ISSUE132 限时下最满意的一篇，欢迎拍砖

hushenminUID: 189268

超时了10分钟，写了550字。没办法老是要超时，还要多加练习。 :(
做了一次修改，主要是改了开头一段，现在很满意。

ISSUE：
132"The university community consists of three different worlds-the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences."
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essay：
As the author of the statement indicate, it is commonly believed that today knowledge is divided into many seemly separate parts. The search in each parts is becoming deeper and deeper, nevertheless, the interaction among them is becoming less and less. In universities, which are to create knowledge and pass it on, students are constricted in certain majors. The students major in science know little about the humanities, and vice versa . However, if you make an investigate carefully, you will find that meaningful interaction among disciplines can be easily found in the progress of our society. With the splitting up of knowledge, some new fields of study emerge, which combine different knowledge. The most important is that human knowledge is the all and the one, and those classification is just man-made.

Although the different fields of study, mainly the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences, have their own special assumptions and habits of thinking, they really interact each other. A strong argument of my view can be found in the modern social sciences. As we all known, the modern social sciences are base on statistics which is an important branch of mathematics, and mathematics is the diamond on the crown of science. Before the application of statistics, social sciences can only make some records just as we have seen in those history records. The demography, for example, can only tell how much is the population before. However, with the help of statistics, now it can also analyze the structure of the population and do some prediction of the progress. Meanwhile, the development of modern social sciences also forces the statistics to advance so that it can provide more convenient and more effective tools.

The interaction among disciplines also exists between the sciences and the humanities. But this kind of interaction may be less obvious. Many great scientists in physics have deep understanding of art, and they all agreed that their knowledge in humanities often gave them inspirations and affect their attitude towards the objective world.  Einstein, besides his well known work of "Relatives", is also an amateur musician. A picture in which Einstein played his violin is very famous because it clearly showed the other side of this great scientist. Yang Zhengning, a Noble Prize winner in physics, appreciate traditional Chinese literature well, and he can recite the whole "Mencius".

The there fields of knowledge is just a man-made classification. They all mixed together in the birth of human knowledge. In ancient Greece, those great thinkers talked about knowledge and wisdom but not physics or literature. Vinci, a famous Italian artist, is another good example. He was well known by his great paintings, but his talent in science is also outstanding. His manuscript of helicopter design is very similar to the real one today. The purpose of the classification of knowledge is for the deep search in each field, but it dose not mean that we should spilt them apart purposely. In front of a practical problem, we can get different solutions with different knowledge. Each solution alone is not complete and correct. The integration of these solutions makes the real answer to the problem. Moreover, the lack of knowing in other fields of study and the short sight in the full picture of human knowledge can badly withdraw our development in our own majors.

In sum, the meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences exists everywhere and we should encourage this kind of interaction.

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issue132  
"The university community consists of three different worlds-the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences.
As the author of the statement indicate, it is commonly believed that today knowledge is divided into many seemly separate parts. The search in each parts is becoming deeper and deeper, nevertheless, the interaction among them is becoming less and less. In universities, which [are?] to create knowledge and pass it on, students are constricted in certain majors. The students major in science know little about the humanities, and vice versa . However, if you make an investigate[investigation] carefully, you will find that meaningful interaction among disciplines can be easily found in the progress of our society. With the splitting up of knowledge, some new fields of study emerge, which combine different knowledge. The most important [one] is that human knowledge is [the all and the one][give me some explanation ok?], and those classification is just man-made.

Although the different fields of study, mainly the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences, have their own special assumptions and habits of thinking, they really interact each other. A strong argument of my view can be found in the modern social sciences. As we all known, the modern social sciences are base[based] on statistics which is an important branch of mathematics, and mathematics is the diamond on the crown of science. Before the application of statistics, social sciences can only make some records just as we have seen in those history records. The demography, for example, can only tell how much [is]去掉 the population [was] [before]. However, with the help of statistics, now it can also analyze the structure of the population and do some prediction of the progress. Meanwhile, the development of modern social sciences also forces the statistics to advance so that it can provide more convenient and more [effective] tools.

The interaction among disciplines also exists between the sciences and the humanities. But this kind of interaction may be less obvious. Many great scientists in physics have deep[ly] understanding of art, and they all agreed that their knowledge in humanities often gave them inspirations and affect their attitude towards the objective world. Einstein, besides his well known work of "Relatives", is also an amateur musician. A picture in which Einstein played his violin is very famous because it clearly showed the other side of this great scientist. Yang Zhengning, a Noble Prize winner in physics, appreciate traditional Chinese literature well, and he can recite the whole "Mencius".

The [there] fields of knowledge is just a man-made classification. They all mixed together in the birth of human knowledge. In ancient Greece, those great thinkers talked about knowledge and wisdom but not physics or literature. Vinci, a famous Italian artist, is another good example. He was well known by his great paintings, but his talent in science is also outstanding. His manuscript of helicopter design is very similar to the real one today. The purpose of the classification of knowledge is for the deep search in each field, but it dose not mean that we should spilt them apart purposely. In front of a practical problem, we can get different solutions with different knowledge. Each solution alone is not complete and correct. The integration of these solutions makes the real answer to the problem. Moreover, the lack of knowing in other fields of study and the short sight in the full picture of human knowledge can badly withdraw our development in our own majors.

In sum, the meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences exists everywhere and we should encourage this kind of interaction.
【主体段反复阐述三者之间的相通，是否可以让步一下，说明三者的区别，比如处理详细问题的时候，要看它属于那一类科学，然后再相应的解决】

ponponUID: 181304

issue132  
"The university community consists of three different worlds-the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences. Because each world operates on its own assumptions and has its own special habits of thinking, rarely is there meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences.
As the author of the statement indicates, it is commonly believed that today knowledge is divided into many seemly separate parts. The search in each parts is becoming deeper and deeper, nevertheless, the interaction among them is becoming less and less. In universities, which are? to create knowledge and pass it on, students are constricted in certain majors. The students major in science know little about the humanities, and vice versa . However, if you make an investigateinvestigation carefully, you will find that meaningful interaction among disciplines can be easily found in the progress of our society. With the splitting up of knowledge, some new fields of study emerge, which combine different knowledge. The most important one is that human knowledge is the all and the onegive me some explanation ok?, and those classification is just man-made.

Although the different fields of study, mainly the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences, have their own special assumptions and habits of thinking, they really interact each other. A strong argument of my view can be found in the modern social sciences. As we all known, the modern social sciences are basebased on statistics which is an important branch of mathematics, and mathematics is the diamond on the crown of science. Before the application of statistics, social sciences can only make some records just as we have seen in those history records. The demography, for example, can only tell how much is去掉 the population was before. However, with the help of statistics, now it can also analyze the structure of the population and do some prediction of the progress. Meanwhile, the development of modern social sciences also forces the statistics to advance so that it can provide more convenient and more effective tools.

The interaction among disciplines also exists between the sciences and the humanities. But this kind of interaction may be less obvious. Many great scientists in physics have deeply understanding of art, and they all agreed that their knowledge in humanities often gave them inspirations and affect their attitude towards the objective world. Einstein, besides his well known work of "Relatives", is also an amateur musician. A picture in which Einstein played his violin is very famous because it clearly showed the other side of this great scientist. Yang Zhengning, a Noble Prize winner in physics, appreciate traditional Chinese literature well, and he can recite the whole "Mencius".

The there fields of knowledge is just a man-made classification. They all mixed together in the birth of human knowledge. In ancient Greece, those great thinkers talked about knowledge and wisdom but not physics or literature. Vinci, a famous Italian artist, is another good example. He was well known by his great paintings, but his talent in science is also outstanding. His manuscript of helicopter design is very similar to the real one today. The purpose of the classification of knowledge is for the deep search in each field, but it dose not mean that we should spilt them apart purposely. In front of a practical problem, we can get different solutions with different knowledge. Each solution alone is not complete and correct. The integration of these solutions makes the real answer to the problem. Moreover, the lack of knowing in other fields of study and the short sight in the full picture of human knowledge can badly withdraw our development in our own majors.

In sum, the meaningful interaction among the sciences, the humanities, and the social sciences exists everywhere and we should encourage this kind of interaction.
【主体段反复阐述三者之间的相通，是否可以让步一下，说明三者的区别，比如处理详细问题的时候，要看它属于那一类科学，然后再相应的解决】

hushenminUID: 189268

同意楼上的意见，同时谢谢帮我改作文。因为这个限时写的，写的时候就顾不上这么多了，呵呵。可还是超时了。的确要加上让步的内容，否则无法体现对题目complexity的理解。这就改好。