ISSUE130 同主题5，响应号召，不怕献丑

gehaifengUID: 189090

只写了两点
1，  socialization 对于society的意义
2,      当前我们有能力教育孩子适应socialization


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How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
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When come to the issue of how socialization influence the society and how to make our effort to bring up and teach children to be adapted to the modern world, there is no criteria and no one can give a definite answer.  However, I insist that as the socialization influence of the development of the society greatly, educators among all over the world have come to realize how to bring up their young, in order to better promote the society.

To begin which,  socialization plays a more and more critical role in the development of current world. History of human society itself is the advancement of socialization. From the ancient primitive world to the industrial revolution, people have become more and more socialized. Cooperation of workers took the place of individuals who performed almost all work in the land; Relationship in the factory between the employees and employers took place of the relationship between the family which play a chief role in their life. With the  advent of the new century and information technology era, many companies have become worldwide in which no single worker or team can fulfill the whole work, cooperation among companies, even among the should world is frequently exist. Take International Space Station for example,  which is a masterpiece of the human intelligence, is also a wonderful achievement of smoothly cooperation among scientists and governments all over the world, and that is the benefit of socialization to the improvement of the society. It is clear that that today the world is becoming more and more socialized, in which interdependence rather than independence is called for the  effective and efficient work.   

Fortunately, we have relied the critical role of the socialization toward the advancement of society and the necessary to taught children about it.  Most education leaders in the  developed and developing countries came to admitted that the goal of education for the young is to increase morality such as honesty and persistence and the ability of interdependence as well as  independence, rather than merely insert the knowledge into the student's brain. For instance, there are more and more summer vacations and other clubs which are sponsored to train the children's ability to be cooperated with others when completing a task, to be persistence when encounter difficulties, and to be competitive with other teams in order for a final reward. This is an efficient approach to taught the young to be adapted to the socialized world.

In sum, the development of the society rely on  chiefly on socialization , and the many educator have come to know the necessary to introduce it into their education. With the insightful investigate the what kind of persons are need in a society, it is possible to taught the child them, can compel the society to improve.

MadheroUID: 125272

------题目------
How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
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When come to the issue of how socialization influence the society and how to make our effort to bring up and teach children to be adapted to the modern world, there is no criteria and no one can give a definite answer. However, I insist that as the socialization influence of去掉of the development of the society greatly, educators among去掉among all over the world have come to realize how to bring up their young, in order to better promote the society.

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Fortunately, we have reliedrealize? the critical role of the socialization toward the advancement of society and the necessary to taught children about it. Most education leaders in the developed and developing countries came to admitted that the goal of education for the young is to increase morality such as honesty and persistence and the ability of interdependence as well as independence, rather than merely insert the knowledge into the student's brain. For instance, there are more and more更多个暑假？ summer vacations and other clubs which are sponsored to train the children's ability to be cooperated with others when completing a task, to be persistence when encounter difficulties, and to be competitive with other teams in order for a final reward. This is an efficient approach to taught the young to be adapted to the socialized world.

In sum, the development of the society rely on去掉这个on chiefly on socialization , and the many educatoreducators have come to know the necessarynecessity to introduce it into their education. With the insightful investigate the what? kind of persons are need in a society, it is possible to taught the child them, can compel强迫？impel吧 the society to improve.

gehaifengUID: 189090

谢谢Madhero的批改。
我的打字速度和单词的拼写能力都有问题。 多谢Madhero的指出

sailing_yfUID: 150982

------题目------
How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
------正文------
When come to the issue of how socialization influence the society and how to make our effort to bring up and teach children to be adapted to the modern world, there is no criteria and no one can give a definite answer. However, I insist that as the socialization influence of去掉of the development of the society greatly, educators among去掉amongof all over the world have come to realize how to bring up their young, in order to better promote the society.

To begin whichwith?, socialization plays a more and more criticalcrucial? role in the development of current world. History of human society itself is the advancement of socialization. From the ancient primitive world to the industrial revolution, people have become more and more socialized. Cooperation of workers took the place of individuals who performed almost all work in the land; Relationship in the factory between the employees and employers took place这个took place什么意思？ of the relationship between the family which play a chief role in their life. WithIn the era吧。 the advent of the new century and information technology era, many companies have become worldwide in which no single worker or team can fulfill the whole work, cooperation among companies, even among the should world不明白什么叫should world is frequently exist. Take International Space Station for example, which is a masterpiece of the human intelligence, is also a wonderful achievement of smoothly cooperation among scientists and governments all over the world, and that is the benefit of socialization to the improvement of the society. It is clear that that today the world is becoming more and more socialized, in which interdependence rather than independence is called for the effective and efficient work. socialize的普遍性和重要性

Fortunately, we have reliedrealize? the criticalpositive role of the socialization toward the advancement of society and the necessary to taught children about it. Most education leaders in the developed and developing countries came to admitted that the goal of education for the young is to increase morality such as honesty and persistence and the ability of interdependence as well as independence, rather than merely insert the knowledge into the student's brain. For instance, there are more and more更多个暑假？ summer vacationsvocation好像表示职业和宗教仪式期间的休息，不直接表示假期 and other clubs which are sponsored to train the children's ability to be cooperated with others when completing a task, to be persistence when encounter difficulties, and to be competitive with other teams in order for a final reward. This is an efficient approach to taught the young to be adapted to the socialized world.

In sum, the development of the society rely on去掉这个on chiefly on socialization , and the many educatoreducators have come to know the necessarynecessity to introduce it into their education. With the insightful investigate the what? kind of persons are need in a society, it is possible to taught the child them, can compel强迫？impel吧 the society to improve.