ISSUE136 没选择的情况少之又少 限时已修改 拍必回

深谷幽兰UID: 196550

136,The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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For everyone, life is like a river, which is full of branches. At each branches, one should make a choice, consequently, he reaches the end of himself. Therefore, I insist that everyone chooses the way of his life by his own.

To begin with, in a person's life, there exists a great deal of choice. For example, in the aspect of daily life, one can choose at what time he gets up, which company he wants to take a job, when he likes to have a date, what kinds of restaurants he would like to have a try and when buying a suit, he could choose which brand is his favorite; In the field of study, one can decide which school he wants to join, what major he likes to devote and whether he is desire for a degree for master or PH.D; In the realm of politics, one enjoys the right to vote for the politician who he trusts most and he also has the right to choose which party he want to take part in. In a word, there is a lot of choice in one's life.

Although it is clear that one has a great deal of choice in his life, usually, people are likely to due their fault or inability to absence of choice, which in essence should ascribe to the laziness and the unwillingness to take the responsibility or to face the results. For instance, many parents are likely to tell their children that they have not fulfilled their dream in that they have no choice but to take the duty to earn money to support the family and to raise the children, which sounds reasonable. However, it is known to all that many famous persons throughout the world lived a hard life when they were alive, such as the well-known abstract painter--Van Gogh, the father of the Relative Theory--Einstein and the Chinese author of the eminent book A Dream of the Red Mansions. All of them accomplished great success notwithstanding the poverty of their life. Thus, it is not the external ingredients but the absence of nerve and stamina and the laziness of the subject that led to the plain of their life. There are also some officers who are found out to be corrupted attributed their fault to be of no choice, which is merely their excuse to avoid the obligation.

Admittedly, there is no denying that in certain cases, people have no choice to make a decision. For instance, one has no choice about his parents, his nationality, the living level of his family, and so on. However, one has the choice to transform some of them, such as through hard work, one could live a better life.

To sum up, life is alternative, which provides people much possibility; however, life is also of no choice in that one should take the responsibility for his choice.

山涧风笛UID: 196557

up一下，
加油！

山涧风笛UID: 196557

For everyone, life is like a river 用road 与下文的way对应, which is full of branches. At each branches, one should make a choice, consequently, he reaches the end of himself. Therefore, I insist that everyone chooses the way of his life by his own.

To begin with, in a person's life, there exists a great deal of choice. For example, in the aspect of daily life, one can choose at what time he gets up, which company he wants to take a job, when he likes to have a date, what kinds of restaurants he would like to have a try and when buying a suit, he could choose which brand is his favorite; In the field of study, one can decide which school he wants to join, what major he likes to devote and whether he is desire for a degree for master or PH.D; In the realm of politics, one enjoys the right to vote for the politician who he trusts most and he also has the right to choose which party he want to take part in. In a word, there is a lot of choice in one's life 换个词吧  existence.

Although it is clear that one has a great deal of 再换一个词a wide choice in his life, usually, people are likely to due their fault or inability to absence of choice, which in essence should ascribe to the laziness and the unwillingness to take the responsibility or to face the results. For instance, many parents are likely to tell their children that they have not fulfilled their dream in that they have no choice but to take the duty to earn money to support the family and to raise the children, which sounds reasonable. However, it is known to all that many famous persons throughout the world lived a hard life when they were alive, such as the well-known abstract painter--Van Gogh, the father of the Relative Theory--Einstein and the Chinese author of the eminent book A Dream of the Red Mansions. All of them accomplished great success notwithstanding the poverty of their life. Thus, it is not the external ingredients but the absence of nerve and stamina and the laziness of the subject that led to the plain of their life. There are also some officers who are found out to be corrupted attributed their fault to be of no choice, which is merely their excuse to avoid the obligation.

Admittedly, there is no denying that in certain cases, people have no choice to make a decision. For instance, one has no choice about his parents, his nationality, the living level of his family, and so on. However, one has the choice to transform some of them, such as through hard work, one could live a better life.

To sum up, life is alternative, which provides people much possibility  可以用复数吧? tremendous possibilities; however, life is also of no choice in that one should take the responsibility for his choice.

用词还要再丰富些.加油!!!

smartyrUID: 169453

up一个!

anthraxUID: 176473

For everyone, life is like a river, which is full of branches. At each branches, one should make a choice, consequently, he (为什么要用he?考虑一下用it，比喻也有点牵强)reaches the end of himself. Therefore, I insist that everyone chooses the way of his life by his own.

To begin with, in a person's life, there exists a great deal of choice. For example, in the aspect of daily life, one can choose at what time he gets up, which company he wants to take a job, when he likes to have a date, what kinds of restaurants he would like to have a try and when buying a suit, he could choose which brand is his favorite; In the field of study, one can decide which school he wants to join, what major he likes to devote and whether he is desire for a degree for master or PH.D; In the realm of politics, one enjoys the right to vote for the politician who he trusts most and he also has the right to choose which party he want to take part in. In a word, there is a lot of choice in one's life. (欠缺点题，人都是有自由意志的，加上这点会更好。)

Although it is clear that one has a great deal of choice in his life, usually, people are likely to due(attribute归因于) their fault or inability to absence of choice, which in essence should ascribe to the laziness and the unwillingness to take the responsibility or to face the results. For instance, many parents are likely to tell their children that they have not fulfilled their dream in that they have no choice but to take the duty to earn money to support the family and to raise the children, which sounds reasonable. However, it is known to all that many famous persons throughout the world lived a hard life when they were alive, such as the well-known abstract painter--Van Gogh, the father of the Relative Theory--Einstein and the Chinese author of the eminent book A Dream of the Red Mansions. All of them accomplished great success notwithstanding the poverty of their life. Thus, it is not the external ingredients but the absence of nerve and stamina and the laziness of the subject that led to the plain of their life. There are also some officers who are found out to be corrupted attributed their fault to be of no choice, which is merely their excuse to avoid the obligation.(第一个家长的例子举的不好，有点牵强)

Admittedly, there is no denying that in certain cases, people have no choice to make a decision. For instance, one has no choice about his parents, his nationality, the living level of his family, and so on. However, one has the choice to transform some of them, such as through hard work, one could live a better life.(一个人可以选择改变他的身生父母？应该分成几大类，有些可以改变有些不行)

To sum up, life is alternative(想说生活就是选择吗？那就说life is a process of making choices), which provides people much possibility; however, life is also of no choice in that one should take the responsibility for his choice.(比较新颖的一句，可是前面的论证台晦涩了让人感觉不到它的存在。)

现象列举的比较多。主要是说表面上看起来很多人都有很多选择，没有选择是一种推托责任的表现，有时候人们看似没选择也可以通过努力改变。但是没有上升到一个高度，应该细致论证：自由意志，托托责任说没选择，看似没选择而能改变。尤其第三段，感觉有点混乱，但是基础不错，加油！！

neverflyUID: 166610

136,The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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For everyone, life is like a river, which is full of branches. At each branchess去掉, one should make a choice, consequently好像consequently不是连词而是副词。不太确定,sorry, he reaches the end of himselfend of himself好像比较奇怪. Therefore, I insist that everyone chooses 是不是insist that …should….?这样的话chooses应该去掉s the way of his life by his own.

To begin with, in a person's life, there exists a great deal of choice是不是用复数？. For example, in the aspect of daily life, one can choose at what time he gets up, which company he wants to take a job, when he likes to have a date, what kinds of restaurants he would like to have a trytry a restaurant搭配不太好 and when buying a suit这里when buying a suit和前面的when he likes to.., what kinds of …不能产生对比，不太流畅, he could choose which brand is his favorite; In the field of study, one can decide which school he wants to join, what major he likes to devote and whether he is desire for a degree for master or PH.D; In the realm of politicsin the aspect of , in the field of, in the realm of… so good expression!, one enjoys the right to vote for the politician who he trusts most and he also has the right to choose which party he want to take part in. In a word, there is a lot of choice in one's life. 句式多变，wonderful

Although it is clear that one has a great deal of choice in his life, usually, people are likely to duedue是副词，应该用ascribe把 their fault or inability to absence of choice, which in essence should ascribe to the laziness and the unwillingness to take the responsibility or to face the resultswhich从句和前面的their fault or inability有点重复. For instance, many parents are likely to tell their children that they have not fulfilled their dream in that they have no choice but to take the duty to earn money to support the family and to raise the children, which sounds reasonable. However, it is known to all that many famous persons throughout the world lived a hard life when they were alive, such as the well-known abstract painter--Van Gogh, the father of the Relative Theory--Einstein and the Chinese author 前两个都加上名字了，为什么不加曹雪芹的.:-)of the eminent book A Dream of the Red Mansions. All of them accomplished great success notwithstanding the poverty of their life. Thus, it is not the external ingredients but the absence of nerve and stamina great expression and the laziness of the subject that led to the plain of their life. There are also some officers who are found out to be corrupted attributed their fault to be of no choice, which is merely their excuse to avoid the obligation.感觉最后一个例子没展开

Admittedly, there is no denying that in certain cases, people have no choice to make a decision. For instance, one has no choice about his parents, his nationality, the living level of his family, and so on. However, one has the choice to transform some of them, such as through hard work, one could live a better life. however后面对怎么transform没展开，最好加一个例子，比如Einstein, Van Gogh等等

To sum up, life is alternative, which provides people much possibility; however, life is also of no choice in that one should take the responsibility for his choice.结尾新颖，不过润色一下更好

llamasUID: 200435

For everyone, life is like a river, which is full of branches. At each branchesbranch, one should make a choice, consequently, heor she reaches the end of himself. Therefore, I insist that everyone chooses the way of his life by his own.

To begin with, in a person's life, there exists a great deal of choice. For example, in the aspect of daily life, one can choose at what time he gets up, which company he wants to take a job, when he likes to have a date, what kinds of restaurants he would like to have a try and when buying a suit, he could choose which brand is his favorite; In the field of study, one can decide which school he wants to join, what major he likes to devote and whether he is desire for a degree for master or PH.D; In the realm of politics, one enjoys the right to vote for the politician who he trusts most and he also has the right to choose which party he wantwants to take part in. In a word, there is a lot of choice in one's life.

Although it is clear that one has a great deal of choice in his life, usually, people are likely to due their fault or inability to absence of choicedue to可以这么用吗, which in essence should ascribe to the laziness and the unwillingness to take the responsibility or to face the results. For instance, many parents are likely to没必要用are likely to tell their children that they have not fulfilled their dream in that they have no choice but to take the duty to earn money to support the family and to raise the children, which sounds reasonable这句话不是很明白啊，不如分开写. However, it is known to all that many famous persons throughout the world lived a hard life when they were alive, such as the well-known abstract painter--Van Gogh, the father of the Relative Theory--Einstein and the Chinese author of the eminent book A Dream of the Red Mansions应该有名字才跟前面的结构一致. All of them accomplished great success notwithstanding the poverty of their life. Thus, it is not the external ingredients but the absence of nerve and stamina and the laziness of the subject that led to the plain of their life. There are also some officers who are found out to be corrupted attributed their fault to be of no choice, which is merely their excuse to avoid the obligation.我觉得貌似应该先说很多人把没有选择归因于blabla……然后再说其实很多例子……能证明并不是这样的，这样的逻辑好像更清楚一些：P我的愚见

Admittedly, there is no denying that in certain cases, people have no choice to make a decision. For instance, one has no choice about his parents, his nationality, the living level of e a better life.应该展开一些

To sum up, life is alternative, which provides people much possibility; however, life is also of no choice in that one should take the responsibility for his choice.
For everyone, life is like a river, which is full of branches. At each branchesbranch, one should make a choice, consequently, heor she reaches the end of himself. Therefore, I insist that everyone chooses the way of his life by his own.