strength maintain the movement of everything, the heavier object falls faster than the lighter ones, the earth is the center of the universe, and so on. As Aristotle was the most authoritative people in the world and lot of our daily experience also prove his theory, nobody suspected him. Thanks to Newton, Galileo, Copernicus, and other science' skepticism to him and long term of hard work, we know the real principles of these. If nobody suspected Aristotle, we can not imagine what the world has been.

However, skepticism does not mean to veto everything, especially for the beginner like the students. Everyone' time and energy is limited and far from inexhaustible. It is important for the student to grasp hardy basic knowledge, which is significant for them to carry out their further study. Without firm foundation, every suspicion is only a dream. Somebody may reject this opinion that since some basic knowledge is not perfect, even wrong, it is no use to acquire them. Admittedly, some of those are not perfect, but only by the mastery of them, can we find the place that need complete. Newton, Galileo, Copernicus and many other scientists were all erudite, that is why the famous scientists no other than the illiteracies make the great contribution to progress of the whole human being.

In conclusion, on the progress of education, the teacher should help the student to form a skepticism attitude other than the denying to everything they meet and lay solid foundation to make greater contribution to out society.

AutoseaUID: 192045

逻辑上不是太清晰。
首先，开头段的论点不明确， 我认为从后文来看你的论点实际是skeptism是必要的，但不能过度，而不是平衡的问题。
其次，第二段没有清楚地论述skeptical is a very basic quality for every student。你应该针对信息爆炸再多加一点解释来支持你的分论点。
然后，第三段感觉有点乱，重新编排一下，可能会更清楚。例子还可以，要能有新例子更好。
最后，第四段的大意，我理解是，只有先全盘接受然后再加以怀疑。我感觉这好像与你的论点不符。

另外，语言上也问题。
加油啊！

我的意见仅供参考。

我的issue
https://bbs.gter.net/showthre ... 1283757#post1283757

medwinUID: 189909

楼主的语言表达真的不错，值得学习
我的能力还谈不上改，只能提提建议
1.第二段的论点是skeptical attitude is a basic quality，可是后面讲知识爆炸，我们会遇到很多新知识，对skeptical attitude 的重要性的论述太少
2.Newton, Galileo, Copernicus 的顺序最好反一下，按时间顺序吧

希望楼主也帮我看看我得文章，虽然语言上还有差距
https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?threadid=251782

smileofqndUID: 190722

Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
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Education significant for the whole society in that it cultivates the future of the society, everyone knows this. But here there is another problems related with it. that is how to teach the students, whether make them accept everything that is taught or bring them a skepticism to whatever they study. As far as I am concerned, the student should form a skeptical attitude and habit to what they learn, but skepticism is not to deny everything, we must make a balance between them.

Having a skeptical attitude in learning means analysing, examining and scrutinizing ideas and thoughts of others thoroughly. This is a very basic quality for every student to develop. At the times of knowledge explosion, the increase of knowledge is far beyond our image. We can not learn everything we need in the future at school, we must meet lost of new things that we haven learned in school. In this sense, skepticism and thinking is fundamental ability for us to survive in the future.

Moreover, without skepticism, no progress will be made in any academic fields. With the development of the science and technology, lots of so saying ‘truth’ is not perfect, even wrong. It is the skepticism make us to examine and check the authority' idea and thought,, which color=#ff005b] On the contrary if every student was educated to accept everything was taught, they will not own the habit to suspect the idea they meet, which is significant in every great breakthrough, and the society can progress. In the past everyone believed Aristotle' theory that strength maintain the movement of everything, the heavier object falls faster than the lighter ones, the earth is the center of the universe, and so on. As Aristotle was the most authoritative people in the world and lot of our daily experience also prove his theory, nobody suspected him. Thanks to Newton, Galileo, Copernicus, and other science' skepticism to him and long term of hard work, we know the real principles of these. If nobody suspected Aristotle, we can not imagine what the world has been.

However, skepticism does not mean to veto everything, especially for the beginner like the students. Everyone' time and energy is limited and far from inexhaustible. It is important for the student to grasp hardy basic knowledge, which is significant for them to carry out their further study. Without firm foundation, every suspicion is only a dream. Somebody may reject this opinion that since some basic knowledge is not perfect, even wrong, it is no use to acquire them. Admittedly, some of those are not perfect, but only by the mastery of them, can we find the place that need complete. Newton, Galileo, Copernicus and many other scientists were all erudite, that is why the famous scientists no other than the illiteracies make the great contribution to progress of the whole human being.

In conclusion, on the progress of education, the teacher should help the student to form a skepticism attitude other than the denying to everything they meet and lay solid foundation to make greater contribution to out society.

alex_hustUID: 197601

Education significant(significance) for the whole society (is)in that it cultivates the future of the society, everyone knows this. But here there is another problems (problem)related with it. that is how to teach the students, whether make them accept everything that is taught or bring them a skepticism to whatever they study. As far as I am concerned, the student should form a skeptical attitude and habit to what they learn, but skepticism is not to deny everything, we must make a balance between them.

Having a skeptical attitude in learning means analysing(analyzing), examining and scrutinizing ideas and thoughts of others thoroughly. This is a very basic quality for every student to develop. At the times of knowledge explosion, the increase of knowledge is far beyond our image. We can not learn everything we need in the future at school, we must meet lost of new things that we haven learned in school. In this sense, skepticism and thinking is fundamental ability for us to survive in the future.

Moreover, without skepticism, no progress will be made in any academic fields. With the development of the science and technology, lots of so saying ‘truth’ is not perfect, even wrong. It is the skepticism (that) make us to examine and check the authority' idea and thought, by which we can find the shortage, even errs among them. On the contrary if every student was (is) educated to accept everything was taught, they will not own the habit to suspect the idea they meet, which is significant in every great breakthrough, and the society can(not) progress. In the past everyone believed Aristotle' theory that strength maintain the movement of everything, the heavier object falls faster than the lighter ones, the earth is the center of the universe, and so on. （此处明确说明这些现象或者理论是不正确的可能比较好一些）As Aristotle was the most authoritative people in the world and lot(s) of our daily experience also prove his theory, nobody suspected him. Thanks to Newton, Galileo, Copernicus, and other science' skepticism to him and long term of hard work, we know the real principles of these. If nobody suspected Aristotle, we can not imagine what the world has been(would be).

However, skepticism does not mean to veto everything, especially for the beginner like the students. （此处先说怀疑的态度需要建立在坚实的基础知识上，建立在理性的分析上，后面的学生好好学习的那段才好理解）Everyone' time and energy is limited and far from inexhaustible. It is important for the student to grasp hardy basic knowledge, which is significant for them to carry out their further study. Without firm foundation, every suspicion is only a dream. Somebody may reject this opinion that since some basic knowledge is not perfect, even wrong, it is no use to acquire them. Admittedly, some of those are not perfect, but only by the mastery of them, can we find the place that need complete. Newton, Galileo, Copernicus and many other scientists were all erudite, that is why the famous scientists no(去掉) other than the illiteracies make the great contribution to progress of the whole human being.（因果关系不清，牛顿是博学的不是原因吧）

In conclusion, on the progress of education, the teacher should help the student to form a skepticism attitude other than the denying to everything they meet and lay solid foundation to make greater contribution to out society.

主题句很有条例，层次清晰
第三段的表述缺少逻辑性，呵呵
写的很不错啊，言语用的很好。admire，限时有500＋，很强啊

alex_hustUID: 197601

https://bbs.gter.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=251919
能帮我看看嘛？ 谢谢

我写了第三篇了，但是还是没有什么感觉，限时只能到400左右
很郁闷，而且句子的多样性都还不够，例子积攒的也不多
3.30号考，argument还没有复习，紧张啊 ：（