issue130 限时失败,又是这样的文章 快疯了!

mondiaUID: 193825

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130"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
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Well educated and socialized children will bring about a better future for our society, or for their society, they will be the real host someday after all. However, we must admit that we have not learned a good way to raise our children at all.

Admittedly, we have found some helpful way to improve children's knowledge and some basic living skills. Thanks to our education, from generation to generation, our children are given more and more answers of the mystery world. At an early age, they enjoy the interesting story of Beethoven, and Hawkings on the bed, see the picture of animals Delwen even seen, and read the "prince" word by word with the lovely fox.  Always our children's ability of learning new things surprises us, they try to use a computer, try to cook a breakfast by microwave oven. Day by day, they get familiar with the machine world. In this way, they learn the greatness of science and civilization by heart, in their own way, little by little. In their little heart, there ought to be a larger world with more incogitable things.

However, we have overlooked their little eyes seeing their parents, their ears hearing their teachers, their noise smelling the fragrant flowers and pungent smoke of gunpowder out the door. We may say smoothly: action is the best education, we may do bumpily: educate children by our great  action. We pay so much attention in competition in the office, in the party, even at home. Fewer and fewer children still believe the fairy tale about cooperation will exist in the world. Using their great ability of imitation, they begin to act what called envy, what named individualism. In their dictionary, the pages of "trust" and "comity" are ripped off.

We can answer artful, when they asked childishly: "papa, why are there so many wars, why are there so many hoboes, where it the god then? ", "because our god was still tacked on the cross." Leaving them confused alone, have we ever tried admitting our faults in the front of a child? We never tell them for their getting a better grade, we hid their kitten in the garage; we never tell them why they will heard the hard-spelling word of "annihilation"; we never tell them when we began to use the little metal to get so-called future.

Education of love is the best education. The Italian author gave such advice in his book. Nowadays, found out the old book from our book shelves, we should sit down quietly and have a read again. In that world, you may find a different way of raising a child full of goodness, tolerance and great ideal. Then you may find some answer to socialize our children and educate them in that time, in that world.

Although education of love maybe an idealization, and it is not the whole of the education and socialization indeed, maybe that is what we are wanting but searching for, for our children, and for our better future.

千翼UID: 199721

　Well educated and socialized children will bring about a better future for our society, or for their society, they will be the real host someday after all. However, we must admit that we have not learned a good way to raise our children at all.

Admittedly, we have found some helpful way[ways.] to improve children's knowledge and some basic living skills. Thanks to our education, from generation to generation, our children are given more and more answers of the mystery world. At an early age, they enjoy the interesting story of Beethoven, and Hawkings on the bed, see the picture of animals Delwen even seen, and read the "prince" word by word with the lovely fox. Always our children's ability of learning new things surprises us, they try to use a computer, try to cook a breakfast by microwave oven. Day by day, they get familiar with the machine world. In this way, they learn the greatness of science and civilization by heart, in their own way, little by little. In their little heart, there ought to be a larger world with more incogitable things.

However, we have overlooked their little eyes seeing their parents, their ears hearing their teachers, their noise smelling the fragrant flowers and pungent smoke of gunpowder out the door. We may say smoothly: action is the best education, we may do bumpily: educate[educating.] children by our great action. We pay so much attention in competition in the office, in the party, even at home. [与前一句用while连接更好吧]Fewer and fewer children still believe the fairy tale about cooperation will[去掉will.] exist in the world. Using[by.] their great ability of imitation, they begin to act[understand.] what [is.]called envy, what [is.]named individualism. In their dictionary, the pages of "trust" and "comity" are ripped off.

We can answer artful, when they asked childishly: "papa, why are there so many wars, why are there so many hoboes, where [is.]it the god then? ", "because our god was still tacked on the cross." Leaving them confused alone, have we ever tried admitting our faults in the front of a child? We never tell them for their getting a better grade, we hid their kitten in the garage; we never tell them why they will heard the hard-spelling word of "annihilation"; we never tell them when we began to use the little metal to get so-called future.

Education of love is the best education. The Italian author gave such advice in his book. Nowadays, found[finding.] out the old book from our book shelves, we should sit down quietly and have a read again. In that world, you may find a different way of raising a child full of goodness, tolerance and great ideal. Then you may find some answer[answers.] to socialize our children and educate them in that time, in that world.

Although education of love maybe[不是动词] an idealization, and it is not the whole of the education and socialization indeed, maybe that is what we are wanting but[and.] searching for, for our children, and for our better future.
[能力有限，只能改成这样了，呵呵。感觉用词有些重复，比如：great，find，找词提替换一下.]

mondiaUID: 193825

多谢了
希望不要产生毒害.. :(

mondiaUID: 193825

有点样子了,但是改出来的..

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Well educated and socialized children will bring about a better future for our society, or for their society more felicitously, they will be the host someday we exit the door. However, we must admit that we have not learned a good way to raise our children at all. Therefore, they may be a not employable host some way.

Indeed, we have offered some helpful way to improve children's knowledge and some basic living skills. Thanks to our education, from generation to generation, our children are given more and more answers of the mystery world. At an early age, they have the opportunity to enjoy the interesting stories about Beethoven, and Hawkings on the bed, to see the pictures of animals Darwin even saw in those islands, and to read the "little prince" word by word with the lovely fox. Always our children's ability of learning new things surprises us, they try to use a computer for game and for communication, try to cook a breakfast by microwave oven when parents are still sleeping. Day by day, they get familiar with the machine world. In this way, they learn the greatness of science and civilization by heart, in their own way, little by little. In their puerile hearts, there ought to be a larger world with more incogitable things, which we can never image in our childhood.

However, we have overlooked their little eyes seeing their parents, their ears hearing their teachers, their noise smelling the fragrant flowers and pungent smoke of gunpowder out the door. Saying smoothly: behavior is the best education, we do bumpily: educate our children by great action. We pay so much attention in competition in the office, in the party, even at home. Day by day, fewer and fewer children still believe the fairy tale about cooperation will exist in the world. Using their great ability of imitation, they begin to act what called envy, what named individualism. In their dictionary, the pages of "trust" and "comity" are ripped off.

Maybe, we can answer artful, when they asked childishly: "papa, why are there so many wars, why are there so many hoboes? Where it the god then? ", "because our god was still tacked on the cross." Leaving them confused alone, have we ever tried admitting our faults in the front of a pair of cherubic eyes? We never tell them for their getting a better grade, we hid their kitten in the garage; we never tell them why they will heard the hard-spelling word of "annihilation"; we never tell them when we began to use the little metal to get so-called future. We are not good at admitting our faults, especially to our children, thinking they are too young to know the real-life society, which is not so perfect at all. When we come to the problem again someday, our children have got their colored glasses already, hard to change in their rest life.

What is the best education then? Education of love may be the one. The Italian author gave such advice in his book. Nowadays, found out the old book from our book shelves, we should sit down quietly and have another read. In that world, we can find a different way of raising a child full of goodness, tolerance and great ideal. Then you may find another answer to socialize our children and educate them. Several months ago, Yuanjie Zheng, the greatest writer of fairy tale in China, published his own textbooks for children, including books about laws, literature, philosophy etc. Believing the grade-oriented education existed in China not good for a better future of children, he wrote these books for about ten years, raising his son in family in his own way, the way of fairy tale. In his world, children is permitted to question Plato, to ask what is abortion, and to oppugn the law is the justice.

Admittedly, education of love maybe an idealization and the way of fairy tale should not become a socialized way, they have shed light on our education and socialization for children. After all, based on the existed limitation, we have to forecast dark cloudies in the future sky of our society.