ISSUE26 是否保留旧的建筑 快了！求拍必回

深谷幽兰UID: 196550

26. Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.
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As the time passing by, a large number of old buildings tend to be under the controversy discussion whether they should be remained or pulled down for the modern purposes. In my point of view, I basically agree with the author's opinion that the space taken by the old buildings should be left for the contemporary needs.

To begin with, in order to keep preservation of the past, there is also some other accesses other than remaining the huge old buildings. Notwithstanding that some old buildings represent the valuable record of the past of the society, which should not be forgotten by the nations, however, with the rapid progress of the technology, many instruments and means could be used to memorize the past, such as the books, records, photographs and video discs. All of them could be used as the reminder for the significance of the past. Moreover, this kinds of record have a larger popular in that people around the world are able to get familiar with these human history without going to the original place where these old buildings located. Thus, these methods not only act as the reminder of the memorial moment of the past but also have the advantage to stretch out its popular.

In addition, the space of the earth is so limited that people should make the best use of it. It is known to all that with the explosion of the population, the resource of the earth is becoming less and less, including the resource of land. The space for people to live is getting smaller and smaller, which results the height of apartment higher and higher. In the mainly cities, people can see not many trees and grass but a lot of skyscrapers; in the rural district, a large area of arable land gives room to buildings. Under this situation, it is necessary to utilize every square of area. Therefore, some of the old buildings are better to leave room to solve the short of the land resource. Such as the remains of the wars and the remnants that were ruined by the nuclear, etc. In a word, in the resource limited world, it is wise to utilize the land efficiently.

Although I mentioned the reasons above to support my view, I concede that in some cases, it is necessary to keep the old buildings, which have extraordinary significance to the nation. For example, the Forbidden City in Beijing represents the thousands of years' period when the people were under the administration of the emperors. Also, it represents the truth that with the guide of Chairman Mao, Chinese people pulled down the absolute monarchy and founded the new republic country. Furthermore, it represents the wisdom and the craftwork of the past people. In conclusion, it has a extraordinary significance to the Chinese people. Thus, it is necessary to preserve it.

To sum up, in the resource limited era, people should plan well with the land for the contemporary needs if the significance of the old buildings could be kept in other ways.

山涧风笛UID: 196557

As the time passing by, a large number of old buildings tend to be under the controversy discussion whether they should be remained or pulled down demolished 免得与下面的重复了 for the modern purposes. In my point of view, I basically agree with the author's opinion that the space taken by the old buildings should be left for the contemporary needs.

To begin with, in order to keep preservation of the past, there is also some other accesses other than remaining the huge old buildings. Notwithstanding that some old buildings represent the valuable record of the past of the society, which should not be forgotten by the nations, however, with the rapid progress of the technology, many instruments and means could be used to memorize the past, such as the books, records, photographs and video discs. All of them could be used as the reminder 可以用复数 for the significance of the past. Moreover, this kinds of record have a larger popular in that people around the world are able to get familiar with these human history without going to the original place where these old buildings located. Thus, these methods not only act as the reminder of the memorial moment of the past but also have the advantage to stretch out its popular.

In addition, the space of the earth is so limited that people should make the best use of it. It is known to all that with the explosion of the population, the resource of the earth is becoming less and less, 不准确, 应该是人均资源/可利用资源越来越少, 或者直接用land resource越来越少 including the resource of land. The space for people to live is getting smaller and smaller还是不准确, 是人们pursue越来越大的居住/工作面积,而使得用地紧张 , which results the height of apartment higher and higher. In the mainly cities, people can see not many trees and grass but a lot of skyscrapers; in the rural district, a large area of arable land gives room to buildings. Under this situation, it is necessary to utilize every square of area. Therefore, some of the old buildings are better to leave room to solve the short of the land resource. Such as the remains of the wars and the remnants that were ruined by the nuclear, etc. In a word, in the resource limited world可以说土地是一种exhaustible resource, "limited"用得太多了, it is wise to utilize the land efficiently.

Although I mentioned the reasons above to support my view, I concede that in some cases, it is necessary to keep the old buildings, which have extraordinary significance to the nation. For example, the Forbidden City in Beijing represents the thousands of years' period when the people were under the administration of the emperors. Also, it represents the truth that with the guide of Chairman Mao, Chinese people pulled down 重复用词 the absolute monarchy and founded the new republic country. Furthermore, it represents the wisdom and the craftwork of the past people. In conclusion, it has a extraordinary significance 又是一个重复用词! to the Chinese people. Thus, it is necessary to preserve it. 我觉得这个例子还可以,但后半部分的说法并不好.

To sum up, in the resource limited 用natural/land resource好些, 因为还有human resource ;) , 换一个词吧shrinked/, 而且resource limited还有可能有歧义 era, people should plan well with the land for the contemporary needs if the significance of the old buildings could be kept in other ways.

思路还算清晰,但用词太重复了!
加油！！！

neverflyUID: 166610

No.1  ISSUE26 是否保留旧的建筑　快了！求拍必回
26. Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.
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As the time passing by, a large number of old buildings tend to be under the controversy discussion whether they should be remained or pulled down for the modern purposes. In my point of view, I basically agree with the author's opinion that the space taken by the old buildings should be left for the contemporary needs. basic agree后面似乎应该有些其他的东西，比如however, in the field of 之类的

保存过去的其他途径
To begin with, in order to keep preservation of the past, there is also some other accesses other 两个otherthan remaining the huge old buildings. Notwithstanding that some old buildings represent the valuable record of the past of the society, which should not be forgotten by the nations, however, with the rapid progress of the technology, many instruments and means could be used to memorize the past, such as the books, records, photographs and video discs. All of them could be used as the reminder for the significance of the past. Moreover, this kinds of record have a larger popular in that people around the world are able to get familiar with these human history without going to the original place where these old buildings located. Thus, these methods not only act as the reminder of the memorial moment of the past but also have the advantage to stretch out its popularpopularity?.

space有限，应该充分利用
In addition, the space of the earth is so limited that people should make the best use of it.主题句最好和building联系起来 It is known to all that with the explosion of the population, the resource of the earth is becoming less and less, including the resource of land. The space for people to live is getting smaller and smaller, which results the height of apartment higher and higher. In the mainly cities, people can see not many trees and grass but a lot of skyscrapers; in the rural district, a large area of arable land gives room to buildings. Under this situation, it is necessary to utilize every square of area. Therefore, some of the old buildings are better to leave room to solve the short of the land resource. Such as the remains of the wars and the remnants that were ruined by the nuclear, etc. In a word, in the resource limited world, it is wise to utilize the land efficiently.

Although I mentioned the reasons above to support my view, I concede that in some cases, it is necessary to keep thethe改成some如何？ old buildings, which have extraordinary significance to the nation. For example, the Forbidden City in Beijing represents the thousands of years' period when the people were under the administration of the emperors. Also, it represents the truth that with the guide of Chairman Mao故宫和毛主席没关系把。是不是天安门？, Chinese people pulled down the absoluteabsolute搭配有点奇怪 monarchy and founded the new republic country. Furthermore, it represents the wisdom and the craftwork of the past people. In conclusion, it has a extraordinary significance to the Chinese people. Thus, it is necessary to preserve it.

To sum up, in the resource limited era, people should plan well with the land for the contemporary needs if the significance of the old buildings could be kept in other ways.significance could be kept—似乎不太协调。而且总结的时候第四段的内容也没有论及

深谷幽兰UID: 196550

26. Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.
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As the time passing by, a large number of old buildings tend to be under the controversy discussion whether they should be remained or pulled down demolished for the modern purposes. In my point of view, I basically agree with the author's opinion that the space taken by the some old buildings should be left for the contemporary needs but several that possess outstanding significance  should be preserved.

To begin with, in order to keep preservation of the past, there is also some other accesses approaches other thanbesides remaining the huge old buildings. Notwithstanding that some old buildings represent the valuable record of the past of the society, which should not be forgotten by the nations, however, with the rapid progress of the technology, many instruments and means could be used to memorize the past, such as the books, records, photographs and video discs. All of them could be used as the reminder remindersfor the significance of the past. Moreover, this kinds of record have a larger popular in that people around the world are able to get familiar with these human history without going to the original place where these old buildings located. Thus, these methods not only act as the reminder of the memorial moment of the past but also have the advantage to stretch out its popular popularity.

In addition, the space of the earth is so limited that people should make the best use of it as well as the land that is taken by the old buildings . It is known to all that with the explosion of the population, the resource of the earth the average resource that can be utilized by the human beings is becoming less and less, including the resource of land. The space for people to live is getting smaller and smaller, which results the height of apartment higher and higher. Simultanteously, it is a trend that people are pursuing broader and broader residence and offices ceaselessly,which deteriorates the condition. In the mainly cities, people can see not many trees and grass but a lot of skyscrapers; in the rural district, a large area of arable land gives room to buildings. Under this situation, it is necessary to utilize every square of area. Therefore, some of the old buildings are better to leave room to solve the short of the land resource. Such as the remains of the wars and the remnants that were ruined by the nuclear, etc. In a word, in the resource limited finite world, it is wise to utilize the land efficiently.

Although I mentioned the reasons above to support my view, I concede that in some cases, it is necessary to keep the old buildings, which have extraordinary significance to the nation. For example, the Forbidden City in Beijing represents the thousands of years' period when the people were under the administration of the emperors. Also, it Tian'anmen Square--part of the Forbidden City, represents the truth that with the guide of Chairman Mao, Chinese people pulled down the absolute monarchy and founded the new republic country. Furthermore, it represents the wisdom and the craftwork of the past people. In conclusion, it has a extraordinary significance to the Chinese people. Thus, it is necessary to preserve it.

To sum up, in the resource limited era, people should plan well with the land for the contemporary needs if the significance of the old buildings could be kept in other ways.
结尾总是不知怎么写比较好,一看时间不够了就乱写一通 :(